please....just say sorry
Arrrrrrgh I hit my knee on a metal bed post any way I made a new fiction and this time an idea just pop into my head as I was listening to 'dear friends' *starts crying uncontrollably*
Zoro: *sweat drop*Something's she added to this are a couple of new characters more will be explained about them as the story continues
ME: and yes they're still on Jurassic park isle de murder no.2……wait what, this isn't Jurassic park! Oh yeah….I mean grand line!!!
Zoro: sort out your priorities already!!!
Sum: Luffy has a secret, and who is this red headed girl who knows it and what's with summary, it sucks may soon have parings I haven't decided whoxwho parings yet also i changed da name at da second last min
"Talking"
'Thinking'
'Inner'
DISCLAIMER: nuuuuuuooooo why don't I own even a cookie *sobs in a corner*
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I come in many pieces of the future (chapter 1)
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"AHHHHHHH" screamed Luffy as he got flunged into a wall "what the hell are you?!?" "This guy…..he's beating him like he was a pancake mix!!!" all the words were blurred together all he could he hear was 'you're useless, weak and to top it off you killed her!!!" and every thing started going black as he felt some thing price through his heart…………………………………………………..
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"FAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATHEEEEEEEEER!!!!"
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The Thousand Sunny was heading to a new island and Luffy looked at his newest official nakama from his spot on the head for he was asleep behind him lying down on the railing (sounds like a familiar tree Na?) the red head, who has recently run out of hair dye, lazily opened his ruby eyes "hey Karou what island is that" Karou looked past Luffy and towards the island "loci isle it's famous for it's time ruins it's pretty cool wanna check it out?" he said as he sat up "YEAH!!" rising his arms in the air. "Thought so" now fully awake he jumped down on Zoro "GAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHH" and now we see him clutching the victim of his jump "tehe" "you……have the same thinking pattern as Luffy, teme" "yeah but I'm smarter than him so you can't do a thing, tree-man" "damn you!" and with that he walked away over to Nami "Nami-san I know a great place to dock the ship at" "hontou (-1- ) where at?" "At the cape to the north like ummm right side of the island yeah that's sounds about right" "okay every one…"
Now about Karou he uses three swords like Zoro two of his swords are oni swords and one reversed blade his fringe is really messed up and the rest of his hair is combed nicely downwards his reversed blade is on the side of his hip and the oni swords, one on his lower back horizontally and one on his back at an angle, also a shoulder bag was on top of the lower back oni sword (-2- ) he is dressed with black long pants and boots and has a black cowboy hat on his head he also has a black trench coat and black leather gloves, and no shirt as he has a bandage over his chest, stomach and arms up to his elbows for the reason 'all my shirts are to tight and I look cooler like this'.
After they docked Merry (I'm too lazy to explain what happened on the ship in order to dock I can say it had lots of running into each other) they went into town to pick up supplies and check out the ruins. Luffy was with Karou, Nami and Zoro "cause you have the worst sense of direction to exist to this day" "damn you Karou shut up" "sure you say that on the out side but deep down you love me just like how Luffy-san loves me na? Roronoa-kun?" "Stop calling me that!" "No Roronoa-kun"……as those two fought Sanji was with Robin and Chopper as Usopp got scared to get off the ship because of the time ruins story Karou told them about.
Flash back
Karou sat on the railing after they docked "hey there's legend about this island I just remembered it now"
"Ohhh tell us" said Chopper with stars in his eyes
"Ok listen up" every nodded as listened to Karou "from what I heard a few years ago from this island a fisherman told me the ruins has a curse kinda thing"
"What kind of curse?" asked Nami
"Well let me tell you it goes like this:
'Who ever touches the stone a curse of past and future mix.
And a new bond is formed.
And a life anew'
What the heck it all means I have no idea but from what I heard some guy touched the stone and a few months later he died saying 'the time, the sands of time are real the Drakra(-3- ) it's after me' he then died"
Usopp then spoke up after a few minutes "y-y-y-you don't t-t-t-t-think that's real do you" after a minute silence Karou said "I do, the sands of time are real and Drakra is the time guardian" Zoro then said "how do you know, what legend is that from?"
"WHO cares let's go!!!!" then Luffy grabbed Karou's and Zoro's hand and ran into town
End of flash back
As they regrouped at Merry they (as in Karou) knocked Usopp out cold and they dragged his out cold body to the ruins (note: Usopp was knocked out with a hammer which Karou was conveniently carrying for the reason "I know, I need something convincing to bring him along for the ride and this'll will do") as Usopp woke up he saw he was in the ruins "WHAAAAAAHHAHAHAHAA WHY DID YOU BRING ME HERE" Zoro looked at him "hey Karou maybe the hammer was going to far" "and what do you recommend Zoro-san?" Usopp relived at Zoro's comment "a sledge hammer" "GAH he's against me curse you Zoro teme baka Zoro" Usopp starts hitting Zoro with his hand "ah long-nose-kun is still full of energy even after being knocked out" "how does he do that?" "Who knows" said Luffy, Brooke, Franky, Sanji, Nami and Chopper in union.
As they looked at ruins something caught Karou's eye
"Hey did any one see that spark?"
"What spark Oni-san?" said Robin glancing over shoulder to see Karou
"The white timely spark tha- AHHH BRIGHT LIGHT it burns!!!!"
There was a bright flash after a few minutes it died down Karou uncovered his eyes to see a 17 year old boy 'what the hell' everyone gets ready to attack as the smoke starts fade more the boy shouts "I've found you I knew these ruins would take me to you alright!" "what" was all they could say………..as the smoke lifted it showed a boy with bangs of red and his hair was black with red spikes going backwards he had a dragon tattoo under his left eye and wore an black trench coat with a huge collar and black boots, pants and sleeveless shirt which was tight and the lower half was cut off (his clothes are skin tight except the coat of coarse) he had leather gloves (his pants are leather too) with fingers exposed (like ninja gloves from Naruto) and to finish it of he had one of those dog tag things with his name on it he had quite a physical resemblance to Luffy, famine but muscular (-4- ).
"W-who are you?" asked Nami startled
"Me? I'm-"
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And there we have it a cliffy tell me if I should continue or not I won't post a new chapter until I get hmmmm lets see….10 reviews please………I'm begging you (on hands and knees) any way notes I have lots of em most of the time anyway
-1- I don't know Japanese well so I'm trying my best here
-2- I have photo bucket account now all I need to do now is get a scanner so I can post up images of these characters I make up I use them in comics I draw and no they'll never come out as long as I live if possible but I'll make my (crappie) computer images up on public so no will ever see them ha!
-3- I'm using stuff from prince of Persia trilogy
-4- What Luffy looks like a girl some times it's sorta cute but yeah!!! Also Zoro looks like tree thusly why I called him 'tree' Karou calls him that as well
Well r&r people plz!!!!!! And sorry for making first chapters (in all my fictions) short I'll make them longer if requested and people like it. Also I edited this a couple of times like 20 times vista doesn't like me and I had to redo my art assessment (take some pity on me please) and I hope u all like this fiction even though the first chapter sucked
Zoro: everything you write sucks
CD: marimo!!
Sanji: how dare you hurt Crystal-chwan's feeling's teme!!!
Zoro: so what I hurt her feeling's!!!!*starts fighting with Sanji*
Cd: sooooo ummm here's a preview for da next chapter we go back to the very beginning that's right how they all met up and all might skip a few arcs' depending on YOU!!!!
Preview-
A girl with extremely long red hair and torn clothes drifted among the ocean on some wood with a blue/green metal plated kitsune fox they drifted till they reached a boat with a boy……………………….."Why doesn't any one like me why do they detest me………why……"……………. "Nakama I've never had Nakama" "well today I'm your first friend and Nakama" "Really?" "Yep!"…………..
End
Cd: hmmm a character didn't appear in this chapter but she play's a vital role. Also this preview is mixed up……..
Zoro: you don't say……..