SETTING: KATY AND MAX`S HOME

LOREN MELISSA SPENCER AND KATY WERE IN KATY`S PERSONAL DANCE ROOM INSIDE HER HOUSE KATY MELISSA AND SPENCER LOREN`S SISTER WAS HELPING LOREN FOR HER AUDITIONS IT`S A PLAY BUT THE GIRLS TOTALLY THOUGHT LOREN HAD THIS IN THE BAG WITH HER MUSIC TALENT HER VOICE IS ABSULUTLEY AMAZING AND WITH HER DANCING LOREN HAS DONE HIP HOP FOR 2 YEARS AND BALLAIE FOR 12 LOLREN IS VERY GIFTED

KATY-HONEY LET`S TAKE A BREAK I KNOW KELLY WANT YOU TO WORK ON THOSE SONGS

LOREN-BUT I ALREADY GOT 4 SONGS I WANT TO PLAY FOR MY CONCERT ON THURSDAY AND I AM SO EXITED AND A LITTLE SCARED BCAUSE THIS IS MY FIRST CONCERT AND WHAT IF MARS WAS JUST AN ON HIT WONDER AND NO ONE LIKES MY MUSIC AND I WILL NEVER BE ABLE TO MAKE IT TO THE BIG TIME

KATY-STOP IT LOREN NOW YOU ARE DISAPPOINTING ME

LOREN-SEE THAT`S WHAT I WAS SCARED OF

KATY-NO I AM DISAPPOINTED IN YOU BECAUSE WE BELIVE IN YOU AND YOU DONT

SPENCER-YEAH KATY IS RIGHT ONC AGAIN IT`S ALMOST SCARY BUT ANYWAY YOU ARE LIKE CRAZY TALENTED -

MELISSA-AND I AM SO MAD AT YOU YOU WON`T SHOW THE WORLD WHAT LOREN TATE HAS IT`S A REASON YOU HAVE OVER 20 THOUSAND LIKES AND PEOPLE ADDING YOU AND SO MANY TWITTER FOLLOWERS NOW YOUR AMAZING THE ONLY WAY YOU WILL MAKE IT IS IF YOU BELIVE IN YOURSELF GOT IT

LOREN-GOT IT

KATY-MAKE YOUR DREAMS BECOME A REALITY SWETTY

LOREN-THANK YOU GUYS,NOW LET`S TAKE A BREAK WHAT DO YOU GUYS SAY

SETTING: KELLY`S APARTMENT

KELLY-JAKE I DON`T FEEL TO COMFORTABLE DOING THIS

JAKE-OKAY WELL WE CAN SWITCH POSITIONS IF YOU LIKE WILL THAT MAKE IT BETTER

KELLY-NO IT`S NOT THE POSITIONS AT ALL TRUST ME IT`S JUST THAT ...WELL WHAT W ARE DOING RIGHT NOW

JAKE-I THOUGHT YOU LIKED IT (GETTING A LITTLE UPSET) BUT-

KELLY-NO IT`S NOT THAT EITHER IT`S JUST THAT WE ARE SNEAKING BEHIND TRACI`S BACK AND SHE`S YOUR WIFE AND MY EST FRIEND

JAKE-BUT WHAT SHE DOESN`T KNOW WON`T KILL HER

KELLY-BUT IT MIGHT JUST KILL ME OR WORSE US THINK ABOUT IT AND BESIDES I AM GOING TO NEW YORK AFTER LOREN`S CONCERT FOR A FEW DAYS

JAKE-...WHAT? WHY?

KELLY-BECAUSE JAKE I NEED TO SCRW MY HEAD BACK ON AND I AM HAVING SOME FAMIALY CRISEIZ BACK IN NW YOU KNOW WHAT I`AM SAYING

JAKE-YOUR LYING AND I KNOW IT

KELLY-AND HOW DO YOU KNOW THAT JAKE

JAKE-BECAUSE WELL LET`S SEE ... UM ... YOU DID THE WHOLE YOU KNOW WHAT I`AM SAYING

KELLY-DAMN YOU BUT I AM TAKING A SHOWER AND I WANT YOU GONE BY THE TIME I GET OUT

SETTING: TATE RESIDENT

TRENT-HONEY WHERE IS LOREN I HAVE A SUPRISE FOR HER

NORA-SHE`S OVER MAX AND KATY S HOUSE

TRENT-IS SPENCER OVER THERE TOO

NORA-YES SHE IS BUT WHAT IS THIS SUPRISE YOUR GIVING LOREN

TRENT-JUST SOMETHING SPECIAL FOR HER CONCERT TOMORROW I KNOW SHE WILL DO GREAT UT HER CONVIDENCE COULD USE A LITTLE BOOST BUT YOU WILL SEE VERY SHORTLY MY DEAR AND WITH THAT HE KISSED NORA ON THE CHECK THEN WENT INTO THE BACK YARD LEAVING NORA VERY VERY CURIOUS AS WHAT DOS HE HAS PLANNING NORA`S PHONE RINGING SHE WALKED TO THE TABLE TOP PICKED UP HER PHONE AND THERE WAS UNKNOWN CALLER SO SHE AWNSERED IT

PHONE CONVERSATION :

CALLER- HI BEAUTIFUL

NORA-WHO IS THIS

CALLER-YOU KNOW WHO IT IS BABBY DON`T TELL ME YOU FORGOT ABOUT ME ALREADY THAT REALLY MAKES ME SAD

NORA- YOUR SUCH AN ASS WHIPE NOW I THOUGHT I TOLD YOU TO LEAVE ME ALONE FOREVER I DON`T WANT ANY PROBLEMS DON`T CALL ME AGAIN GOOD BYE

CALLER-I WOULDN`T DO THAT IF I WERE YOU BUT I`LL SEE YOU IN A BIT HONEY GOTTA DASH

END OF COVO :

TRENT-WHO WAS THAT

NORA-JUST LOREN SHE SAID SHE AND SEPNCER ARE GONNA BE HERE IN A FEW HOURS IF THAT`S OKAY WITH YOU

TRENT-OH NO IT`S TERRIFIC BUT BABE I GOTTA RUN TO TH STORE REALLY QUICK BYE LOV YOU HE RAN OUT THE DOOR HAPPILY

SETTING: EDDIE`S PENT HOUSE

4 HOURS LATER

LOREN AND EDDIE

LOREN AND EDDIE WERE MAKING OUT ON THE COUCH LOREN HAD HER LEGS CROSSED AROUND EDDIE`S TURRSO HER ARMS WRAPPED AROUND HIS NECK HIS HANDS RUBBING UP AND DOWN HER WAIST NOT BREAKING THERE INTENSE EDDIE GOT UP HIS HANDS MOVED DOWN TO HER LOWER BACK HE CARRIED HER TO HIS BED ROOM H ST HER DOWN ON THE BED STILL NOT BREAKING THERE KISS NOW WITH HIM HOVERING OVER HER WHILE KISSING IN BETWEEN THEY WORKED THERE WAY TO TAKE EACH OTHERS CLOTHES OFF EDDI BROKE THE KISS LOOKED INTO LOREN`S EYE`S FOR ANY SIGNS FOR HIM TO STOP BUT ALL THAT WAS THERE WAS CARING,LOVING PASSION THAT TOLD HIM TO PLEASE CONTINUE HE REACHED OVER TO HIS DRESSER AND GRABBED A CONDOM WHEN LOREN FINALLY LOOKED DOWN SHE SEES EDDIE`S GIANT MAN-HOOD HER EYES LITERALLY POPPED OUT HR EYE SOCKETS AND YOU KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT

A COUPLE OF ROUNDS LATER :
 LOREN AND EDDIE WERE NOW HALF DRESSED UNDER THE COVERS EDDIE FELL A SLEEP SO TIRED AND LOREN WAS JUST WIDE AWAKE SHE COULDN`T GO TO SLEEP LOREN SNUCK OUT OF THE BED WITH OUT WAKING UP EDDIE LOREN THREW ONE OF EDDIE`S SHIRTS SH WENT DOWN STAIRS TOOK IN A DEEP BREATHE SHE SAT ON THE PIANO BENCH SH RELAXED HER HANDS THEN FINALLY STARTED PLAYING WHEN SHE WAS REALLY INTO THE GREAT MELODY AND LOST IN HER PLAYING SHE JUMPED UP SHE WAS SCARED TO DEATH BY THE SOUND OF EDDIE`S VOICE DIDN`T RELISE EDDIE WAS EVEN WOKE

EDDIE-HEY BABE WHY ARE YOU STIL AWAKE YOUR CONCER IS LIKE IN 14 HOURS YOU SHOULD GET SOME SHUT EYE

LORN-I KNOW BUT IT IS ALOT ON MY MIND AND DID YOU CALL IT OFF WITH CHLOE YET

EDDIE- I DID IN FACT DID YESTERDAY

LOREN-GOOD BECAUSE BABY I REALLY DON`T WANNA SNEAK AROUND ANYMORE

EDDIE-I KNOW BUT IT MIGHT BE TOO SOON

LOREN-ARE FAMIALY ALREADY KNOWS SO WHY NOT?

EDDIE-IT`S NOT A GOOD IDEA

LOREN-WHAT`S NOT A GOOD IDEA TELL ME EDDIE DID YOU OR DID YOU NOT TELL CHLOE ABOUT THIS THING BETWEEN US OR ANYON FOR THAT MATTER MAX,KATY,OR EVEN JAKE

EDDIE-NO I DIDN`TBUT LOOK AT IT THIS WAY -

LOREN-YOU KNOW WHAT IT`S FINE IT`S GREAT BUT UM..DON`T HOLD YOUR BREATHE WE ARE BEST FRIENDS FRINDS OR PEOPLE FOR THAT MATTER LIKE US SHOULD NEVER GO OUT SO THIS NIGHT BETWEEN ME AND YOU WAS INCREDIBLE IT WAS GREAT BUT THIS IS NEVER GONNA WORK OUT

EDDIE-BUT BABE WE WILL JUST KEEP IT LOW A LITTLE WHILE LONGER

LOREN-DON`T CALL ME BABE I AINT MAD AT YOU BE LIVE ME WE ARE JUST BEST FRIENDS AND THAT`S ALL SO TOMORROW WE ARE FRIENDS I HOPE YOU WILL BE ABLE TO MAKE IT THOUGH BUT HEY I AM GONNA GO TAKE A SHOWER AND GET`S SOME CLOTHES ON AND GET OUT YOUR ALREADY MESSED UP HAIR LOREN RAN UP THE STAIRS DIDN`T SEEM ANGRY AT ALL

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