Uh, this is another school
writing assignment. This time, I had to write a short (oops.) story
about someone who ''did something that wasn't very good, and then got
caught doing it.'' or something like that. Their example was a
practical joke, but I couldn't think of one for Jack, so I left the
''bad thing'' he did open. Meaning, it was never said what he did. My
writing assignment was a lesson on how it's boring when you don't say
what people are thinking.
i.e. He did this, they saw him, he
stopped... etc. SO I had to write it like that and then add thinking
and dialouge in. i.e. He did that without shame, they saw him and
hated it, he stopped regretfully. Those are just examples. and
really, it's not just thoughts and dialouge, ya gotts'ta have a point
of view for everyone. I'm only posting my idea WITH thoughts, but
just imagine how boring it would be if there were no italics or
quotation marks. Yeah. it's sort of humorous at the end
Disclaimer:
I don't own stargate or SG1. i own this assignment. plagarism is
looked down apon. blahblahblah. written as-is except for an ad-lib on
a name... I said ''Jack'' far too much.Jack had
never been a good boy. But this time, I'm taking it too far, Jack
thought.
"Disobeying orders is always easier than obeying
them," was his personal mantra. He disobeyed anyway, no matter
how hard he tried not to. Granted, I usually end up saving the
world by defying the General, but it doesn't matter. General
Hammond always kept a close watch on Jack.When asked how far he would
tolerate Colonel O'Neill, the general said, "I allow a couple of
mistakes and slightly disrespectful jokes, but ignoring the rule book
completely? That's a no-no." When the repeat offender Jack got
caught with his disobedience in action, the general rightfully
threatened to court-martial him. Will it stop him next time, or will
he defy Air Force laws just to get what he wants? Only Jack's
thoughts will tell. "I know what I did was wrong, but I think
the rule book is wrong too! A couple of stupid laws aren't gonna
change unless someone defies them. But I've learned from my mistakes
and I thank Hammond for being a softie on my reprimandations. He
knows we all make mistakes. And some aren't willing to pay for them.
But, no matter how much I want to, I will try not to break this rule
again." Getting off his high horse and going back to his
regular, sarcastic self, he continued with, "Although, I really
think I should. I mean, come on! General Hammond ain't gonna
court-martial me! He needs me too much! I've retired before, what was
it? FIVE TIMES? HE wanted me back!"
After
that, Air Force Officials wrapped this... weird... report to put on
his personal file.
And the end. stargateSG147 written for school on May
31st, 2006
What do ya'll
think he did?
