The Petal Burg Invasion redone

Okay here's the catch reviews will write the stories type in the reviews with an idea to go in the story this is to make it better since my version failed (neopets involved and I don't own neopets or Pokémon)

Here's the main story Ash wakes up one morning noticing all the Pokémon in the world the May calls telling him to come over when he goes to the kitchen he sees a green Lupe in army fatigues and a red beret then he knows its his older brother.