This is my re-write of my first story It will be different. Also it will make 100% more sense then the last one.
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will be a Pertemis
God of Tides, Heroes, Loyalty, swordsmanship, Destruction,and Time is to long of a title so yeah.
But here you go
Chapter One
Percy pov
I was standing in the throne room after the Second Giant War. We won barely we had so many losses so many Romans and Greeks died fighting. Including my Wise girl she was killed by Gaia her self.
Flashback
I sliced through another hellhound and the ground started to shake. I looked around for Annabeth but she wasn't anywere in sight. Where could of she gone? She was supposed to stay by me! Then there was a scream the made the whole Battlefeild go quiet.
Flying backwards was a girl with blonde hair with and earth spear in her chest. It took me only a second to know it was Annabeth. She flew backwards and landed and my feet. I dropped to my knees beside her and clutched her hand. "Percy I lo-Lo-love you ple-plea-please kill that e-ea-earth bitch for me," she choked out.
I kissed her forhead and I stared into her beautiful grey eyes. "No Wise Girl your going to be there and help me do it! Just hold on please" I cried. "I'll always b-b-be with you seaweed b-brain." She said barely in a whisper. She closed her eyes and her hand went limp in mine.
I got up clutching on to riptide tears running down my face. Athena dropped to her knees and cried. The Athena siblings dropped there weapons and cried. The rest of the 7 all by me were looking at me for my for MY order to what to do.
"SHE DIDNT DIE FOR US TO GIVE UP!" I yelled. "FOR ANNABETH!" I screamed running forward. Any monster that got in my path was killed before they even could land a blow on me. I was headed right for the queen of dirt her self. But I was blocked by rows and rows of monsters.
I suddenly got an idea. I whistled as loud as I could hoping he could here me. I killed two more hell hounds and the Black Pegasus landed on a cyclops and pounded it with its hooves till it died.
"Nice one blackjack!"
"Thanks boss got any sugar cubes?" I laughed as I mounted him. "No but if you get me to the earth lady Ill give you a bucket full,"
"You got it boss one dear Primordial goddess coming up!"
With that he flew off at a super fast speed. We made a path right towards her killing anything that got in my way. She saw us a formed a spear of dirt and threw it at me. I quickly leaned backwards as I saw the spear pass above me. I leaned back up and raised Riptide.
She growled at me and formed a sword out of the earth and started twirling it. I let out a battle cry and everything seemed to go in slow motion. I saw Jason protecting an unconscious Piper. Hazel was popping up from under ground. Frank was a rhino smashing into hellhounds. Leo was spinning in a circle and shooting fire from his hands.
I swung Riptide at her and she put her sword up in defence. To both of our shocks her blade crumbled as I hit it. Must of hit it hard. I spun Riptide in my hand and attacked before she could make a new weapon. It seemed as the battle feild was watching as a mere demigod be headed Gaia.
I jabbed Riptide down her body so she couldn't reform and slid off of Blackjack. I grabed one of the knives off of his saddle and walked over to her head. I twirled the small blade in my hand.
When I reached her head I clitched it so hard my knuckles turned white. "THIS IS FOR ANNABETH!" I screamed as I brought the dagger down on her head.
The demigods cheered and quickly killed the rest of the monsters.
Present
I was broke from my thoughts as my name was called. I walked into the middle of the thrown room and bowed to Zeus then my father. "Perseus we have all decided that you were worthy of not only being a god but for being an Olympian also do you accept?"
I looked back at my friends. Jason gave me a thumbs up, Parker and Hazel gave me smiles, Frank nodded and smiled passing Leo 20 books, Leo had a bright smile basically telling me to except.
I turned around from my friends and said," I accept your offer Uncle" Then all the gods started chanting Ancient Greek and a white bean shot out and hit me in the cheats. I stumbled backwards and dropped to my knees.
My insides were burning and I realized that my blood was turning into golden ichor. The blood of the gods. The pain soon became to much and I blacked out.
I woke up around 20 minutes later. I got to my feet with help from my father. The fates appered and said in unison, " All hail Perseus Jackson God of- tides, heroes, swordsmanship, loyalty, destruction, and time. His symbol of power will be a trident. His domains are- the sea shared with his father, the two demigod camps, and the time vortex!" Then they flashed out.
Everyone cheered and chanted my titles. My thrown appered next to my fathers. It was white with sea green trim. Also it had my adventures and the two great prophesy I was in engraved in gold. My symbol which I guess was my symbol was a wave and a building falling on it was where my back would be resting.
I took a deep breath and walked towards my thrown. As I got closer I grew to my godly height and sat down. "You will need someone to train you in your godly powers that will be hmm Artemis. Make sure he doesn't slack," Zeus said.
I looked over to Artemis who was right across from me on the other side of thrones. Great. "I will give you a week nephew since you have lost the one you hold most dear,"Zeus continued.
"Well what are we waiting for! Let's Party!" Apollo exclaimed. Everyone cheered and instantly there was music a table of food and drinks, the demigods were all put in nice cloths, and the gods flashed them on.
"So dad do I get s temple now?" I asked. "Yes it should be done by after the party," he informed me.
I ended up at a table in the back corner. I was watching all the demigods having fun and everyone dancing. I remembered that being me a couple years ago. "Hey Percy ever feel the urge you know where to find me," Aphrodite said walking by.
"Please that's the last thing we need," Artemis said walking up," take the only man I respect and turn him into a sex slave." I chuckled a little bit and Artemis sat down. I looked at her and I saw she wasn't in her usual 12 year old form. She was in her 20 year old form.
Now I could actually see how beautiful she really was. Her auburn hair has long and thick running down her back. Her eyes shining. Her face un describable beautiful in every way. Her dress showing off her curves and long smooth legs. Her breast were c cup which surprised me.
she didn't se me check her out because I slowed down time for her. So it looks like I looked at her sparkling silver dress she was wearing. "Nice dress," I stated realizing the slow time.
She smiled and answered, " Thank you Perseus. I came to talk to you about your training. One week from today you will begin. Also I'm not very happy about having to train you." I chuckled lightly and said," Yeah man hating goddess training a male to use his powers I'll be dead nby the end of the week!" Under my breath I muttered," And I would be glad to be".
Her face darkened and I think she heard me. "Perseus I know what it is like to loose someone you cared about be strong please. I know how broken you are in the inside," she stated. I sighed and put my head in my hands. "I don't know how I'm going to live forever with out her," I replied.
"There are plenty of gods here that would die to have you Perseus. One day you'll fall for one of them. Now I have to help my drunk of a brother from fighting Ares," Artemis said getting up. When she got out of ear shot I muttered "please stay don't leave me."
After a while I got up and aske Hermes who wasn't drunk yet to take me to my temple. He gladly did saying Blackjack would be in the stables in the moring. I thanked him and found my bedroom. I only knew it was my bedroom because of the picture of Annabeth on the bedside table.
I kicked my shoes off and fell into my bed. I pulled the covers over my body. I then stared at Annabeths pictures with silent tears running down my face till I fell asleep.
THERES CHAPTER ONE HOPE YOU LIKE IT
