Okay….so the thing is that I will stop the Catedrales because is to long and pretty much I lost interest. I will try my luck with this one and hope ling isn't longer than the last one.
Blaaa= normal speech
Blaaa= hollow speech or inner
Prologue
Is a dark night on the ninja village. The only one outside are shinobis on patrol. But the villagers were awake during the middle of the night. They were uneasy by the scream of an unknown creature. Those scream were full or hate as well sadness. Those disturbing sounds came form a building that was on the top of the hokage monument. In side of the building was a group of ninjas that was watching a white armor creature seal inside of a barrage. The creature wasn't alone. A woman with blond hair and amber color eye was fighting the beast. She was beat up pretty bad. Then in the balcony a woman with pink color hair, emerald color eyes, wearing blue jumpsuit and a grey color vest says.
"This is too much to naruto. We should stop."
"I'm sorry sakuya. But if we stop now the hollow will take over naruto's body." Says a elder man.
"I know but look at tsunade, lord jiraya and you lord hokage." She then looks at three person's condition. They were almost at point of fainting. The hokage says.
"I know but is too late now. If we stop now….."
The rosette interrupts." I know. He will be taking by his inner hollow. But I don't want this torture to continue."
"I know how you feel. But if we don't act now those moment of berserk will be more frequents. That will enough excuses for the council to give the order to execute him."
She angry says." Bastard! They don't have a heart to help a little boy. But they eagerly will give the order to kill it." She was full of rage. But that moment tsunade says.
"Is your turn now sakuya!"
"I'm on it." Both woman change places with each others, ones she is inside she thinks. "(Don't worry naruto. I will protect you just like I promise to your mother, kushina.)
Inside of naruto mind.
His landscape was like a warzone. Building in ruins, the sky cover in dark clouds, in there two persons were fighting. One of them was a blond man around eighteen, with whisker mark checks, with a black long sleeves t-shirt, with a zip on the middle and a hood attach to it, he also have a long orange coat with short sleeves and black flames on the edge of the sleeves and coat, he also have a black hakama and black shinobi sandals.
The other was identical to him. But his skin and hair was white as well his cloths, but his coat was black and the flames were white. His eye weren't blue but yellow and black. He says to him.
"You're quiet the fighter. That will make this victory sweeter." He start to laugh like a maniac
"You're wrong if you think I will let you."
He charges at him with a katana. But he pulls his and stops the blow. Both sword collide and struggle to gain terrain. Both of them break apart. His hollow self says.
"You're weak."
"No I'm not." He says defensibly.
"Yes you are. You let a little shit head beat you all the time."
"You think I enjoy that. But no matter what I do. He always wins."
"And that's why I deserve to ruler over the body!"
He in shock asks. "What do you mean?"
"Easy. Ones I defeat you. I will absorb you. Then this body will be mine and all those bitches will suffer." He then let his maniac laugh out.
Back to reality
Sakuya was avoiding the attacks of the hollow. He has a sword that look like a gigantic kunai that was split in half. The upper part was sharp while the lower wasn't. Both of them were tire. With her remaining strength says.
"You bastard live him alone!"
She then throws a punch to him. But the creature was about to stab her.
Back in naruto mind.
Both of them were ready to finish the battle, charge at each other. But in that moment sakuya hit the hollow on the faces. She barely avoids the strike. But the blade manages to leave a scar on the upper parts of her left breast. She only stares at the creature. But inside of the creature mind. Both swordsmen have given the final blow to each others. Hollow naruto have the sword nail in his heart, while naruto manage to avoid the attack by letting it hit his right shoulder. Then the hollow naruto was been absorb. But before his been absorbed completely he says.
"You won. But don't think this will change anything. You're not hollow, but netter human and as soonest they learn the truth you will be alone again. And then I will be back and take what's mine."
Then his inner hollow was absorbed. But he says. "Even if I end like that, I won't lose to you." Then everything turns dark. In back the real world. The hollow creature was falling apart, form the inside a seven year naruto falls to the ground. Sakuya come closes to him and asks.
"Are you okay naruto?"
"I'm…sorry for that scar." The rosette only smile at him. The hokage says." Tsunade, sakuya take naruto to the hospital to treat what ever wound he has."
Then both woman toke the boy to the hospital.
So here the first chapter of my new fict. I like to think that sakura's mother is nice to naruto. Oh and I don't remember were I hear the name of sakuya. If someone know please tell me. And can someone tell me if this is the right translation of "shadow demon sword" ( kage youkai no sessha) I will appreciate
