Big Time Crush
Hey everyone! i thought i would write my first fanfiction for you guys! Sorry if it sucks im new at this...but enough of me talking it is time for the story! :)
I have a secret...well a secret crush anyway. Hey im james and i have a crush on a cute latino named Carlos. I wish i could tell him but everytime i try to i chicken out, im just afraid he will hate me. But today is the day i tell carlos the truth!
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James was sitting in his room waiting for carlos get home just when he heard the door slam shut. James looked in the mirror one last time to make sure he looked amazing and left the room to go see carlos, "Hey carlos could i talk to you for a second?" James asked carlos. The happy latino Replyed "Sure" and with that they left and walked to james's bedroom. James sat down on his bed and sighed it was time to come out and tell carlos...this is it, its time. "Um Carlos i have something to tell you and i don't know how you will take it" James started. "OMG! JAMES YOUR NOT DYING ARE YOU? Carlos yelled but james just chuckled "Haha no carlos im not dying but i wanted to tell you that...i have a huge crush on you. At that moment james looked into carlos's eyes and saw carlos coming super close to his face with his lips puckered, James smiled and leaned in to kiss the cute raven haired boy. "James i have a huge crush on you to, i been wanting to tell you but i was afraid you was going to hate me" Carlos told james with tears forming in his eyes. "Carlos we are best friends i could never hate you" james said as he wiped the tears that fell from carlos's big brown eyes "I love you james" Carlos said as he smiled so big it hurt, "I love you too carlos" james told his lover. And they both kissed again and made love losing there virginy to each other. That was the best night of james's and carlos's Life.
Ok i know that sucks but i could use some feedback. Thanks guys!