Disclaimer: I do not own Divergent! I wish…but sadly I do not.
Tris's P.O.V
Have you ever had that moment that changed your life forever? The moment that I chose Dauntless is what changed me. The next time to change me was jumping onto the roof and staring into his grey stone eyes, peering into our very souls. It intrigued me. Then he spoke with a voice as rough as a rock but smooth none the less.
"My name is Eric," he stated now catching my eye, "and I am one of the dauntless leaders. If you want to get into Dauntless you must first jump into this hole." Jump? Into that hole? That we have no idea is beneath?
"Is there water or something down there?" an erudite boy asks.
"You'll just have to see," Eric replies, his eyes glinting with mischief. Well, they wouldn't just kill us so maybe it is safe to jump…possibly.
"So who's first?" no one raises their hands, they just look around.
"Me." I reply without thinking. I mentally kick myself. Eric steps down and gestures for me to get up there. I take off my jacket and throw it at the boy who said, "Take it off…put it back on".
"Any day initiate," his voice quieter than when we first met him. With one last look into his eyes, I jump.
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