I do not own Bleach at all… if I did, stuff like this would be in the manga and anime not here

Ever since the first time I saw them, I knew. I wanted to be just like them. I wanted to be a part of them. (Yea… that's the summary… if you really want to know what it's about, then please read on ^.^)


I ran as fast as my legs would carry me which, due to growing exhaustion, wasn't very fast anymore. I knew that, any second now, my legs would fail me and I would fall prey to the creature's appetite, but I silently hoped that someone or something would help me if I kept going. I heard the creature's cry and ran faster (as if that was possible), tears welling up in my eyes. I didn't want to die. I was definitely too young. I could feel my legs trembling. I would drop any second now, but my internal voice (why did it sound like and angry German?) wouldn't let me give up. I heard the monster screech again and I fell in the middle of a playground, causing a cloud of dust to fly up and hide the creature. It took me a second to realize that I couldn't have made so much dust fly up.

When the dust settled I saw three kids, all dressed weirdly, in front of the huge creature, who had a cracked mask now. They were obviously older than me and they looked so… cool. I knew once I saw them. Something in me just sparked to life. I wanted to be just like them. I wanted to be a part of their group.

"You know," the blue haired boy in the middle said, snapping me out of my thoughts, "if you hadn't run away, it probably wouldn't have even noticed you." The creature howled again, about to strike at these new obstacles. The boy took out a gun from the inside of his jacket and blew its head off, making it disintegrate into thin air. "Are you okay?" he asked, holding out a hand for me.

"Uh huh," I said, my face getting slightly hotter when I took his hand. A blue light shone in my eyes and I felt my senses dull. I faintly heard one of the other boys speak.

"What did you do?"

"Nothin! I just touched his hand."

"His spirit energy is going haywire."

"What should we do?"

"He'll just be in danger if we leave him here. Best thing we can do is take him home."

"Hey kid, where do you live?" I tried to speak, but no sound would come out (not that I could even remember my address at that point).

"I guess we'll just have to stay with him until his energy dies down." My senses dulled further and I couldn't even hear them anymore. I felt my vision fade and fell into unconsciousness.

When I woke up, the three boys were gone. I didn't know how, but I knew, I sensed, that they were long gone by now. They were already far away.


So that's the first part of my story ^-^

I'll have the second chapter up soon cus I think its crap that this is all the you guys have to read but I felt that it would be way too long if I put in what I initially thought I would.

Please Review, I'd love to hear everyone's opinion. And if you're going to criticize then at least make it constructive. I don't really want (or need for that matter) to see mean comments about my writing. Also if I get anything wrong on the info for bleach or anything is unclear in the story, then please put it in a comment so I can make the right changes/explanations…