hey guys! so this is my first fanfiction so yes... i know this chapter is really short but the next is longer i promise! so tell me what you thank and i will be gratefull. im a newborn to this fanfiction stuff so constructive critism will be very helpfull for me. hope u like it!
disclaimer: sadly enough i dont own anything twilight :(...but a girl can dream cant she??eh,eh?
Chapter 1: Mrs. Cullen
As I looked into his eyes, all that mattered was him. A second ago I was barely aware of the minister and the audience before us, but now we could have been in Antarctica next to a polar bear and I would still be totally oblivious. The love we felt for each other was clearly evident as we looked deep into our eyes. I was somewhat pulled back to reality as Edward spoke.
"I do" his eyes smoldered taking my breath away.
"Do you Isabella Marie Swan take Edward Anthony Mason Cullen to be your lawfully wedded husband, to love and to hold, in sickness and in health till death do you part?"
"I do" I breathed. Edward smiled my favorite crooked grin as the minister finished.
"I now pronounce you husband and wife. You may now kiss your bride."
Edward pulled me into the most love filled kiss we have ever shared. His lips were ice cold on mine. After what felt like ten lifetimes, he pulled back and I could hear the applause the audience provided.
Our eyes hadn't left each other's once since I started walking down the petal coated isle in my beautiful dress. Edward looked breathtaking in his tux. I was amazed at myself for not tripping once, although I was not looking down at were my feet were going.
Now for the first time they parted and we looked out to the sea of people rising. We started down the aisle again. It was an amazing day in forks. It was cloudy, yet sunny and none of the sun's rays escape the thin layer of clouds that acted as a protector for the vampires present. All in all a beautiful day. We headed into the house.
Alice had, of course bought me a wedding dress but also the, oh so necessary, reception gown. She told me to get in the house right after the ceremony so she could help me change and re-do my makeup. Why this was necessary I had no idea. When I almost flipped out she explained that my ceremony dress would be to "bulky" to have at the reception, the ceremony shoes were too elegant for the reception dress and my makeup would have to be a different shade for it to combine with reception outfit. I had to take many deep breaths and keep repeating whatever makes her happy in my mind to finally say "sure, Alice. That makes sense." She beamed and I couldn't help but to smile.
Edward went to talk to his, our, parents and some of the guests as I got ready. Alice met me in her room as she said she would. The reception dress was really only slightly less "bulky" then my other dress, but it was more comfortable, along with the shoes. But the makeup is what I couldn't really tell the difference on.
Alice rented a tent to hold the reception in. The ceremony had been held in their meadow like front yard and the reception was in their backyard. I had to admit that it was beautiful. The colors were white and blue. Almost everybody was already in the tent taking their seats. Edward was waiting outside of the tent. Alice danced inside to join everyone. I reached Edward and he put his arm around my waist giving me a kiss that had me gasping for air.
"You are so beautiful" he whispered in my ear. "Thank you, Alice is the happiest I think I've ever seen her and-"
Before he could finish I reached up and kissed him. "Whatever makes her happy. Besides, she did a great job." I shrugged. "Only a few more hours' right? Then we will be alone" our eyes sparkled thinking about it. "So let's get this show on the road," I hesitated, "are you still going to keep our honeymoon spot a surprise or are you finally going to tell me?"
"Not a chance Mrs. Cullen. You'll have to wait and see.
I forgot about the honeymoon spot as soon as he said "Mrs. Cullen". It felt so right. We stared into our eyes for a long time, but that didn't matter because time disappeared whenever I looked into his topaz eyes. We must have been out there for awhile because Alice soon appeared before us.
"Hey, are you guys planning to join us because your guests are starting to wonder if you guys ditched and left for your honeymoon."
"Of course" we said at the same time. Both glanced at each other, smirking.
After three and a half hours of toasts and tears, old traditions; the tossing of the bouquet the tossing of the garter the first dance as husband and wife, and the father daughter dance, Edward and I started to thank everybody that came. I saved my parents for last knowing that they would no doubt be the hardest.
"Oh honey you're all grown up, I'm going to miss you so much. You're married and you're heading off to college. It's going to be so long till I see you again!" Renée was already in tears hugging me. I cringed mentally knowing that this was goodbye and I would never see my mother again.
I tried to hold back the tears as best I could. I hugged her tighter. "Oh mom, I'll miss you too. I love you so much. You're my best friend and the best mom. And don't worry, I'll e-mail you constantly," we finally separated and she hugged Edward.
"Take care of her" I heard her whisper into Edwards's ear.
I had to move onto Charlie. Not knowing what to say. "Dad?" he spun around to face me now. I could tell his eyes were wet. Knowing Charlie I was surprised. Before I could say anything he had me in a tight hug. I didn't say anything for a while just let him hug me while I concentrated on not breaking down.
"I'm going to miss you Bells" he said.
Regardless of my attempts my eyes started to fill with tears. "Me, too, dad. I'm really glad that I moved in with you." I could feel him start to loosen his grip, I tried to blink away the tears as quickly as I could.
"Take care of yourself Bella and you can come visit whenever you like. Don't ever forget that." He was piercing through me with his gaze. I was on the verge of going to pieces. I had to hurry.
"I won't dad, I love you and I'm going to really miss having to cook for you, are you sure you're going to make it?" my attempt at humor worked, he laughed. "Bye dad." I looked at him one last time before turning away.
Charlie shook hands with Edward and then hugged him. I couldn't hear what he said but I was sure he wasn't being rude his eyes were moist again. Edward said his final good bye and we left in the Mercedes. I smiled up at him once we got in the car but as we pulled away from the house I couldn't help myself and I looked back to where my friends and family were, the people that I would never see again. A single tear slid down my cheek as the forest blocked the house from view.
so thats was it! i really hope you like it!!consructive critism? anyone? anyone?
i will update soon!
