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Hey guys I'm sorry but here's another story. I know but hey I love Transformers and I usually come up with about an idea for a series every day since 2009 so I have to get some out there.

So what is this story about well you probably read the description? But I will tell you some more things. First this is an alternate version of the 'Call of the primitives' episode. It's based in the same timeline of R.O.S, so therefore I can change loads of stuff.
For starters, Grimlock for example, can't be made on earth like he was in G1 so he has to be made by Primacron. (In my story of course, cos there would probably be a more simple way to do it but that's boring). The Dinobots, Predacons, Terrorcons and primitive minicons are on the same planet Primacron's apprentice was on. They have been around since the days of Unicron's rebellion. Eventually all of them formed a society that was peaceful and separated into the factions. Until their various extreme personalities conflicted, and over the thousands of years, drove them to war. Thousands joined each side and they all fought each other, With thousands dead on each side. Until one day a call of the Primitives in received.

This chapter will be the origins of the Primitives, they will not be in much detail but who created them, what happened to the creator, how the war started and descriptions of characters will be in.
Surprise! Have a story you didn't know about =)
'Me Grimlock no Bozo, Me King'

Reign of Starscream: primitive calling
Chapter one:
Primitive prehistory
part 1/2

Location: Primacron's lab, unknown quadrant of galaxy.

Many millions of years ago.

Near the beginning of the galaxy, the creature known of Primacron discovered the secrets of Primus and cybermatter. Utilizing the ferocious and primitive prehistoric creatures/cybertronians, found on Cybertron he created the primitives. These creatures were mostly based on predatory and animal instincts but had now increased measures of intelligence. A few million years later he would form a sort of pact with the Quintessons. They would provide him with the materials and captured sparks/energon to create his now extremely powerful and deadly life forms. And he would give them their technology, and armies of fierce beasts, some that had razor sharp teeth and swam through the murky waters of Quintessa. They were use as indigenous life and forms of execution. They were mindless beasts and were dubbed by the Quint's...The Sharkticons.

He then decided to seed a world with his creations. A world called Methelusa; it was a lush and energy rich world, with plenty of cyber matter to use in cities and the construction, of more primitives. He also had an assistant which he called, 'The Oracle'. He was a primitive form himself, taking on the form of a giant ape. He carried a life force or spark unlike Primacron. His knowledge was immense and he helped construct the primitives sparks and minds. (Basically he's a mixture of primus and vector sigma). He was ageless and so could help Primacron's construct ambitious life forms for millions of years. As the primitives were partly formed by his intelligence and life force, then he had an intimate connection to all of Primacron's creations. This meant he could feel their presence and partly influence them to do his will. But he would not abuse his power, unlike Primacron. He would continue to create more ambitious life forms. The Oracle feared he was perhaps over thinking things and was too over confident. Primacron's dismissed his concerns.

Primacron was a amalgamation of sparks mutated to form one being. But he still carried the will and essence of primus as kept his intentions clear. If he was betrayed by Primacron's r he proved to be a fool, hen he would use his connection to the primitives, to rebel and destroy him. They both continued their creations for eons. Until one fateful day Primacron's received a visitor.

A being of energy appeared to him and had said he had heard of his many great creations and the various legends of him. Primacron's was flattered by this and wanted to hear why he sought him out. The thing said it was the life force of the being called unicorn. Unicorn told him he was an entity forged with primus. He had the abilities to traverse the multiverse, and knew the secrets of every reality. He also boasted he knew the secrets of the past and future of all realities. His body was destroyed by the being known as Primus and he required a new one. He needed a new body to consume the various stars/planets etc, of the multiverse. He also stated it was his sworn oath and life's goal, to destroy the one called Primus, his ancient enemy. He promised to give him what's left of the planet Cybertron. He promised Primacron's infinite power and secrets to improve his creations to almost unstoppable proportions.

Primacron was pleased, with the beings help his creations would be a marvel to all who behold. He accepted and with the accumulation of element he has and will collect from the Quint's would construct his new body. Unicron told him exactly what to do and how to ensure his body was unstoppable. (Although he did not tell him his weakness, which was Primus's essence. It could only be obtained through the matrix). Primacron's assistant did not trust the Demi-god. Through his connection to primus he sensed what Unicron was and that primus was the being whose will he should follow.


Unicron had known of the Oracles 'status' as a primitive and could sense the disgusting purity of primus within him. He did not act until his body would be completed. He knew the oracle had a level of purity which could be utilised to repel or even destroy him in his present state. Over the hundreds thousands of years it took to complete. Unicron sensed the reality around him. He could not traverse to another in his present state and a reduced to staying in this one. He knew of the rebellion of primus's children against the Quintessons and their new societies. Further on he observed their wars and changes in systems. He knew he would have to wait till all knowledge of him is lost and primus weakened by the very wars of his children, to weaken him (drain his energon). Before he could destroy him even then he wanted to savour the destruction of his enemy. He could wait many more millennia if he had to. Until the multiverse was destroyed.

The oracle knew he would have to have a contingency plan. This would be for when Unicron turn on them. The will of primus was to use his children to destroy Unicron, while he could not face him himself. As he was similar to primus in many ways, his primitives were his children. He could utilize them to stop Primacron's and hopefully Unicron, but he doubted that.

When Unicron's' body was completed his essence entered it. He felt the power his body wield. He looked down at Primacron's and thanked him. Before he utilised his god like power to destroy Primacron's planet. All that remained was the facility he was on which ejected from the planet just in time. Unicron nearly destroyed Primacron's lab, leaving him in critical condition. The oracle's body was inoperative. But he could exit it in his 'matrix' form and travelled through the galaxy to escape Unicron, who decided to celebrate by consuming a few planetoids and stars, before warping to another reality, saving this one for later.

Primacron's assistant had found Methelusa, home to the primitives. He settled inside the planet and assisted in its evolution. The primitives changed over millennia, becoming stronger, fiercer faster and most importantly more intelligent, he gave them free will. But his connection to them remained in case Unicron or Primacron would return. He still sensed Primacron's actions. His creations evolved further over the years. They learned how to build cities and societies based on their primal instincts, in which they would carry from their beginnings.

Eventually like Cybertron several factions rose from these societies, based on the personalities of certain primitives. These had their own beliefs, and soon thousands of primitives joined each.
There were five major factions. No one knows how exactly it happened but their beliefs and goals lead to the start of a war, a war with every side for itself. No one allied out of arrogance and soon their war was at full scale. The factions included.


The Dinobots

These primitives had taken on terrifying and powerful forms, that the oracle could see from a inhabited world in another galaxy. They are all close knit. They follow their commanders with intense loyalty. They all strive to fight. They are all bred warriors who all strive to prove their worth to their king. Though some were rebellions and irrespective of each other, thinking that they are the better warrior. This sometimes led to skirmishes, which quickly ended when a commander came and used their strength and ferocity to sort it out, in a civilized way of course. They are however loyal to their beliefs of seeking fights, finding new enemies, proving their worth and crushing their enemies. They are also so close to each other that they would fight and die to save each other honourably. Though most would not fight honourably unless the situation required it. Mostly they would just ensure maximum pain or fight dirty, much to their enjoyment.
They have four 'Knights' who lead thousands each into battle. Each one follows the Dinobot codes and enforces it, with one overall king and strongest of the Dinobots.

Slag: (I know he is called Slug now, I just don't care it's stupid and not G1 so I'm keeping it. You don't like it? Take it up with SLAG and see what you get)

He takes the form of a three horned beast. His strength and power in robot mode is astounding. But in beast form, he is a phenomenal destructive force. His horns, speed and power make him a powerful ramming warrior. Fire breath and energy beams from his horns prove devastating weapons to his enemies, and 'friends'. Speaking of that, his personality is not going to win any awards. He is surly, mean-spirited, nasty, and disturbingly violent. He is pretty much he person who invented the fight dirty part of the Dinobots beliefs, mostly because he does it all the time to anyone friend or foe. He is disrespectful, even to his king. Disobeying him or mocking him in front of his face if he makes a decision he considered to be stupid. He will destroy and melt his enemies to a pulp and relish in the carnage. He still however respects the other four members of his team. And can rally his forces in battle with his rage. You won't call him a friend, but if you need a job dong that involves smashing things, you've got Slag. Just remember his motto... 'ME SLAG, NO like anything. (for any further reference if you try to do Grimlock etc speech in a story, 'me' will always want to become 'I' it's like Microsoft word hates Dinobots)

Sludge: Not the brightest Dinobot but still a powerful warrior and asset. He makes pretty much any Dinobots a scholar in comparison to his intelligence. He is not really violent, especially compared to Slag. In fact he believes completely in the Dinobots ways and that only the strongest should lead. Their king has proven this and he follows him obediently. He would sometimes require help from the other Dinobots when it came to leading troops. He is pretty much one of the nicest Bot's of the bunch. He is not violent toward others Dinobots, respects them and never questions his leader. The only things he hates are anyone who is not a Dinobot and his enemies. He will use his large, powerful long ailed and long necked form, to do serious damage in the battlefield. His tail acts as a powerful whip knocking down enemies and intensely wounding them. He can swing his long neck to knock down enemies also, much like a flail. His eight and strength also aid him in another brutal and incapacitating attack. He can rear p and stomp or simply stomp. This creates seismic waves which can split the very ground, much like an earthquake, Knocking enemies down into the deep, long, dark crevasse created. Where unless they can fly out or climb, they will die of starvation. Even then he can use hid flame breath to destroy all in the crevasse. His solution to every situation usually involves something like. E.g. 'Sludge no like Predacons. Let's stomp'.

Snarl: snarl takes the form of a heavily resistant to damage, plated beast with a powerful quadruple spiked tail. He can absorb solar energy and fire it in a beam form from his tail, doing massive damage to an enemy. His spikes are sharp enough to puncture almost any alloy. He shows surprising agility in both modes. As for himself he revels in combat it's the only escape he has from, his life. He needs it to get away from talking etc. Unlike slag he is not an almost uncontrollable raged beast, but an effective killer. As for the other parts of his personality, he follows the Dinobots and does what they say. He has few opinions, only speaks when he needs to. He often spends his time complaining about the situation if he wants to speak anyway. He feels isolated from the others and doesn't realise it's partly his doing. Even though bots like slag don't help that.

Swoop: He is the nicest bot you could probably meet on the planet. He's surprisingly good natured, kind, and upbeat. Few of his comrades realize this however. Swoop is an excellent aerial combatant and bombardier, and has become skilled at using the fear his alt mode creates in battle. He considers it his greatest weapon. His winged beast form is fast, agile and can fire missiles, fire breath and rapid energy blasts. He is a big show off of his flying and killing skills whether in the field or not. But like all Dinobots he is arrogant somewhat disobedient and believes in the code to prove himself, in combat.

Grimlock: Now we come to the king/leader of the Dinobots faction. He values strength and power over anything else. Most situations he meets can be sliced with an energo sword or torn apart. He does not care for organic life forms, considering them feeble. He accepts casualties in battle as he believes they have fought with honor and for the Dinobots way. He built the Dinobots society to eliminate weakness, something he believes his enemies all have. Like all Dinobots he struggles with pronouns. He can stand toe to toe with any enemy, at least on his planet anyway. His strength and power are only really equalled by those such as Sludge and Slag. He hate those who abuse their power e.g. Predacons, Terrorcons, Dinobots who try to best him, the usual. So really his cause is the most morally correct in those terms. Even if it does involve tearing off heads. He holds respect for his entire faction and would fight with them and, die for them anytime. Though as king it's unlikely.

The Dinobots, were the most powerful and fearsome warriors on the planet. Their strength has won many a battle with any faction. Though they do have equals in at least two of the factions, in strength, power and ferocity.

To be continued...


Hey Transfans thanks for reading, if you enjoyed this please review and tell me or ask me anything, i'll reply in the next chapter or to your Pm as best as i can.
Anyway i thought this was a great idea, the R.O.S timeline can be used to change and alter any G1 episode. So any elements from G1/Idw or my own imagination can be used. Plus i really lik e the idea of armies of Dinosaurs, dragons and predacons fighting to the death. Plus grimlock is in it..i love grimlock.
The next chapter will complete the prehistory part of the story and we can get right into the 'Primal wars' eh eh eh? no okay then... we'll have Grimlock eating giant terrorcon snake heads or something then. some people =(

So overall people from the future... if you are really not bothered about the history of this part of my alternate timeline. Then you can skip directly to chapter 3 and so on. Just remember though if you don't understand who people are I've done all the research and alternate timeline clarification for you, so if you need that the first two should be read. Yeah so any way i can't guarantee when chapters will come, often i take like maybe a week-ish break to relax and get my thoughts together.

Till all are one