This is my first story so please review and critique me and any advice to improve is welcomed so here we go.
Mysterious figure
A shadow covered figure whimpers and withers on the ground as a small dark haired girl moves closer when she is little more than 5 feet away the figure begins to growl the figure backs a way to a small green toad and exclaims here worries "oh master jaken what are we to do master Sesshormaru is hurt yet he won't let us near. Sniffs" Jaken sighs "Rin it isn't lord Sesshormaru that is growling at us it is most likely his yokai as such will only let his family tend to him and let his closes friends as close as we are able to get." Rin stops her sniffling and thinks "jaken so only his family can help him" jaken "yes but ales we have no idea were his mother is" Rin jumps up and runs over to the twin headed dragon horse called Ah-Un. Jaken jumps up and screams "Rin where are you going" Rin "to get help please watch master Sesshormaru till I get back" she cries as she flies off on Ah-Uns back. Jaken mutters to himself "I hope you do find help"
Inuyasha's group
A lone figure sits high up in a tree as 5 figures rest in the shade of his tree. The silver haired dog eared hanyo sniffed the air and tensed up grabbing the hilt of a battered old sword. A monk in purple robes named Miroku said "Inuyasha is something wrong" Inuyasha "no just smell something familiar" taking a deeper sniff "that's strange" a dark haired female in 20th century Japanese middle school uniform sais "Inuyasha what's strange" Inuyasha "this scent it's that dragon that's always with Sesshormaru and I think that human child I think her names Rin too" "let's see what happens and if they want anything but be careful Sesshormaru is probably close too ok" right they agreed. It took Ah-Un just 3 minutes to get to the clearing Inuyasha was already on the ground ready. As soon as Ah-Un landed Rin rushed at Inuyasha crying "master Inuyasha I lord Sesshormaru needs help. Inuyasha manages to pry her off and ask "why douse Sesshormaru need my help Rin?" Rin cries he's hurt and won't let me near to help jaken Said only lord Sesshormaru's family can help you're my lords brother so please help." Inuyasha bowed his head and thought could he really save Sesshormaru the guy who had tried to kill him since he first meet him over 200 years ago in his heart he knew the answer YES despite what he had done he was still family he raised his head " Guys I am going with Rin to help and I don't want to hear one word he's my brother I have to Rin exclaimed loudly "thank you master Inuyasha thank" as she quickly climb Ah-Un and flies away Inuyasha quickly runs after them easily keeping pace until he is swallowed up by the forest.
Sesshormaru area
Rin Ah-Un and Inuyasha arrived back in the grove where jaken was waiting jaken spoke" Rin your back you've found help" Rin "yes I have" jaken then saw Inuyasha "what are you doing here vile half-breed get away from here now!" Rin"jaken he's here to help" jaken "but why after all you know lord Sesshormaru hates him" Rin "he's family and the only one who can help" Inuyasha " Rin where's Sesshormaru" Rin points toward a small path thought the trees "along that path way" Inuyasha "good I think I might take Sesshormaru to some caves near by alright I won't you two to stay here" Rin "ok"
That's it this is the first part of my new story please review.