Hey everyone! This is the rewrite of my first chapter since I kinda didn't think it's that good. The original first chapter is still around, but in another story called: The Original Chapter One: Mark of Athena in case you like it better or some other reason... Well, I hope you give a good review! Add this story to your favorites! Love you all! More chapters to come!
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Percy
"Come on," he said "Let me introduce you to my other family."
Hazel, Frank, and Percy walked slowly to the forum where the whole camp was gethering, along with veterans and families. Apparently, this was a can't miss event. The warship descend slowly to the ground. Percy had the jitters. He didn't know what to expect. Would they be happy to see him? Or would they mistake him as an enemy? He put that thought aside. Of course they'd remember him! They were his friends.
The ship was stunning. It was Greek style. The masthead was a bronze dragon head that looked familiar. The boat was made from polished wood that shimmered in the sunlight. The warship was full of weapons and was landing inside the Pomerian Line. Terminus would probably have a heart attack. They'd be in big trouble.
The campers had nervous looks on their faces. They didn't know what to expect. Would the Greeks cooperate? Would long time enemies with bad history together learn to make friends? It was a long shot, but they had to try. The fate of the world depended on them. They couldn't just let Gaea win. They were better than that. He hoped Hera was right, but he still wanted to smack her in her godly face for wasting eight months of his life sleeping. Even though they were mostly during school, it was still his life. His short demigod life. He may not even make it back after their quest from what he has heard. Apparently, pain and misery were in his future. Great. He loved pain and misery. He needed to stop this thinking. It was bad for him. His future was unpredictable. That was only if he made it to the quest. He needed to worry about now. He needed to survive today first.
The warship landed on top of a marble fountain with a, Clunk! Percy's inside radars were tingling. Annabeth was on this ship. He couldn't wait to see her again. Eight months of waiting finally coming to an end. The first demigod to step off of the warship was one that I haven't met yet. Sure, I've seen them in my dreams, but I've never met them. They must have arrived during the eight months Percy has been missing.
The half-blood looked about fifteen or sixteen. He was a little shorter than Percy with a crazy smile. He had dark curly hair. It felt like it just got ten degrees hotter. Percy's have seen him somewhere before other than his dreams. But where...
"Hey everybody!" The guy said. "Let's get this party started!"
"Leo, you idiot!" Abother girl walked out of the ship. She had choppy brown hair, a dazzling smiile, and eyes that could've been brown or green. She was beautiful. "Hey. I'm Piper."
"They seem nice," Reyna said.
"They're just trying to make a good impression. Then, they'll decieve us," Octavian said.
"Shut up, Octavian," Percy said. "What do you know? Where's your experience, Octavian?"
Octavian was speechless, for once. He couldn't think of anything to say.
"So... uh..." Piper said.
"'Sup, Romans! We come in peace and stuff," Leo said.
"Hey. I'm Percy Jackson. Nice to meet you," Percy said. He put a hand out for Leo to shake.
Leo shook his hand. "The Percy Jackson? I've heard a lot about you, dude," Leo said.
"Cool," Percy said. Then, a girl with curly blond hair in a pony tail and grey eyes that were almost impossible to look at. My heart wanted to jump out of my body. He couldn't help, but smile. "Annabeth!"
She ran over and squeezed the life out of Percy. She almost cracked his rib cage. But he didn't care. He wished that the moment would never end. But of course it did. Percy pulled away when he relized that everyone was staring at them.
"Percy! I've been so worried about you! I'm so glad you're all right!" Annabeth said.
"I missed you too, Annabeth," Percy said. "So... these are my new friends, Hazel and Frank."
"Hey," Hazel said.
"Hi," Frank said.
"Hey, nice to meet you guys," Annabeth said as she shook their hands. "This is Piper. And this is Leo. They arrived after you disappeared. They're cool."
"Well, since we're going to be going on a long quest together, we might as well get to know each other!" Percy said.
"Yay! Everyones happy! Annabeth is here! Yay!" Tyson said.
"Oh, hey Tyson! I didn't see you there!" Annabeth said.
"ROOF!" Mrs. O'Leary barked.
"Good girl!" Percy said.
"Percy... didn't you say that Jason was on that warship? I don't know about you, but I don't see Jason. Where is he? Is he alright?" Reyna asked.
"I think he is still on the ship..." Piper said.
As if on cue, a guy with blond hair and stormy blue eyes stepped out of the warship.
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