Hey guys I'm new to this fan fiction stuff so i apologize for any incorrect spelling and stuff, I will appreciate reviews and commits I'll try to make a solid story line, and if any of u could perhaps send me some messages telling me some pointers and such thank you.
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(The picture comes into view,a busy New York city,pedestrians busying down the street,car drivers shouting at one another)*Stan Lee*"hey whats that up in the sky true believers?"He asks
(Spider-man thwips another web and swings low over the new yorkers, knocking the cap of a guy reading a newspaper)"Excelsior!" (shouts Stan)
"Eh another day another web"says Spider-man as he thwips another web and backflip lands onto a skyscraper a figure steps out of a shadow behind Spider-man
"Hey webhead"says the figure (monkey shriek)
"You're getting as bad as Nick, White Tiger" says Spidey after he jumps from the wall he landed on when Tiger scared him
"Yea yea your late for S.H.I.E.L.D training Fury's bout to pop an eye patch lets go..Now"Tiger says as she walks up to him with her hands on her hips
"Fine lets go"says Spidey suddenly a they hear a bank alarm "I think Fury will understand if we are a bit later" Spidey says he backflips off and thwips a web in the direction of the alarm
"Lets make this fast webhead,last thing i want is another set of training again because of you"says Tiger with the usual anger in her voice as she takes off after him "Stop right there- Electro?..Eh a villians a villian but i have to say im absolutly shocked to see you" he says as he swings down and swing kicks Electro while on the web,Electro stumbles back
"Jameson's right u are a menace" he shouts as he fire lightling bolts at spidey who backflips over them "Always showing up where you're aren't wanted" he says as he throws more bolts
"heeyah" White Tiger shouts as she slashes repeatedly on Electros back then roundhouse kicks his head
"agh" he grunts
"heres web in your eyes" he says and shoots flash webbing in his eyes after he tears the webbing out a ,made by Tiger and Spidey duel punch ko's him "Shockingly easy eh Tiger eh" he nudges her and chuckles
"u little-" he mumbles as Spideys webs him to ground and webs mouth
"Lets go web for brains before we get extra time on the C.O.U.R.T"she says as she takes off
Two hours later
"Alright team hit the showers,Spider we have 20 more bots with your name on 'em take them out and hit the showers"says Fury over the intercom
"Fine Fury" he says as he turns around and is blasted in the face with a laser from a shield sentry "ooh"
5 mins later
as Spider-man starts to go into the boys shower when he sees Ava come out in a light blue sleeveless tank top and dark blue shorts
"Oh hey Ava" he says slightly sheepishly
"Hey Pete just get done?" asks Tiger
(Pete) "Yea they really beefed up the L.M.D's and the sentys since the last helicarrier"
(Ava) "Or maybe you just need to re-improve your skills" she says "Cya later webs" she winks and waves bye (Spider-man thoughts) Wow she's hot he thinks as he goes into the showers
2 weeks later
Spidey races through manhatten on the spider-bike suddenly Nova appears
"Webs trouble in Times Square..its Goblin"says Nova "I knew it was too good to last" spider says as he puts the bike in high gear and wheelies
Meanwhile
White Tiger just lands as she dodges a hit from Goblin
"Whats keeping the webs and buckethead Iron Fist?" asks Tiger
"I don't know but they will be here soon patience is a virtue Tiger" says Iron as they all dodge and attack Goblin
"Iron Fist fast ball special" says Power Man and hurls Iron knocking Goblin off his glider,as he stands up Spidey comes in and webs Goblin to his bike and spins him
"Centrifugal force don't fail me now" he says as Goblin flys and crashes into a building
"Bout time Spider"says Power Man,out of the shadow Goblin throws pumpkin bombs at them making them scatter "ohh" says Spidey as he stares up at Goblin,Goblin then grabs him by his face and hurls him at the bugletron he recovers just in time
Freeze frame
Why do i have the feeling I've been hurled at something vial and hideous?
Freeze frame end
Suddenly the bugletron comes on and J.J.J shouts"Spider-man is a menace and should be dealt with nothing less than deadly force" making Spidey jump off just as a pumpkin bomb hits and destroys the bugletron making debris fall on civilans
"Team forget Gobbie get the citizens" yells Spidey,as they disengage Goblin cackles and flys off
Afterwards
"Goblin got away" says Parker angryly
"But we saved the citizens and there were no causulitys" says Power Man
"But Goblin needs to be caught" says Peter
"In time Spider,good things come to those who wait" says Danny
"But think of all the people who will be hurt by him while we wait to find him"says Parker
Spider-man walks off (Spiders thoughts) We were caught off-guard this time but next time Gobbie we'll bring our a-game he thinks as he pulls his mask on and webs the camera
To be continued
Hey guys i know i misspelled a few words and i hope its all right again leave me a review I would like some ideas tell if u want longer chapters I'll try to make longer ones I'll make betters one as I go along but I'll like some pointers