Me: Hey ya'll! First One Piece fic ever! And Ace is my (and many others) favorite character so I'm making a fic that will follow the manga but I'll use the extended anime version when he stays with Luffy and the others. Also I began writing this 'cuz I'm shocked to find so few of Ace with an OC or anyone for that matter. So please read and review but no flames what so ever!
Oh an also, have you heard Ace's dub voice? If not, I suggest you listen to it:
.tv/watch/one-piece-episode-91-english-dubbed-online-free#English (00:12:00)
Because in this story I'm gonna use the dub voice and not the sub.
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Oh and I own nothing, except Mirim!
In Alabasta outside a restaurant people were gathering.
"What's going on?" a man asked.
"There someone who just died in there!" Another man answered him. Suddenly they heard screams and yells inside the restaurant.
"YOU FELL ASLEEP?!" they heard someone yell in there. Annoyed the mass of people spread out muttering about people wasting their time.
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"Do you hire comedians or something?" Ace asked the owner of the restaurant as he continued his meal.
"Um… no, but if you're okay then everything's alright." The owner said with a worn out expression but then suddenly Ace fell asleep again.
"DON'T GO FALLING ASLEEP AGAIN!" The owner and three others yelled again but just then a girl with a big smile on her face sat down next to Ace.
"Oi, Commander, wake up!" she said and slapped his back waking him up instantly as he began to choke on the food in his mouth. Again she began to softly hit his back to cease his coughing.
"We really have to cure that narcolepsy of yours." She grinned.
"It doesn't bother me Mirim." He huffed and she shook her head.
"But it scared the shit out of these guys." She pointed gleefully to the four panting men.
"Oh. Well anyway old man, have you seen this guy?" Ace asked the owner as he rummaged his backpack before he handed him the wanted poster of Straw Hat Luffy.
"I guess you don't have a problem with eating in full public. Now what does the Commander and the Vice-Commander of the "Whitebeard pirate crew" Second division want in this country?" a rough voice said. Mirim turned towards the one who spoke and smirked.
"Well, Portgas D. Ace? Kazemi P. Mirim?"
"Whitebeard?! They're from the Whitebeard pirates?!" A man yelled.
"I knew I'd seen that mark on his back before! Why is he here?" Another one yelled.
"Congrats Captain Smoker. You just managed to throw the whole place into chaos." Mirim giggled. Slowly, Ace turned around smirking himself.
"I'm on a search… for my little brother." He said confidently. The people in the restaurant began whispering to each other.
"Hm? Commander… did you hear that?" Mirim asked.
"Heard what?" "Never mind. Thought I heard someone..."
"Did you hear that? Two of the "Whitebeard" pirates…"
"I've heard of that marine Smoker!" another one whispered terrified.
"So… What should we do?" Ace turned his gaze to Mirim.
"Sit tight and let me arrest you." Smoker answered for her.
"Rejected." Ace drawled and shrugged lazily, still with that confident smirk on his face. "Sorry, no can do."
"… I'm looking for a different pirate. I'm not interested in you." Smoker growled.
"Then let us go." Mirim grinned as Smoker seethed.
"I can't do that. As long as you are pirates and I'm a marine…!"
"What a dumb reason. Chill out, man." Ace said raising an eyebrow. Then suddenly something or someone crashed into Smoker with such speed and power that he was sent flying forward and in his way sat Ace. Everything went in slow motion. Smoker was coming closer to Ace whose face turned from a confident smirk to a freaked out expression with his eyes bulging out of their sockets. Mirim contained her smile though she looked shocked too as Smoker crashed into Ace and they were both sent flying through the walls.
"Woooohoooo! A restaurant! I'm starving!" a boy with a straw hat yelled. The people in the restaurant stared at the boy with wide eyes and some looked at the verge of crying.
"Hurry mister! Food, food, food!" Luffy yelled.
"Yeah, but… you should probably run away kid." The owner said as he put some food in front of him.
"Thanks old man! You're a lifesaver!" Luffy exclaimed. A burst of laughter erupted beside him and he watched at the other side of the hole he made on the counter and wall that a girl sat there. Though it didn't look like it he memorized her looks.
Dark wavy green hair with bangs and a few strands framing her face that went to her hips held up in a ponytail and amber eyes. Her face was heart shaped, her skin was a light tan and she was about 5'7" tall and wore a dancer outfit similar to Nami's. Except that Nami's top where blue where as this girl were red, did not have bubbles on it but rather golden bended strings and the cape and skirt were silver white. She had a gold and silver choker around her neck and around her left wrist she had one golden bracelet and on her right wrist she had two golden ones and she had a bandage around her right arm. And on her left wrist she had a grey tattoo which was shaped like a spiral that started from the outside and went to the inside.
"Ah I haven't had a laugh like that in a while. Tell me kid, do you know who you just sent flying through all those walls?" Luffy shook his head.
"Well, if they had been normal humans they would have died but-"
"Oi Lu-"
"STRAW HAT!" Luffy, now known as Straw Hat turned to the hole were Smoker now stood angry as hell and continued eating trying to remember where he had seen the man before. A few minutes past as he continued to munch down his food before he spit it out in Smokers face. Mirim fell over the counter hiding her face and banging her fist on the counter as she trembled with contained laughter.
"Thanks for the food!" he yelled, grabbed the food, put it all in his mouth and ran off with Smoker hot on his tail.
"Oh my God, oh my God, oh my God." Mirim gasped out banging her fist on the counter as she began to recover from her laughter.
"Crap! Come on." Ace hurried up from the ground and ran after the boy and Smoker.
"Oi Luffy! It's me!" he yelled with Mirim following him.
"Eat 'n run…?" the owner said confused.
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"TASHIGI!" Said person turned to Smoker and began rambling about how hot this country was until Smoker told her to stop Straw Hat Luffy but he managed to dodge her attack and jumped onto the roof tops with Smoker following him.
"Where the hell did they go?" Ace looked around frantically before Mirim grabbed his shoulder and pointed towards a gang that ran with Smoker and a troop of marines following them.
"Let's crash the party eh?"
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"Aaaah he is going to catch me!" Luffy yelled.
"Kagerou!" (1) Someone yelled and a great fire streak shoots out and hit Smokers smoke attack. Swirls of flame blocked the marines from advancing any further towards the Strawhat pirates. Slowly the flames died down and revealed a person who had his hand out stretched while he was burning.
"Cut it out. You may be 'smoke' but I'm 'fire'. You're power don't stand a chance against me," Ace said.
"Who is that?" a marine yelled.
"ACE!" Luffy called confused. Smirking slightly, Ace turned around.
"You never change Luffy." He said.
Heat Haze
Me: and that's all from the first chapter folks. Please read and review.
