Hello Everyone, This is a Twilight esque Story that I have all planned out but this is all that I can get on at the moment, let me know what you think but please be nice. I have never wrote before if I get feedback then I will write the rest of the story about ellen and her angel Auden. There is a major twist so don't give up on the story.
After Midnight
My world is such a dark place after my parents died from the fever, I was taken to the temple to be a lady in waiting for the great Nefertiti. The royal palace is such a stifling place to be. I long to be free with my Auden, the silver Angel that came into my life 6 months ago is the love of my life. Oh Nefertiti if only we could be free to live together in this life and the one here after. Auden is from the north and is the beautiful thing that I have ever seen in the male sex. He is over 6 foot tall, has long silver blonde hair and bright Silver eyes that shine like the queen's jewels. I found him months ago brought in by what is left of my family to help him for he got lost from his group traveling here and was left in the heat of the sun to die. I nursed him back to health whenever I could because the minute I saw him I knew that he was the one for me and now he swears that he cannot leave me, but I know that he cannot wait forever… The queen will never give me up.
"Ellen get up!" Andrea screamed.
What was that dream it felt like I was still there in ancient Egypt as the queen's maid and in love with a gorgeous babe of a man that although I had never met in real life, I could see every detail on his face and body and also a strange part of me knew that he was important. I got out of bed , took a quick shower and with the dream still clinging in my brain I went downstairs to face a not so happy roommate in the kitchen.
"Ellen you promised me that we would go and you are already 15 minutes late."
"For what?" I asked her back.
"Duh, we were going to the movies before we had to head to work." She replied annoyingly knowing full and well that I totally forgot our planned time to go to the Movies and see the latest Vampire flick.
"I am sorry that I forgot." I tried to sound upset, "there is another later that we can make it to before work isn't there?" I am not a big fan of horror in general and Vampires in movies are the most horrific for me. I have a blood disorder and have been weak all my life so the thought of a human becoming the undead to walk the earth for the demise of the entire race never aging never dieing and sucking peoples blood just do it for me.
"Yes," Andrea exclaimed while bouncing up and down happily as she checked the internet for the other times at the theater. "it will be close but I think we can make it, get ready it is in 30 minutes and we have a 10 minute drive."
Andrea bounded out of the Kitchen spirits obviously lifted at the idea of a movie that would take her to a dark mysterious world full of angels and demons. I wish I could get that excited about it but I am already dark and well not very mysterious. My name is Ellen Rose and I am 5' 10" with a slender build which probably could be better if I had the energy to work out. I have shoulder length black hair that is stick straight. Mom says it is my heritage since she is Egyptian. I have really cool Silver eyes that never look the same every time you look at them, my one attribute that I love! Other than that I am pretty boring. Andrea is my opposite she is shorter 5'4" almost pixie like with curly Blonde hair that reminds me of a sprite that flits around and does mischief. She has Blue eyes and the best tan that I have ever seen. I was still setting at the table when she bounded downstairs ready obviously to leave.
"El are you ready." She asked as she put on her shades and walked outside.
"Hold on I am coming!" I yelled back as I grabbed me purse and keys to my Grand Prix, and chased her down.
This movie better be good for me to get up early, I have always been partial to the night and I don't like to go to bed early or get up before Noon. Good thing that I had gotten that job at the local Museum as a 2nd shift tour guide for the Ancient section.
The next chapter will be introduce her dream angel...
