Hi! This is a short story I thought up the other day. It's my first Naruto fic, so tell me how I did!
"Oh, I LOVE this weather!" With nobody around to see her except her beloved sensei, she gave a happy cry and skipped into the tall field. She felt like a child again. "Thank you."
Smiling, he turned his eyes to the sky. "Why of course, Anko. Now what was our promise?"
"Never to tell anybody about our walks." She turned, the thunder growling as a warm breeze blew her silky plum hair. "But seriously, Sensei. You think I would do that?"
The man stared at her for a long moment, his long hair and robe blowing as lightning flashed in the distance. "Come here."
The young woman trotted over to her sensei, his current body not much older than her own. "I'm here. Well?" To her surprise, he placed a finger under her chin, drew her towards him, and pressed his lips against her own. After a long moment he pulled back and released her as well. She blinked, her face bright red.
"There. That's it. Let's go before the rain comes." With that, Orochimaru started walking again. His student gazed in shock for a long moment before coming to her senses and bounding after him.