We're baaaaack! This time its like an acid trip. Both Valken AND Naomi are going to suffer through this with the help of Adrian Reid-Mayfair, my newest OC! (Owned not by me, or BloodyTearz666, simply published by her (right…))

Naomi gets bold.

Valken gets Italics

Adrian gets underlines

a/n: okay I don't own this but whatever.

Fifteen-year-old Eternity Demen'tia (Wait wait wait, I feel like I've heard this before!)(What kind of name is 'Eternity?)Johnson warily took a seat on the Hogwarts Express. As she did so, she heard many giggles in the air. Ugh. Stupid preps. (I've heard this one before too!)Eternity had hoped she wouldn't see any when she came to Hogwarts. They had made her life in Los Angeles High School miserable.(Atalantiana is that you?) Now she was supposed to put up with them here? She sighed sadly, and stared out of the window. In her misery, she took her iPod out of her Emily the Strange bag and blared on some My Chemical Romance (A/N: Don't they rock?)(No.). Oh great. Now even more preps were giving her dirty looks. Eternity tried her best to ignore them. It wasn't because Eternity was dirty or deformed or anything. Maybe it was something to do with her black leather corset,(Oh shit, here we go…) or her ripped black miniskirt or her black combat boots or the metal music (My Chemical Romance is DEFINETLY not metal.)she was listening to. Eternity hated how people judged her like that just because she was a goth.(Maybe its because you sound like you dress like a slut? Just saying.)

She was beautiful(Of course she was.), with long raven black hair with red streaks, deathly pale ivory skin and piercing blue eyes that would make any goth man's (….I'm pretty sure goth guys don't care if your guys are blue or brown or green or whatever…)heart beat like a subway train. She was skinny, but had curves in the right places.(I assume you mean impossibly large tits that are nonexistient in real life yes?) But her eyes still bore the sadness of the scars of her tragic past.

When she was two, Eternity's parents (she was a pureblood) had committed suicide by slitting their wrists. She was adopted when she was five, but all was not well. Her new life was hell. She was constantly abused, beat and raped by her new adopted parents.(Excuse me WHAT.) Every night, she would sit down and cry in her bed. Even at school, she was always being bullied. Her life was totally fucked-up and she couldn't stand it. When she was eleven, she kept getting mail and stuff from Hogwarts but her adopted parents wouldn't let her go. Finally, at fourteen, she was forced to run away.(Wow. This backstory makes my life sound like a fucking fairytale.) (Same here. I mean living with a slasher in the woods? Ideal compared to this..)

Anyway, Eternity saw someone trying to sit down next to her. She jumped to her feet.

"Get the fuck out of here you fucking bastard!" she shouted.(It's Enoby! I swear to god it's Enoby! This chick is Enoby in a better writing style!)

"What's wrong?" asked the person. Suddenly Eternity felt calmed down. The person had a very low, sexy voice.

"Oh, I'm sorry!" Eternity apologized.

"It's all right. Now can I at least fucking sit here?" asked the boy.

"Fine." said Eternity.

They boy sat down. Eternity looked at his face. He was extremely hot. He had long dyed black hair and blue eyes.(If you can tell it's dyed,on a guy, it's not a good sign.)

"What's you're name?" asked Eternity.

"Draco." he said.(See? See? I told you it was Enoby!)

"That's an unusual name. But I guess I can't fucking (Bitch don't be stealing my speech)talk. My name's Eternity." said Eternity.

"Cool." said Draco. Eternity and Draco shook hands.

"How old are you?" Eternity wanted to know.

"Fifteen. How about you?" asked Draco.

"Same."

Then, the train stopped and Draco and Eternity had to separate.