this is the rewrite of the angels seal it will not change but i dont like how i started it off so i discided to change the beginning but everything will be the change naruto will act like lelouch but will have lights laugh and lights kira smile he will act some what evil and dark often killing when he is angered the harem has not changed the main girls will be hinata, fem sasuke,femkyuubi,ino, hanabi, fem kimimaro and the others will be his concubines that will be used for his pleasure well then lets get started shall we? please review or pm me if you want a girl to be in his harem and tell me where you want them as

i do not own naruto or anything that i might use in this fanfic

their are tales of a demon so powerful...

so foul that its very name was told in the hasted whispers

it was once said that its one gaze could kill ...no...masscre an entire army

those who did survive the demons fury went insane even the feared jyuubi no akuma would run and hide out of fear its even said that he sealed himself into a human just to get away from the foul demon that took pleasure in killing just to see their faces as their life left their eyes...

survivers who lived his through his gaze could only mumble how beautiful his silver eyes were in raining blood... his pupils were in the shape of ravin in mid flight his hair darker than any known black his smile wider than any they have ever seen and his youki swarmed around him black and silver and merely being around him would currupt even the most holy of beings

but it was his laugh... it was this that sigenled his victems life was about to end...

but... a few years before he was overwhemled and ambushed and killed by the seven armys of both heven and hell he had a son

and now thousands of years later...

now here is the story of his desendent

a young a boy no older than thirteen he layed in a puddle of his own blood he and his team were ambushed by kumo-nin on their first c rank mission they had to patroll the border of their lands one of them had got him off gard and attacked him with seven sword combo slash whats worse no one tried to save him hell even his sensei thanked THANKED them for killing him calling him a disgusting monster naruto growled he was NOT going to die not here! he refused to DIE HERE!

he looked over to his team sasuke the rookie of the year was shaking in fear he looked closer he could see tears running down his face as they looked into each other's eyes. he looked over to sakura who was pleading to sasuke to save them he looked at her in disgust what did he ever see in that bitch? from the corner of his eyes he saw team eight running towards his team. thats right they were put on a joint mission with them... he growled as she heard the platnum blond saying something about him jumping in and not letting her sasuke-kun defeat them sasuke then smacked his forehead and gave her a big wtf face he chocked up blood but he felt time come to a stop as he felt him self being pulled.

mindscape

he looked around amazed as he saw a female with pure black robes she was beautiful with black hair and black eyes put in an angry look as she frowned she held her self royally naruto felt the hatred she had for him and growled in anger "and you are?" he asked glaring back at her which she sneered at him "i am death boy and i will be taking you and your tenet to the deepest and darkest level of makai and leave you there to rot" she said he looked at her and smiled "im not going anywhere i still have to be hokage" he said she than laughed "hokage? NEVER! you weren't even supposed to be alive! BOY you shouldve died when DAMNED FOX was sealed inside you. you will die now naruto lets go" shini said as she went to grab him until a hand grabbed hers.

shini looked at the small lithe girl looking at her she looked around eleven or twelve just one year younger than naruto she had bright red waist length hair her eyes the color of the darkest blood her pale skin made her red eyes stand out alot more than they should have. her velvet red kimono looked like it was about to rip at her large c-cuped bust and her kimono had stopped at her thighs as if it was ment to be slept in she wore a colar around her neck with the kanji for seal on its tag she also had fox ears and nine beautilful fox tails

shini had back handed the kitsune "dont touch me you MONSTER!' shini yelled naruto had grabbed ahold of the girl before she hit the wet and dirty sewer floor 'you okay?" he asked her she blushed as she found herself in his arms not trusting her voice she nodded as she unconchously snuggled deeper into his arms. shini looked shocked " why are comferting that thing! she's the thing that made your life hell who had you beaten starved put in the hospital so many times that you have your own personal room there so tell me why i-i dont get it..." she said her eyes wide in die beleaf. naruto glared at her "yes she did make my life a never ending hell but i do not hate her for it no... i ... i hate ... (naruto growls) i hate the people that made my life hell she did nothing but heal me after i was beaten and broken i will not let you hurt MY akatenshi" naruto so boldly yelled at DEATH herself. tsuki blushed and smiled as she looked at him as she clung tighter to his clothing. shini looked at him no.. she looked at his eyes once an ocean blue now the most beautiful shade of silver his hair darkened to a black that was darker than hers she paled she felt something that she haddn't felt since that demon existed his body grew his pupils became ravens in midflight while the whites of his eyes darkened to black with three bloody red rings circled the raven like pupil she backed away as she saw his ears rise up to that of a black wolf ears and a single black tail appeared tsuki gasped as a bright currupted light had begun to woze itself around his right hand leaving a mark that had millions beyond millions ago would have made even kami her sister cower in terrer "the mark of the beast... the legendary makai ryuoken reborn..." she thought now panicking she thought wise to run even a newborn makai ryuoken had enough controled power to fight aginst her evenly she soon dissapeared.

naruto frowned he wanted to kill her "akatenshi-chan how do we get out of here?" he asked her she shook her head" i have no body naruto-samma i am a spirit but al you have to do is wake up..." she said looking at the naruto which in her opinion was the hotest guy/demon who ever lived she looked down sadly naruto smiled gently and stroked her cheek "then i'll make you one but first... i need to show these bastards whose back and better than ever!" he said smiling evilly tsuki smiled and nodded "yes my lord show those foolish children they are aginst you the new makai ryouken" she said as he dissappeared

naruto woke up groggily to see that they were fighting he guessed they wanted the hyuuga dumb kumo nin he smiled as knowledge began to feel his mind knowledge demon artes and jutsus even summoning spells! were now at his disposal he grinned madly as he sat knowing what he was going to do to that poor bastard... that stabbed him...

kirabi and yugito weren't getting any younger kirabi had to go and kill the one he thought was the weakest she then the uchiha had screamed in anger having his sharingan activated and was now atempting to beat kirabi was only toying with him laughing while she was fighting the rest... than she felt it... killing intent... nothing than what have ever felt before.. this ki... almost felt gleeful almost happy...than she saw him... the dead leaf ninja his eyes she couldn't move... "n-nibi w-whats going on!" she pleaded asked the demon in her head "... a demon kitten one who scared kami and all of the gods. you can call the makai ryouken DONT FIGHT HIM! his power knows no limit... it took all the armies of both heavan and makai just to scratch him" yugito froze in fear...he merely smiled at her and looked away... she let ouot a sigh she didn't know she had.

naruto turned to the man who had tried to kill him sasuke looked like he was about to piss himself. naruto smiled gleefully the man before had been in denial shouting "kai" like he was some genjutsu naruto's smile widened hhe spoke quitly "you know... those who are prepared to kill... SHOULD PREPARED TO BE KILLED!" naruto shouted him as the raven in his eyes began to flap its wings the kumo nin's panicing ceased as his eyes glowed red. naruto's smile became a annaoyed frown "i naruto lord of makai command you to.. DIE!" naruto said with a voice unlike his own the kumo nin nodded as he lopped off his own head. sasuke looked at him in disbealeaf "h-how did you do that!" he shouted at him. "i used my new bloodline sasuke" he said calmly.

sasuke just looked at him "you have a bloodline?" he asked some what amazed "yes its called the shigan (deatheye) sasuke where is team 10?" he asked sasuke shook his head they went to go report kakashi ran away after relizing he couldn't win sakura... was killed" he said looking down. "what are we going to do about her?" he asked as he looked at naruto who turned to the girl he smiled "i'll keep her... i've always wanted a cat" naruto said walking up to her while she crawled away not abling to stand

"n-no stay away from me!" she begged him. naruto kept walking towards her he bent down to where they were eye to eye he then muttered something low enough where she couldn't hear it then a flash of green and gold light she was completly healed "i wont allow my servents to be hurt now get up.. you belong to me now your life is mine" she looked at as a black colar had suddenly appeared around her neck written on the tag was nibi-chan she looked at him and glared until she felt her body burn all she heard was hers and nibi's screams until she passed out naruto nodded at his work as he fused the two souls together how did he do it? he thought that now being the new makai ryouken he gained the last ones knowledge and expirences and anything else the last one had he grinned as he picked up her body massaging her small d cupped bust earning him a small moan from his slave. grinned even more as sasuke looked at him "come on we have to get home with my new pet" he said as he walked past a stunned sasuke. sasuke nodded as he walked behind him "whats happened to you naruto?" he asked himself...

well let me know if you like this one better please let me know