Hi guys! This is a small story of mine. It's about Lauren Hayes (yes, Peter's sister, the all infamous Peter) who has an instant crush on Four. After Tris's initiation, she sees them kiss, and plans revenge. She forces Four to break Tris's heart. But Four has a plan in mind. Tris doesn't know that, and can their hearts be mended? Hope you like it! I need comments, so please R&R!
-randompersonwholovesdivergent
POV- Tris
Tobias and I were here for 5 days. Peter and his sister, Lauren, were holding us hostage. Lauren was in Tobias's initiate class, and wanted him ever since. This is a week after I came first in initiation. That's when Lauren snapped. When she saw us kiss. When everyone saw us kiss. She captured us with the help of Peter, and tortured me. Now, she stands, holding a gun to my head. I am chained to a wall, across from Tobias, who is on the opposite wall.
"Four, I'll give you a choice:break up with her, and I'll release her. Or she dies. Dead, gone. Forever. Which would you choose?" Lauren says to him.
"Four, no, please." He looks at me. I turn to Lauren. "If you kill me, you leave him alone for two years. Don't bother him, don't see him, don't talk to him." She considers this.
"Deal." She looks at Tobias, and says "Choose." He looks at me with a lot of pain in his eyes. Too much pain. I know what is about to do.
"No, please! Please, Tobias, please!" I yell. Tears start gathering in my eyes.
"I'm sorry Tris. I'm breaking up with you." He turns to Lauren. "Now let her go."Lauren releases me. I drop to the floor, tears streaming down my face. Peter holds me by the door. Lauren makes a gash in my shoulder. For the first time in days, I scream.
"No! You promised you wouldn't hurt her!" Tobias is struggling against the chains. She releases him. Peter holds a gun to my head. Tobias looks at me with tears in his eyes. Lauren walks to him. She pushes her hands up his chest, and around his neck. And then she kisses him. He wraps his arms around her waist, but doesn't kiss back. She pulls back.
"Tobais Eaton, will you be my boyfriend?" I look at him. He doesn't look back.
"Yes, Lauren Hayes." And he kisses her. She pulls back, still looking at Tobias.
"Peter, take her to the infirmary." And she continues kissing Tobias. Peter steers me away from them. Once we are outside, he hits me on the head with the gun once.
"I'm sorry, Tris." He whispers. Whaaaat? is all I think before he hits me on the head again and the world turns black.
So? What do you think? Can you PLEASE write a comment? I want to know what you think about it! I need to know so that I can improve. Please take at least an extra two minutes and write even a small comment telling me what you think of it. Please?
-randompersonwholovesdivergent :-)