Destiny
First Fanfic! pLESASEASE rr!
CH. 1
Thinking About It
"Jim, what am I going to do with you!" Jim Hawkins' mother asked him. "You're constantly breaking rules. Your grades are suffering, even though you're a brilliant kid, and ever since your father left you've been incredibly anti social. And flying your zoomer in the restricted area of the construction zone? How many times have you been caught? More than I can count!"
Jim just looked away, not offering any answer or explanation to her rhetorical question. He headed for his room.
"I'm not through with you yet, young man!"
Jim ignored her and went into his room, closing the door on her face.
Jade was moody once again. She had a great family, yeah. There had been plenty of problems in the past, but now there was a temporary peace between her and her father. But somehow she just felt incomplete. Because something was bothering her. For some reason things just weren't going right. From an outsider's shallow perspective, she was doing fine. She had been star in the school play her freshman year. Jade had lettered varsity in cross planet running- not that she really wanted to- she hated running, but her dad made her. It sucked that she was good at it. Her grades weren't quite up to par- though she was smart, she just wasn't interested sometimes, although she knew they were crucial. Jade's brown locks were dyed black and cut severely. Her ipod was on as she sat in her dark room sitting on the floor with her eyes closed. She needed to get out of Zyntharak, the stupid, conformist reigion she lived in. She knew there was something better in the universe. She just didn't know what.
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