hey guys Mogar here I'm updating the prologue and messy situation chapters because I'm getting better at writing so pls rate, fav, comment, and pm me and as always BE COOL, BE AWESOME MOGAR OUT
oh my OC is me
chapter 1: prologue
MY POV:
I was walking aimlessly around vale captured in my thoughts until I discovered a dust shop ahead of me. I went in the dust shop to look at weapon magazines as I was greeted by the owner, I replied by giving him a nod and smile as i got to the magazine aisle, I put on my headphones for no interruption as I was looking for upgrades for my weapon.
10 minutes later
After looking for upgrades for my weapon I took off my headphones and put them in my back pack and look around the shop until I heard the door bell ring, I look at the door to see a girl around my age as she walks towards the magazines aisle. Then a group of guys walked in as a dude with a bowler hat walk towards the owner.
" do u how hard it is to find a dust shop at a time like this" the dude in the bowler said to the owner as one of the guys pulled out a gun and aimed it at the owner.
" please don't hurt just take my money and leave" the owner said putting his hands in the air
" shush calm down we aren't here for your money...grab the dust." He said as the guys in suits grab empty cylinder in the case And went to get the dust.
" crystals uncut" the guy in the bowler hat said to the owner
then a guy was walking towards me and the girl who was not paying attention I grab magazine then put on my headphones to act like nothing happen, as the guy was about to fill a cylinder with dust he saw me and the girl.
" alright kids put your hands where I can see them" he said as he took out his sword and pointed it at us but we gave no response.
" hey I said hands in the air" he said as walks towards us then grab our shoulders to get our attention, as we turned to him he pointed to ear to take off the headphones.
"yes" the girl in red said to him
" I said put your hands in the air" he said bit irritated
" wait hold up pause...Are you robbing us" I said in confusion
" YES!" he yelled
I look at the girl who was on my right as she did the same and gave each other weird looks then it hit us and turn back to him.
" ohhhhh" we said at the same time as the girl kicked him which sent him flying a cross the store.
the bowler hat guy saw him on the ground then he sent the guy with gun to check it out, as the guy with the gun came and pointed the gun at us.
" FREEZE" he said as he pointed the gun at us, I kicked the gun out of man hands and kicked him in the face as the girl tackled him through the window as I followed her through the broken window.
when me and the girl jump through broken window I got took out my weapons and went into battle stance, as for the girl in red got out this big ass scythe that was taller then her as I looked at the weapon in awe but I went back into my stance, the robbers look out the broken window and see two teenagers getting fight them as the guy with top hat looked at us with a look.
" ok...get them" he said as the robbers ran at us with swords
" so do you wanna go first " I said to the girl who nodded at my question
" well I guess i get these guys " I said to myself as I charged at them my weapons at the ready.
The first guy who attacked me got a kick to the face as I use my blunt side of my weapons to knock out the rest of the goons, I look at the girl in red who just dropkicked a dude in the face as I see a guy sneaking behind the girl about to strike her but I thrown one of my throwing knives at the goon face as fell to the floor lifeless.
me and the girl in red took out the last goon by double teaming him and send him to the guy in the bowler hat.
" You were worth every cent truly you were" the guy in the bowler hat said as he looked at me and the girl
" Well kids as I love to stay and chat but This is we part ways" he said as he transforms his cane into gun
" Says the fagot who wear a bowler hat when he goes out" I said to him with a mocking tone which made the girl next to me laugh.
" I'm not a fagot your the fagot " he said pointing his weapon at me
" Says the one who just grilled by a sixteen year old gramps" I said to him which made him angry
The guy in the bowler hat aim his shot at me but the girl in red tackled me out of range, as I look at the girl in red she had beautiful silver eyes looking into my sky blue eyes but I realized that she was on top of me which Made me blush slightly.
" Uhh can you get off of me please " I said to her as the girl in red looked at the position we were in then blushed intensely as she got off me quickly.
" Thanks now where did tht bowler hat dude went " I said as I look around to find him
" Over there " the girl in red said as she pointed to the ladder where the guy in the bowler hat is climbing to the roof.
" We need to go after him" I said as I start to climb a building to catch him as well the girl in red used her scythe to climb up the building.
" Hey!" The girl said at him and stopped at the end of the building
" Persistent " he said as a VTOL came out of no where as he got on it
" End of the line kids " he said as he tossed a red dust crystal at us then shot it creating a huge explosion near me and the girl in red, so I grabbed the girl in red and shielded her with my body as the red dust activated Into fire and burning my back. I screamed in pain as the fire went away and I let go the girl I was shielding then turned to the VTOL to see the man in the hat pointed his cane gun at me then fired but I caught it then crushed it with ease in my hand as I created a ball of aura that is huge as my hand then aimed it at the VTOL. I blasted the ball of aura at the VTOL but I grazed the wing cause of all the pain that was on my back. The VTOL flew away as I got on my knees in exhaustion then my vision starts to get blurry until I saw a woman stood in front of me looking at me and the girl in red, I couldn't hold my consciousness any longer so I passed out.
* scene break*
I woke up on a bed but I don't know how I got on this bed until I see man with grey and olive green suit with a scarf.
" I see that you are awake young man " he said as he took a sip of his coffee
" Where am I and who are you how did I get here " I asked so many questions until he hold out a to stop.
" You are at a hospital, and I'm professor ozpin headmaster of beacon academy " ozpin said to me.
" And you have really bad burn mark on your back from the criminal " he said as he looked at his watch.
"Well ozpin who was that criminal you are taking about " I said to him as I lay my back on the pillow.
" That criminal is roman torchwick the most wanted man in remnant " he said as he took another sip of his coffee.
" and right now I got questions to ask you Donnie lee "he said looking at me
" How do you know my name" I asked him
" I was a friend of your father and he told me all about you " he said to me
I was shocked that ozpin knows my dad, even though I really didn't know much of my father when I was a kid but he did train me on how to fight and defend myself and others. I was starting to get curious, so I asked ozpin on what he was like.
" What was my father like " I asked
" He was a brave and strong man, he told me that he took out two deathstalkers with his bare hands " he told me
" Was he kind to the Faunus and humans" I said
" He treats them both equally " he said
" Now how did you learn how to fight like this" he showed me a video of me fighting thugs and that roman guy.
" I learned it from my dad he taught me everything on how to survive the world" I told ozpin
" I see, and explain on how you did this " he showed me another clip of me catching the dust bullet with my hand then crushed it.
' Damn I wish he didn't see that ' I thought to myself
" It's complicated to explain " I said
" I got time " he said drinking his coffee
" Well when I was at the age 4 me and my father went to train until a Grimm appeared, but it wasn't an ordinary Grimm...it was a legendary Grimm" I said as shivers went down my spine on thinking of it.
" What did the Grimm do " he said instrested
" It just looked at us until it looked at me, it wanted something from me but from that day and now I still don't know what it wanted from me" I said as I took off the bandages on my back to show ozpin the glowing tattoo.
" How did you get it " he said as I put on a shirt
" The Grimm attacked me and my father, it swipe my father into a tree then looked at me and then it clawed me but I dodge it leaving me a deep cut on my arm" I said as I lifted up my left arm to show him the scar on my arm.
" After that my father came and killed it by cutting its head off and when my father cut the Grimm head blood splattered everywhere and that blood went in my wound making feel weird but I shrugged it off and told myself "it didn't go in my system" but it did and when it was seeping through me I blacked out." I said
" Did your father tell you that he was a huntsmen?" ozpin said to me
" Yes why do you ask?" I said confused
" Well he told me that as you grow up and be huntsmen I would assign you to beacon just like your father did." He said as he got up and walks towards the door
" And if I don't " I said to him
" That your choice to decide " he said as he turns the doorknob
" wait!" I said
" yes "
"what about that girl in the red hood I helped out?" I said
" oh don't worry she will attend as well " he said walking out of the room as I just sit there thinking on what should I do.
" well if my father told him that then I'm going to beacon" I said to myself as I got all my gear on then head out the hospital to get ready to go to beacon tomorrow.
author note: well guys I hope you like this update on chapter 1 and I really appreciate the comments and follows on this story so I hope you enjoy this chapter and as always BE COOL BE AWESOME MOGAR OUT.