This is a complete Rewrite of my very first fanfiction. I change a lot of things but i keep my OCs. Also this will go through the GER Storyline. I'm also writing "Prototype God Arc" If you want to read it go ahead, that story is almost done. Tell me what do you think about this new story.
Chapter 1: Captain of the Special Unit
In the middle of the night, on an old house in the Outer Ghetto, music could be heard. More specifically, a piano. Inside of the house, a girl of at least 10 years old was playing the piano. She was playing a beautiful song called "River flows in you". She plays it every time her mother wasn't at home, her sister was in the kitchen hearing the music without making any noise. The girl keeps playing the same song over and over again, perfectly. She stops and looks at her hands, she was trembling because of the cold air coming through the window. She stands up and leave the piano.
"Naomi" The sister call her. She shows herself, it was like Naomi was looking at a mirror. Mayushi was her twin sister, they look exactly the same. Naomi looks at her sister and yawn. "Come back to bed, Mom will come back. She always does, i'm sure of it" Mayushi smile. Naomi didn't say a thing, she went to the bed with her. Both girls sleep together, they share the same bed with their mother. But since she works late, They had to sleep alone. Their father died in an Aragami invasion, months ago and their mother tries to do the best she could to pay for the food, clothes and the house. Mayushi sleep like a stone, but Naomi was still up. She gets up from the bed in silence and go back to her piano. The front door opens and their mother was back. Naomi runs to the door and saw her mother with a bag in her hand.
"Mom, welcome back" She said with a smile. Her mother didn't say a word. She just pats her head and sit on a chair. Naomi could notice the sadness in her eyes, something happened today.
"Naomi, i have news. Big news" She said with a tired face. She raises her arm and show to her an Armlet stuck in her arm. "From now on, your mother is a God Eater"
"Really?" Naomi asks with a smile on her face. Her mother returns the smile
"Yes... Can you play the piano for me? I want to hear you playing. That always makes me happy" She said. Naomi runs to the piano and sit down. She starts playing the same song she's been playing before her mother come back. "River flows in you" by Yiruma. Naomi was smiling while she was playing. She was oblivious to what it will happen in the next few days, her mother knew it too well and that makes her sad. She wanted to spend the rest of those days with her daughters...
9 Years Later...
The Director of Fenrir Far East Branch Johannes Von Schicksal was in his office, looking through some files on his computer. He was looking at a list of possible matches for the New-Type God Eater. But no one was a match. He close the files and then he receives a call from Far East Branch's operator Hibari Takeda.
"Pardon the interruption, Director. I believe Norn has found a Potential match for a New-Type God Eater. I'm sending you the data to your personal terminal right now" Said Hibari
"Very Good" He said with a tired tone on his voice "What's his name?" The Director asks and open a new file on his computer. The picture of a boy appears and next to it the information. The boy have blond short hair, blue eyes and was wearing a black T-shirt and blue pants at the moment Fenrir took the picture. (AN: It's the default character in the Character Creation. Also shown in the trailer of GER)
"His name is Yuu Kannagi"
"I see" The Director look at the files and see all the information popping out almost immediately.
Name: Yuu Kannagi
Birth Date: September 24, 2054 (17 years old)
Blood Type: +O
There was a lot of information about him, Johannes read it all skipping some parts that aren't relevant for him, at least for now. "Hmm... Let's get him down here to take the aptitude test" He said and was about to end the call.
"Director, Naomi from the Omega Unit leave a message for you. She'll be back in a couple of hours and she finishes the mission without difficulty"
"Excellent, call her and tell her that she come to see me as soon as she enters the Den"
"Yes, Director" The call Ended and the Director look at his computer. He opens the files about the Omega Unit, there was only a few of God Eaters that were part of that Special Unit. He was looking at the files of her only remaining member, Naomi Kurokami.
"She didn't let us down. Our strongest God Eater"
A girl was walking through the deserted streets of the old city, only sand covers the street and the cars were completely destroyed. The lone girl was covering her face with a black hood. She was wearing a black overcoat with the logo of Fenrir on her back, underneath the overcoat she wears a long sleeve blue shirt with a black tie loosened, gray pants and black boots.
"I'm near" She Said. Naomi Kurokami was returning from a difficult mission. She was sent to the south to hunt down an unusual Aragami. It was a smaller version of an Ouroboros, Sakaki insisted that she needs to take care of it before more of those appear. Naomi knew why, that Aragami was immune to almost every element and her God Arc was almost useless against it. She was lucky to figure it out its weakness before it was too late. Naomi takes out her hood and look around the area. Her long white hair blow with the wind (AN: Her hairstyle is 19 in the Character Creation), her eye color is purple and she has a scar on her left cheek. The scar was the result of a fight with a man years ago, before she become a God Eater.
"Hibari told me that I need to get to the church. Lindow and the rest of the First Unit is there on a mission. When they're done, they'll wait for me" Naomi talk to herself. Going alone on mission is pretty hard so she, must of the time, talk to herself. Naomi put her God Arc over her shoulder and keep walking. Her God Arc uses a Short Sword (Claudia) and a Buckler Shield (Incitatus). Naomi looks around the corner of the street and saw the church. It was 4 blocks away from her. She walks right toward the church and arrive in a couple of minutes. Naomi never let her guard down, she was alert in case an Aragami tries to attack her, but to her surprise the streets were empty, there wasn't any Aragami around, not even Ogretails. She went around the church and saw the corpse of a Vajra on the floor. Next to it was Lindow and the rest of the First Unit, Lindow was extracting the core while Soma and Sakuya protect him for any Aragami that try to jump on them. Naomi walks toward them and Sakuya notices her and wave her hand. Naomi just smiles at her.
"Well, well, well. You arrive faster than we expected" Said Sakuya "How did it go?"
"I come back in one piece. What do you expect?" Naomi smirk
"Yeah, i don't know why i'm asking. You get the job done in a blink of an eye" She said
"Well, this was a little harder. I went without any information about the Aragami and almost cost me and arm... Or worst" Said Naomi. "Just because it looks like an Ouroboros doesn't mean it have the same weakness"
"At least you came back safely" Said Lindow and extract the core. "That's all that matter. It's nice to see you again, Naomi"
"Thanks, Lindow" Naomi looks at Soma. "What about you, Soma?"
"... Good Job" He said with his usual face and turn around. Naomi sighs
"The same old Soma" Said Naomi. "You never change" Then Naomi and turn to Lindow "You are done here?"
"Yep, let's go back" He said and the whole group leaves the area
"Finally, i'm starving" Said Sakuya "Speaking of, what're they serving today?" She asks and Lindow didn't know what to answer
"Well, Admittedly, I wasn't paying a lot of attention at the last supply meeting..." He thought for a moment "Wait! I just remembered. Some new engineered corn or something" Said Lindow. He didn't care about the food, as long he has something to eat, but Sakuya was picky when it's about food.
"Ugh. You mean that same overgrown corn-on-the-cob fiasco?" She asks "It's so hard to chew"
"Yeah, we're having a bit of a lean year... We should be glad we're getting fed at all" Said Lindow.
"I could eat anything now. These last days I didn't eat at all" Said Naomi. She actually had food, but only for two days. She was out for five whole days, so she had to ration everything. In the end she runs out of food on the third day. Luckily, Naomi could last without food for days. "I could kill for anything to eat now"
"Hey, Soma. How about a trade? You like corn" Sakuya asks to Soma, but he didn't seem like he would trade his food for corn. True, he likes corn, but sometimes he prefers to eat what they give him in the Cafeteria.
"Don't think so" He turns her down quickly
"Come on. If we're not back soon, we'll get a lotta nothing" Said Lindow and they finally leave the area
As soon they got back to the Den, Naomi was called to the Director's office. She went right at his office without complaining about how hungry or how tired she was. She enters the office and the Director was waiting for her, sitting on his chair with his computer in front of him. Naomi walks to the center of the room and look at him right at his face.
"Welcome back, Kurokami" Said the Director with his usual authoritarian tone. "The mission was completed without any difficulty?"
"Yes" She answer him. "The Aragami is dead and i bring the core, alongside with resources for Dr Sakaki's investigations. I'll give my report to Tsubaki like always"
"Very well. Before you go, there's something that you need to know" He said and Naomi look at him strangely. "In the next weeks, maybe months, there won't be missions for the Omega Unit. There's been few Large Aragamis in the Far East so you can take a rest" The Omega Unit take care of the Large and dangerous Aragamis, like the Ouroboros and some others. This is Good News for Naomi, not only because she's the only remaining member of the this Special Unit, because she can rest for a while. Since she become a God Eater she didn't have vacations.
"Thanks, Director" Naomi bow to him. She didn't show a smile, but she was indeed happy on the inside.
"Still, you'll be helping to the First Unit. There are two new recruits that will be assigned to the Unit and i want you to help them in anything they need"
"... That's Lindow's problem, Sir"
"He's the Leader but you are still part of the First Unit when you are not in missions assigned to the "Omega Unit". Which leads me to my next question. Why don't you let others God Eaters be part of the Unit? Soma is perfect for that Unit and Gina Dickinson came to my office asking about the Unit"
"Director, How many God Eaters were in the Unit?" She asks
"Five God Eaters, Three Corporals, One Lieutenant and One Medic Private. Including you, they were six" He answers
"All of them, dead. In one single mission, all because one tiny error for our part. That monster destroy us, i won't let that happen again. That's why if i'm taking in another God Eater, he must pass my test first. If they can't then they are not worth my time. They should stay here, fighting the small ones" Naomi put her hands on the Directors desk. "Far away from this branch, there is Aragami that could turn us to dust in the blink of an eye. The Omega Unit should have the strongest God Eaters and also those who knows their own limits. Besides... I think i'm better alone. If i die outside, then i won't drag someone with me" Naomi turn around and went to the door. "I'll talk to Gina and explain her the situation. If she thinks she can pass my test, then she's welcome. I won't less someone die unnecessarily outside those walls" She gets out of the office and the Director was left alone in the office.
"I touch a nerve there" The Director open a file on his computer. It was Naomi's family files, all her family were part of the God Eaters (except for her father). Johannes saw the last information of the file...
Makoto Kuromaki: 35 years old. Killed by an Aragami in the Outer Ghetto. Body not found (2027-2062)
Yukari Kurokami: 36 years old. Joined in 2062. First Generation Gods Eater, Sniper Corporal (Gun type God Arc) KIA by Unknown Aragami in the Infernal Subway.
Mayushi Kurokami: 15 years old. Joined in 2067. First Generation Gods Eater, Assault Corporal (Blade type God Arc) KIA by Unknown Aragami in the Infernal Subway.
Naomi Kurokami: 19 years old. Joined in 2067. First Generation Gods Eater, Captian (Blade type God Arc). Only survivor of the Omega Unit and current Captian of said Unit.
"Tragedy follow you around, Kurokami. Be careful or you'll end up like them"