dirty little secret(rewrite)
original story belongs to notcreativeenoughtomakeone
5 years ago: after everyone had graduated from kadic the gang went their seperate ways but still had some contact. even after the supercomputer was shut down they still cried or remembered lyoko.
aelita had suffered the worse because of xana she lost her father and her mother. but everyone helped her through it.
present: aelita was busy in her dorm writing her biochemistry report(which wasn't exactly her strong point) that kept her up all night and apart from that the squeaking next to behind her desk.
hey anna could you keep it down a bit im trying to study. anna simply responded i can't it feels soooo good. aelita then left. a few days later she was busy in her job as the head waitress which accordig to her one had to have absolute concentration when giving out drinks. and apart from that jobe she was also a dj there which got her quite a bit of money. then jan her coworker said aelita there is a guy that just bought a drink for you and he ain't that bad looking either actually he is kind of cute and kinda srawny. oh yeah where is he? she pointed over toward the scrawny man. when she got to him he said well well well been a while huh princess. odd? the one and only. oh odd it so great to see you where have you been?well to say in short ive been around. and since i got expelled i opted to invent something and right now ive patented a alloy that reduces all vibrations to zero all i need is some investors to help me make a compony. and to reward the investors i give them 200 percent of what the gave me i only need 2,000 more dollars to launch it. i already got the donation from odd and ulrich wiliam too. jeremie said it was a stupid idea so when i get it done he'll definitely regret it. so aelita how have you been? well i've been better. aelita since when do you drink? i don't know when i started. but i drink minimaly. two hours later... hey aelita you don't look like you should be driving. you want me to walk you to the school?.hey don't call me drinky because if i remember right you drank too. with all the drinking you've done i'm suprised you remember anything at just they got to the dorms aelita invited him in. aelita are you sure you could get in trouble. and i don't want ou to especially because of come on wuss like i'm really gonna get in trouble my roomate anna always has somebody to sleep with and she never gets caught even with all that moaning she does. and because of teat i rarely ever does she get that many guys?i wouldn't know what to tell you odd. aelita felt like telling him that she has loved him forever and because of teh influence of the beer she did and odd was feeling extreemely happy when she said i love you odd. aelita then started to disrobe and she just gestured at the bed but he kind of hesitated because she was drunk he felt like he was taking advantage of her but she said don't worry odd i maybe drunk but i'll definitely remember had given her the best ride of her life and he just wouldn't kept thrusting and thrusting until aelita hit her climax and at tht time odd hit his as hours later...
anna had woken up good thing it was a saturday too. morning anna said it seems someone got lucky last night. oh my head yeah see thats why you shouldn't drink so anna where were you last .just with someone.i should've known. aelita just wondered where did odd go? anna said as if she could read her mind oh yeah the guy that was here left this for you and he wasn't that bad looking either it was a not that said princess thanks for letting me into your heart and soul i'll always love you sincerely odd. aelita felt like she melted on the inside. she later went to work still thinking about the night that they had spent together.
and thats it for chapter one of the rewrite this on is slightly longer than notcreativeenoughtomakeones original story if you want to read his story search dirty little secret his pen name or humor rated m or look for aelita s. odd RXR!