Hey second story, Im happy but please review?

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"Yes!" Odie yelled dancing around the dorm living room "I did it I did it" he kept on yelling while he

was dancing around 'THUMP!' A pillow had been

chucked at his face, which had been thrown by

Archie knocking him over "Odie its three in the morning what are you doing?"

"Im playing what does it look like?" he answered. Jay followed by

every one else glared at him "what?!"He asked.

"Get him!" Harry yelled, every one started to charge him, he made a girly scream like

Neil and started to run, far.

There we go, keep updated for the next one, coming up soon.