Deeper Darkness
Chapter 1: Anti-Sora?
Ok Here it is my first chapter to my story :D this is my first fanfiction so I'm gonna need lots of feedback and some constructive criticism!
Disclaimer: I DON'T OWN ANY CHARACTER IN THE KINGDOM HEARTS OR FINAL FANTASY OR DISNEY SERIES! D: I wish I did oh well let's begin!
Enjoy!
Sora and Riku were walking to the clock tower in Twilight town stomping on heartless and licking their sea salt ice-cream. "Hey Sora, Can you still change forms, you know like you did before?" Riku questioned. "I'm not really sure."
Sora mumbled as he stabbed another heartless with his keyblade. "I'm still wearing the clothes so I think so ya." "Well let's find out" Riku Exclaimed. Riku ran over to the other side and had Sora stand on the opposite side with Donald. "Kay, let's find out if this works!" "Donald!" "Sora!" "LIGHT!"
Riku stared in wonder at what he saw. "Sora…. What happened?" When he looked at Sora he saw not the Wisdom form but some sort of dark evil form with shadows surrounding it and a random dark string thing off the side of his head.
"I-I Don't know … but I feel like killing something!" Sora yelled as he lunged at Riku. "SORA STOP!" Sora stopped mid jump and turned to see Roxas standing behind and him with Axel by his side glaring at him. What the fuck happened?
As Riku stared into Sora's glowing yellow eyes he realized that this was Sora's heartless form, the anti-form. "Sora Change back NOW!"
Sora did just that when he reverted Donald was nowhere to be found.
Sora collapsed on the spot...
Well sorry it's so short but PLEASE REVIEW I NEED REVIEWS! I will try to continue this story as fast as possible :D Hope you enjoyed Chapter one REVIEW!