Authors note: This is a work of fiction and any resemblance between the characters and persons living or dead is purely coincidental.
This is my first story that I'm writing, I will be slowly working on this over time and if you have any ideas or tips, review or PM me, thanks.
~WRG
Story info; this story takes place during the 23rd century and is narrated by the main character, Ateris (aye-tear-iss). A clever 17 year old boy who is very nimble and has extreme acrobatic skills, he also has the ability to make bombs and other engineering items with his mind and hands, along with the appropriate materials. So the story begins at the security minister's house in the town of Kalensdale, the capital city of Zanktara.
Some people like happy endings, others enjoy sad endings. I end things with a boom. "ATERIS!" Oh drat. He's caught me. Its go time.
I push away from the high pillar and hit the beautiful marble floor running, they truly were nice. Gorgeous black and white marble with inlayed gold specs here and there. It's too bad they were going to waste.
I started to feel the pull. I was just a few steps away from the window when he caught up. Did I forget to mention that I was being chased? The security minister's name was Zane. He is one…erm, unique individual. Standing two feet ten inches tall, he is not the tallest person you'll ever meet. A puny little squat with wire rimmed glasses, short, dark brown curly hair completed with his stupid looking freckled face. Today he was wearing his usual, a (specially fitted) light gray suit with a gold pocket watch chain on his right hip.
He tackled me into a wall with a flying leap and what I took to be a battle squeal. I manage to get myself turned around and put a knee in his chest and an elbow to the side of his head. After that I gave a not so gentle shove that sent him sprawling. Just in the nick of time too. The implosion bomb was near impact.
I burst through the window, hit the roof, and slide down the side. I take the 25 foot drop like nothing, I run far enough away and turn around to watch my magic. Just in time too, the implosion bomb went off. At first it was just a slight ripple, and then it looked like a drain plug was pulled in the middle of the 3 story house. Much like an explosion, implosions are very, very, VERY loud, well the bombs I make at least. I even put a special kick in this one too. Even though I was a ways away I still felt the pull from it.
In less than three seconds, a beautiful mansion disappeared and left a big patch of nothing. Nothing but dirt and a few chunks of wall. My job was done.
Note- I have more than this done but I have very little time so I will get more out as soon as a can. But leave a review on what you think. =) thanks
~WRG