This is what happens to Christina after Allegiant. Don't just hate the story when you read only the first page. This is my first story ever 3 reviews and I'll write more.
POV CHRISTINA
I loved him. I started to fall more and more in love with Uriah, and he felt the same. He was who I thought was the one. Every move he made reminded me of Will. I miss Will so much. I thought I would never live after Will was killed by Tris. Then Tobias basically killed Uriah. They are the killer couple. Now the dead girl and crazy man couple. Tobias went crazy after Tris died, he tried to kill Caleb. I didn't want to live anymore. I tried to kill myself, but then Caleb heard screaming sense he lives a floor above me. I live in Chicago now. I don't like Chicago. It reminds me of the Factions. It reminds me of Tris, Will, Uriah, My family, even the old Tobias.
POV ZAC I fell in love with her the day that she moved in the apartment. She was so beautiful. So unique, but she didn't even notice me when we stand I'm the elevator. I live below her and I listen to her every hour of her singing a lullaby that my mom use to sing to me. "Hush little baby, don't you cry. Mamas going to bye you a sweet shotgun. If that shotgun don't shoot the evil then I'm going to bye you a butter knife..." Christina sang as she did her laundry. We'll not exactly like the lullaby my mom sang but close enough. I thought she was crazy, but so sexy.
POV CHRISTINA
I had gotten a few complaints of singing but then they sound proofed my walls, all but the floor. I felt sorry for whoever lived down there. I drop a lot of heavy things and throw butter knifes at the ground. I believe I'm crazy. But people say I'm not. They did test proving I'm normal. I'm not normal. I'm scared, of the rest of the world. I have a dog that keeps me company so I don't need to date. I watch TV for hours sense I don't work. The bureau doesn't make me work because I'm 'mentally unstable. Witch I am. But I hate people thinking I'm different. I want a job, but once I show them my ID they shoo me away. I get to go shopping for free, witch is what I do all day, everyday. I walk by the chasm every day. There is this Bly there about my age. He says his name is Zac but I ignore him. I'm not interested in boys anymore. He is so cute though, he looks at me like I'm crazy, like very one else. Am I crazy?
How was that. Was it to short or should I make them shorter. Please I'm just asking for 3 reviews to make me feel like writing. Bye bye. Should I give you little nicknames. I'm thinking cookies or spaghetti. What do you think.