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Hi guys! Bloody Penguin here! I am trying my hand at typing fanfictions. Helpful criticisms is welcome but please no flaming. A reminder that this is my first fanfic so I will probably turn out crappy. :D (I love smilies! If you review and add an awesome smilie you shall get a virtual cookie! — (0) see! ) Ok so here is my first fanfiction and Penguins of Madagascar story. Enjoy!

"Finally, closing time," Skipper groaned as he waved for the last few stragglers making their way out the gates of the zoo. "Sweet silence," he said. Kowalski, Rico, and Private nodded in agreement. "AAAAAAAHHHH!" A scream pierced the once silent evening air. "Skippah." Private whimpered ," What was that?" "I don't have the foggiest." Kowalski glanced at Skipper as he continued to stand there. "Um, shouldn't we check it out?" Skipper shrugged "Eh, I guess. Move out men!"

-Somewhere in an alley in the city-

"HELP ME!" a feminine voice screamed to anyone who would listen. The four commando penguins arrived on the scene. A black and white streak whizzed by, being pursued by a pack of large dogs, and a pink poodle, all barking ferociously… and yapping annoyingly. "Are you OK?" Kowalski asked. "DOES IT LOOK LIKE I'M OK?" the female penguin replied, before sliding into a wall knocking herself unconscious. "Now," Skipper said ,"Not so much."

"Skippah! We need to do something! She's hurt and the dogs look hungry." Private stated. "I see that!" Skipper barked. "Alright men! Operation 'Puppy Playtime' is a go! Rico!" Rico hacked up a squeaky toy. 'SQUEEEEEEEAAAK!' All the dogs heads whipped around. "GO FETCH!" Skipper shouted and threw the toy as far as he could. All the dogs ran after it tongues hanging out, drool dripping on the sidewalk (eew 3: ) "That's phase one." Skipper said triumphantly. "What's phase two?" Kowalski asked, picking up the unconscious female. "Phase two is…" Skipper started as the dogs came running back chew toy in one mouth with others trying to bite it. "RUN FOR YOUR LIVES!"

OK, OK. I know it was really crappy. But like I said I am completely new at this. PLEASE! Go easy on me and no flaming, but again constructive criticism is COMPLETELY OK and wanted. I have also come up with an OC. YAY my first one! BTW she is the one I described in my profile of why my name is Bloody Penguin.

Thanks for reading and I will try and get chapter two up if people like it. ( I am shooting for at least 5 reviews for my first story's first chapter) Thanks!

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