I don't own any of the characters here, just borrowing them. Grammatical errors, yup! It has and I'm deeply sorry for it.
Chapter 1
First Love
A girl stood in front of a white door, she was holding a bouquet of white rose and has a long sunny brown hair that's tied up into a ponytail with some loose tresses, and sadness can be seen on her once bright green eyes. The girl heaves a sigh while she took hold of the door knob. Kami! How she hates going into this place especially with the smell of different kinds of medicine all over the place mingles together brought sting into her nostrils. After a long moment of just standing in front of the door the green-eyed girl finally decided to go inside with an unreadable expression on her face.
The room was rather dim because of the curtain that covers the window but still she could clearly see the person lying on bed. Hitomi went to where he was and placed the white rose to the vase she has bought for him, she replace the old one first and then after that she sat in one chair near his bed. It pains her to see him like this, although he sleeps peacefully. Seeing him on this state aches her hearth so much especially with all those apparatus attached to his body…if only she could ease his pain nor be in his place instead, not him. She gently strokes his bangs away from his close eyes and after that her hands travels to his handsome face.
"O, Van…please…please be okay…I …" Hitomi said and tries to stifle her tears while she gently squeezes his hand. But the emerald eyed girl couldn't hold her tears anymore and suddenly without knowing her tear falls to Vans hands as she held it tightly.
The emerald eyed girl couldn't imagine a life without him, because ever since they were young he was always by her side. Almost everything that happens to her life he was there and witnesses it all and during her troubles he was always there who supported her and gives her strength when it seems that she wanted to give up. But now, she seems so worthless to him because she couldn't give the same thing that he has given her. How can she ever deserve his love?
Flash back
A three year old girl sat in one corner of her room she was hugging her knees while her chin rested on it as thunder roars outside and rainfall pours down heavily. The little girl was so scared and every time the thunder and lightning strikes she covers her ears and sobs uncontrollably. A knock was suddenly heard at the door and after that a five year old boy with brown eyes enters the room.
"Tomi…are you there?" The boy asked concerned and tries to switch on the light, but it seems it was not functioning that's why it was quite dark inside the room.
"Oniisan…" the emerald eyed girl whispers and wipes away her tears with her sleeves. "oniisan!" she repeated herself and runs towards the boy as she fiercely hugs him, the two child stumbles at the same time because of the force.
"Tomi…are you scared again?" The boy asked concerned and gently strokes her back in order to comfort her. Hitomi only nod and buried her face in his chest.
Well that's it for now…tell me what you all think about it. Sorry for the grammatical errors and please I needed your review so that I'll know if I should continue this or not, but please don't be to harsh on your comments, ja minna….