im rewriting ep 5 so some stuff will be the same more like the begaining and some will change so to story near the end of the chapter i dont own soul eater

A Sound Soul Dwells Within a Sound Mind and a Sound Body

Normal Pov

"I see is there something i can help you with," Stein said.
"Your the one the turn Sid in a zombie right?" Maka asked.
"Yea is there a problem with that."
"Why did u do it, is it that u have a problem with the DWMA or something."
"No I'm a scientist there experiment everywhere and the dose include myself."

Maka start getting a strange feeling

"Soul do u feel that." Maka said.
"No what" soul says."
"Ahh i see now i see a soul that careless and arrogant and another that brave and strong will there see to be in resonated but the too diffent for each other." Stein said.
"Your a mister then only the best can see the character of the soul." maka said.
"HEY THE ONLY SOUL THAT YOU SHOULD BE SEEING IS MINE YAHOO!"Blackstar yelled.
"Your soul love attention and a bit wild it would be hard for that type of soul to find a partner."Stein said.
"I DONE LISTENING TO YOU!"

Blackstar run to stein and kick him but Stien block the attack punching black star to the ground.

"BLACKSTAR!" Tsubaki yelled.
"Your the wild one partner your soul shows me that your willing to let other have there way"Stein said.

Spirit pov at Chupa Cabra's

"SAKE!"

back to the others normal pov

fight

"Your must be scythe mister Maka where did i hear that name before Ahh your mother was a mister and your Spirit daughter ain't u." Stein said.
"Who Spirit?" soul asked.
"That the name of my father before he became a Death scythe." Maka said.
"Your mother did stop my great experiments." Stein said.

fight stein on the rolly chair confront the make blocks channeling his soul.

"What just happen?" Maka said.

normal with Lord Death

"What just happen did he just attack them with his soul don't u need a weapon to do that" Kid said.
"Yep but there some who don't need to" Lord Death Said.

back with other

"Now how should I start the experiment?" Stein said.

Maka attack Stein easily block, Maka falls, soul changes back, Stein grab Maka be one of her hair ties, blackstar throw Tsubaki in 5 pointed giant ninja star at Stein, missing him but cut Maka hair tie.

"watch where u throw Tsubaki!" maka said.
"Sorry about that" Blackstar said.

with Lord Death

"They need help liz patty let go." Kid said
"Kid u cant get involved your not a student." Lord Death Said.
"Then begin of now im now a student."
"Wait here kid and just watch."
"Find"

with others

Stein pov

'looking in there soul one more the might fail this' finally Maka soul.

'her soul seem worried about something it started after wild one attack.'

she whisper "the hair tie."

'interesting she worried about that so why not get the other to let see what happens' smirking.

Maka pov

'his soul seem interested in something but what never mind.'

i see him running to me gaping me arms.

"you will be my experiment why don't we start with putting your hair down." Stein said.
"no don't let me go LET ME GO!"
"MAKA!" everyone yelled.

but it was to late stein took out make hair tie out and something happen no thought would happen.

is it good yes noo maybe please do tell