Author's note: first fanfic, so take it easy on me. I hope you enjoy this. Sorry if this first chapter is slow. Please review and give as much constructive criticism as you want. Also I don't own Divergent; if I did that would be so cool! ON WITH THE SHOW!
TRIS'S POV:
The wind whips my blonde hair across my face. I pull the hair tie of my wrist and tie my hair into a ponytail. I hear the train in the distance slowly making its way down the tracks. Why am I doing this; I need to go back. I slowly start walking backwards towards Dauntless. No, I stop myself. I need to do this; I need a break from all this. But all I think is: Tobias. He needs me, but I need this. I going back; back to Abnegation. What's taking this train so long!?
Finally I see the trains bright headlights break through the fog. Once it passes me I start to run to pick up speed. I grab on to the handle and jump on the train. Setting my black duffel bag next to me, I slide my back down the wall of the train. Warm tears slide down face. I remember when Tobias told me he that I was his family yesterday in this exact train. We were talking about Marcus and Evelyn. He told me he didn't need them, I was his family now. Well was.
Now his only family is leaving him behind. I'm so sorry Tobias. I whisper in my head. I see Abnegation in the distance. It's time for me to jump. I land hard; I walk away from the rails and head towards Abnegation; Leaving Dauntless and my only true family behind.
Sorry if that was bad. Tell me what you think. PM me, review, do whatever you'd like. Tell me what you would like to happen next or what I should fix. I promise the chapters will get longer, I hate short chapters. Yours truly, MSC. Also if you can tell me what are the three books mentioned in my username you're a true bookworm.