Kaki Note

This is a poem I wrote about Naruto. Nobody say "Kaki is spelled Khaki." Because khaki isn't Japanese. Kaki is.

-X-

Burning the evil outside,

Drowning to die,

On my Last night,

I feel the Earth push upwards,

The air twisting around me,

The twigs beneath my feet,

Hearing a nearby kitten meow.

I heard footsteps and twigs breaking,

I must be in a forest with animals,

I hadn't drunken any sake,

You may think it's a lie, but I'm sober. Sorry.

I'm feeling hopeless,

Knowing that no cat would feel sympathy for me,

Being in a forest filled with them wouldn't help,

Injected with snake venom,

I feel as if I'm falling,

Stepping forward,

Thinking of Konoha's cherry blossom one last time.

I knew there was no scarecrow where I was going,

No fields of green,

No thunder barreling around me,

Or lightning during a storm,

Just the peace and quiet I hate,

The one I'm trapped in.

I step forward,

It's not my time,

But I'm going anyways,

I'm being punished,

For being a demon,

A piece of me that I couldn't control.

Part of me believes I should've have gone with Sasuke,

To Orochimaru.

He'd have been glad,

To have me.

But no.

Sakura would be in trouble,

With such a maniac on the loose.

I can see her cucumber eyes,

It's easier to see now,

I'm not blinded anymore.

I understand,

Everything,

Sasuke was my best friend,

And Sakura no more than a friend.

Hinata had a crush on me,

And others treated me like friends.

I never hurt this village,

Yet they attack me,

In hopes of breaking me,

In hopes of tearing me,

But no,

My dreams,

My ideals,

My ambitions,

They treat me,

They keep me going,

They stop me from quitting,

They're here to save me,

To help me,

To enjoy things with me.

Nothings choking me,

As I lay on the ground,

Lifeless,

I hope I stay this way,

It's so peaceful.

No more abuse,

No more hate to deal with,

Everyone loves me where I'm going,

And I'm welcome to stay.

-X-

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