I'm finally going to do it! Revising this story is going to be hard, seeing as how far I'm come on it, but I know that with some encouragement I can do it in no time!

Underlining is author's notes.

Italic Bold is… well… if you've seen my other story you know that this is the evil voice from within the main character. For others, this is the evil within any character that has come to the surface.

Italic underlining is Wolfstar's thoughts, or whoever's thoughts if the chapter is told from their point of view when they're talking back to the voice.

All three is a fun fact in between pages of Microsoft word. I've originally put them in the footers, but they won't show here, so I'll do it this way!

Italics to emphasize the word.

Read on, and enjoy the story! Remember to leave a REVIEW, it will be MUCH appreciated! Even if you're a guest! If you have a complaint, just pm me instead of leaving a tainted thought/opinion/review for others to see. I love you all! Song choice for this chapter: Before The Dawn by Evanescence. I do not own the song nor the band. If I did, I'd be filthy stinking rich right now and would have no reason to post this.

The Legend Of Wolfstar (Revised Edition)

Prologue

Have you ever had a dream before? One that you've lived over and over, but never quite reach the end? Yea, I know how you feel, and I've been through that. Here's my dream. Imagine a tall seven foot six green man, with pointy ears, pink muscles, is wearing a turban and a cape, chasing you. Through a forest. A never ending forest, covered in darkness that you yourself cannot escape. Yea, I bet that you've never had that happen to you. Well, right now that's happening. Right now.

Breathing hard, I skip over rocks and twigs, running but never really reaching my goal, as usual. The hard footsteps behind me is a tell-tale sign that my unwanted dream guest has gained speed, and is closing in fast; his hot breath running down the nape of my neck. I've never been so terrified in my life; he's never been this close before…

This time, I reach a dead end. A solid wall, made of rocks. I don't stop, I only leap as high as I can go, and gain somewhat of a footing as I proceed to pull myself up higher, scaling the thing in a matter of seconds. That's never been there before… I think. I stop thinking momentarily and look back, only to see that I'm not being followed any longer. I slow my stride to a halt, jerking my head side to side, ensuring that I've outrun my personal hunter.

"Up here, Wolfstar." I shudder at the voice as my breathing stops mid-inhale. As I look up, I see him, staring back at me intently. He drops to my side. I try to run again, but he blocks my way, seeming to warp in front of me.

"There is no need to run anymore, Wolfstar…" He says, taking a step forward; his hand comes under my chin and pushes it up to see his face. My eyes widen…

I gasp awake from my dream. How could this be? He's never gotten this close before… I panic when I hear wind howl beside my window, and jump out of the bed, knocking over the books from my nightstand in the process. A few alarmed and concerned muffled voices are heard as footsteps come closer to my bedroom door.

"Hey, are you ok in there? I heard a noise, are you hurt?"

I gather myself up from the floor, and rub the back of my head where I hit it, and walk over to the door, leaning my head against it.

"I'm fine, just had a bad dream, is all mom. Don't worry about it."

"Alright, I've got to go to work now, but if anything is wrong, or if you're sick, you just give me a call, ok?"

"Ok, g'nite mom."

"Night. See you in the morning."

As her foot-falls fade to the distance, I hear a soft click of the front door closing. Turning around, I quickly shuffle to my dresser, open a drawer, and take out a binder. Flipping it open to the first page, I write down the visions that have come to me in my previous nightmares. For days now, I've been having those dreams, but also visions of wicked battles, the green man with a wolfish looking demon, and a few other warriors in a group.

I pick up the binder, grab a pencil, and sit at the desk on the opposite side of my room. As I sit down and let myself relax against the back of the chair, I hear a voice.

"At last, Wolfstar, I've found you!" Gasping, I close my eyes and bunch my shoulders up. No, no, no this can't be right! This isn't happening, not in my home! He couldn't have found me!

His shadow appears bigger and bigger as he walks towards me, my back turned to him. He lays his hands on my shoulders, causing me to jump slightly. He lets out a grunt of amusement.

"You were always the nervous one in the beginning, weren't you?"

I feel him look over my shoulder at the desk, seeing the open binder and blank pages. I can scent him, smelling of pine trees and morning dew… I shake my head, and the man behind me snickers in amusement once again.

"Passing on our legacy, are you? I'm so proud of you, Wolfstar."

I tense up as he speaks the name aloud again. Why is he calling me that? My name is not Wolfstar! I shake his hands loose and jerk around, my eyes still closed.

"My name isn't Wolf-"

I open my eyes to an empty room. What the… I quickly fumble the pencil in my hand and turn around. I can't believe how close he's come… I must be going insane… I breathe in…

I can't just abandon this task now. I must get this done, even if it kills me.

I breathe out as lead hits paper.

I know that some of you are quite excited for this, and I hope that you like it. Ok, as for updating, I'm going to do this: when I get done with the chapter after the one that I've posted here, and the one after that, I'll post the chapter after this. This way, I won't get any troubles with writer's block… at least for a while, seeing as how I've typed and posted most of the story already XD

Oh, and for those who've already read the other story, consider this; I might just change a few things about this, so things may get a little more unexpected.

Sorry that this is short, but believe me, it gets a heck of a lot better with each chapter.

Some things will stay the same, so you won't get confused. Now, I can't say anymore for those who haven't read this yet without spoiling it! Until then, READ, REVIEW, FOLLOW, FAVORITE, it would help me with my revisions.