Chapter 1: there back!: Narrator: after Goku and friends defeated cell , buu , frieza , and eh well after all evil was defeated every thing was settled Goku decided to collect all of the dragon balls.
Goku: there all of the dragon balls
Goten: yeah!
Gohan: alright!
Chi Chi: yeah yeah we got them but what r we going to wish for if all evil is gone.. think!
Goku: don't worry Chi Chi I got it cover Shenron: STATE YOUR WISH.
Goku: yes mister Shenron I want to wish for my dad and my brother.
Shenron:YOUR WISH GRATED.
Goku:yes!
Then all of a sudden bardock and Ratiz appeared.
Bardock: what where am I ?
Ratiz:it appears were on this planet known as earth...but wait I died to that green guy... and by my own brother.
Bardock:what.. who are all of yal people?
Goku:so you are my dad. oh yeah there my peps.
Bardock:peps?.. any way how bout a little sparing lesson
Goku:eh..well okay but remember I wont be holding back
Bardock:deal!
Ratiz:well I want in.
Gohan:yeah me too.
Goten:yeah I want to fight my grandpa.
Trunks:i will beat all of ya!
Goten:Trunks! When did u get here?.
Trunks:i was at my house bored to death then I herd the word fighting.
In Bardock mind :eh that kid got super hearing ….how did he hear?
Vegeta: I WANT TO FIGHT KAKOROT (sorry if I misspell that)
in Bardock mind: HIM TOO! Oh why not get the hole city.
Bardock:ANY ONE ALSE YOU WANT TO INFITE SON
Goku:no that's it
Bardock:goo. Just as Bardock was going to Finnish he's sentence tien and the little mime child comes
Bardock: :{
Goku got a call from kami
Kami:Goku I collected the dragon balls
Goku:how did u do that?
Kami:please Goku I made them I can make them again
Goku:so there's two sets of dragon balls!
Kami:... DONT MOCK ME!
Goku:okay whatever I'm going over there with a small group
Goku:hey guys and Chi Chi lets go to the look out
Chi Chi: um Goku dear I cant FLY!
Goku:oh right here hold on tight!
As all of them fly to the look out except Bardock and Ratiz
Goku:oh follow us
so now Bardock and Ratiz are following our Z warriors
kami comes out
Kami:yeah here the thing about them..um I kinda forgot how to make them so instead of dragon balls there golden chicken eggs
all:WHAT!
Authors thoughts:
man wasn't that a twist. poor bardock all he wanted to do is fight he's son :(...well hold on for the next chapter
