This is my First Story so go easy on me ok. This story takes the whole Naruto story to what I believe to new heights so please review nicely.
Disclaimer: I do not own Naruto, as the canon is going downhill and fan fiction is way better so here is the first story.
My World My Story
Chapter 1 "My name is Kazama Naruto"
A man in a dark cell a bloody man with scars all over his body is locked up as he hears screams of demons and pierced flesh. "Yo ningen! A loud voice echoes in the air as the man sees a flamed figure at front of him with a sinister smile directing at him. Its been how many years around 50 years or so the figure talks to the man like they are friends "and you did not even scream, ningen your shaming us demons yo ahahah! The figure laughs. "Time to get started" the figure opens his black eyes and then flames erupt with intent to make the man suffer.
The man closes his eyes and darkness envelops him.
A small scrawny blond haired boy is seen burying someone in small forest that has a beautiful view to a lake in fire country.
A brown haired man with honey eyes is seen in the clearing he currently attires a brown clock covering is figure. Izumo the self proclaimed greatest bandit and his gang just raided a civilian village looking at what he got he grunted "damn I should have got more than this damn Konoha ninjas. So him and his gang stumble in the forest to heal" Yo Boss should we go look for some food. His subordinate calls. "Damn right u should think for your self". Man what a life I have Izumo thought.
Yo boss look at what we found. "Tch" glaring out the sky he got up and looked at what the commotion is about, he then sees a boy a very scrawny boy dead with wisker marks on his cheeks. Looking at very close inspection the boy has a very beautiful looking pendant with sky blue colours it shines with amazing aura.
Nice lucky one of his surbordinates reaches out to take it. "Man what a day first we steal from a village then Konoha ninjas come acting like heroes damn that red eyed woman and her illusions. Now we are taking from this dead kid "troublesome" Izumo thinking to himself.
"Ahhh roars a voice MACHI man he killed Machi" who what Konoha is here Izumo looks around there is no one in sight. "Boss the kid just slit Machi's throat he is not an ordinary kid" Izumo looks at the scene and he is shocked at qhat he sees a kid a very bloody kid at that this doesn't scare him what scared him was the boys eyes those Ice blue eyes "those eyes are not the eyes of a kid" thought Izumo. Did...your...mother...Teach...you... not...touch...things...that...are...not...yours. The kid gasps out.
"Damn Kid you killed our friend u brat". A large bald man with an axe is about to swing and decimates the kid.
"WAIT" roars a voice. The large man stops on his tracks, as he obediently listens to his boss."
"Kid whats your name we wont kill you" Izumo says but thinks eyes like that on a kid only murderers have these eyes shudders Izumo.
"Uzu gasps the boy but he stops
Flashback
"Neh matron why don't people like me a young Naruto says to his first friend a beautiful black haired woman who frowns on what he said.
"Naru chan there are people that like you" says the woman
"No one likes me stutters a crying Naruto
"but they are Naru chan" says the woman
"then WHY DONT PEOPLE ADOPT ME" cries out Naruto
Oh Naruto thought the woman she than makes a decision that changes naruto's life forever
"I like you Naruto and you know there is someone who wants to adopt you" exclaims the woman
"Who stutters Naruto hopefully he sees matron going down on his level and straight up kisses in the forehead.
"Ore desu says the woman. Naruto's eyes shine in delight.
The woman then says "my name is Kazama Yukari and you my boy are now called Kazama Naruto my son.
What...says Naruto with fountain of tears. as he thinks back the time with the sandaime
"Neh ojjisan do I have parents if I do who are they" says Naruto to the sandaime
"Your parents Naruto I don't know who they are Naruto" says the sandaime ignoring naruto's reaction while trying to finish the mountain of paperwork.
"Your wrong ojjisan" says Naruto with a happy smile on his face while playing with his new mother. An equally happy Yukari. "I HAVE A MOM RIGHT HERE screams a happy smiling Naruto
"Shhh Naruto don't scream its late says Yukari
Naruto smiles sheepishly rubbing the back of his hand, "hai kaasan"
End of flashback
"No Kazama Naruto thats my name says Naruto to the bandit named Izumo
"Kazama Naruto huh Chaos Maelstrom or chaos Fishcake ahahaha" says Izumo laughing suddenly ignoring the atmosphere they are in.
"Oresai says Naruto as he faints.
"Boss shall we kill him says his subordinate. No we shall take the kid to our village. suprising his gang "WHY" his gang screams defiantly. Listen to what I say and do it roars izumo
"HAI" his gang screams out. Kazama Naruto something tells me no screams at me that making you live is the right thing to do.
"Lets set out to mist exclaims Izumo.
Two years later
"Yo Izumo ossan" says an eight year old Naruto running up a hill to his temporary home looking at him Naruto did not change much only his scrawny looking body developed more as he had more food to eat these past few years his clothes he is currently wearing is brown boots with black shinobi pants and a black t-shirt and a brown cloak he is still wearing the same pendant as he runs up the hill clutching it tightly.
"Kassan Naruto thinks sadly as he flashbacks the death of his mother. And anger rises to take control.
"Yes kiddo says izumo staring at Naruto who stops what he is doing the man is at front of his house waiting for Naruto. Naruto stops right at him looking at him expectantly.
"Ossan Naruto says very loudly at that."
" Its SIR idiot" Izumo bonks Naruto over the head.
"Ossan I mean sir I am strong aren't" I says Naruto out of the blue. Izumo looks at him and his eyes narrows.
"Yes you are brat! says Izumo with his gang do chores, over the two years Izumo trained Naruto how to hunt and weaponry Naruto learned how to us all kinds of weapons and surprisingly is very proficient at all of them but Naruto wanted to learn the shinobi arts and nagged Izumo about so he gave Naruto academy jutsus he stole from ninja villages him and his gang been to in the past. Naruto learned the basic three academy based jutsus very quickly.
"I want to help and Join Mist village" Naruto says to the person that saved and raised him.
SLAP the sound echoes in the air as Naruto looks up to Izumo tears come out of his eyes.
"NO ALRIGHT NO" screams Izumo as his subordinate all looks at him but then looks at Naruto eye to eye and his mind is conflicted he remembers the look Naruto gave him two years ago those cold blue eyes should not be on you Naruto thinks Izumo.
But I want to become a shinobi sir says a tear eyed naruto. Izumo is a level headed man and tells Naruto to come inside so that he can hear him out.
"Why Naruto do you want to become a ninja not just a ninja but a ninja of the bloody mist depending on your answer I might reconsider boy! Says Izumo
"I...I...Just thinks is right" says Naruto his hair covering his eyes
"YOU DO KNOW THERE IS A CIVIL WAR RIGHT" screams Izumo he calms down and then says "why Naruto tell me what brought this on. Izumo says to the boy that is his son all but blood.
"You know about my life right? says Naruto Izumo's eyes goes wide.
Over the time they meet and took the boy named Kazama Naruto it was hard to make him open as when Naruto woke up he was very violent it took lots of people to hold the hysterical boy down it took the big man with the axe named kenji to stop him with a punch in the head. As time went by the boy slowly opened when he found out they meant no harm. He told them about what he endured in Konoha and what has happened to him.
Poor kid endured hell in that village and to top it all of his mother is killed right at front of him. What did a kid this young do to deserve this says a very angry Izumo wishing ihe s just up and went and kill the fucking hokage.
"You want revenge says Izumo eyeing Naruto expectantly wanting to know the answer
"Don't know but if I found those responsible I will kill them "says Naruto
"Is that so says a sad Izumo "do not let revenge he gets cut off by Naruto. "But I wont let it control me I will found out those responsible I believe thats not revenge its justice because if I let them get away with this they will hurt more people someday". But this has nothing to do with joining mist says Naruto looking at Izumo with eyes shining so bright.
"What" says Izumo with a shocked expression. Then why do you want to join mist says Izumo who looks at Naruto who gets up to go outside as the sun sets and makes the boy look so radiant Naruto looks at his father figure with a smile who shocks Izumo because he has not seen a smile so bright.
"Because tousan" Izumo's eyes go wide at that word, I am not a hypocrite and let those people suffer the way I suffered says Naruto.
What Naruto said made Izumo smile with tears coming in his eyes.
"Yo kid stop acting cool" says Kenji who bear hugs Naruto from behind." Yeah" screams out the gang who everyone then erupt in laughter. Izumo looks at Naruto and then lowly mutters tousan huh.
"Its DECIDED boy I will let you go exclaims Izumo who has a bright smile
"But boss where will the boy get the training he only knows academy jutsus says Kenji worriedly
"What kind of dad would I be if I let my soon go to war unprepared I know a man who owes me a favour says Izumo.
"Who says Kenji who sees Izumo with a glint in his eyes and then takes back his statement you mean him! says Kenji shocked.
"Yes the man who failed to do a coup de tat coincidently we are meeting in a bar tomorrow says Izumo.
"But he will kill the young lad! Yells Kenji at Izumo who gives a bright smile and then responds don't worry zabuza will see what I see in Naruto and will surely start the boy's career.
"Yo Kid don't drink that its not water Izumo hears his subordinate and looks at Naruto drinking sake thats meant for him and sees Naruto drinking the whole bottle.
NARUTO everyone screams!
"Aahahahaha a kid who can handle his first sake that well will be alright in my book says a happy laughing kenji.
"Thats right says Izumo who then screams EVERYONE WE WILL RETIRE FOR THE NIGHT!
Aye aye sir!
As time went by Naruto a ten year old Naruto met Zabuza who at first did not help Naruto and declined Izumo's request but as time went by and Naruto's constnat nagging Zabuza over and over again and Zabuza proceeding to beat up Naruto every time. Zabuza then gave in and taught Naruto tree walking, water walking and other chakra control exercises since Zabuza found out Naruto has a huge amount of chakra monstrous even. He then proceeded to found out Naruto's element affinity who surprisingly has three main elements that he is strong in they are Wind, Water and lightning. He taught Naruto various water techniques like the hidden mist technique, the water prison technique, the water clone technique and the water dragon technique.
As they bonded Naruto then told Zabuza what he is planning to do who then responded "don't die kid until I come back and be the Mizukage" in which Naruto then promised he wont die and that his nindo is to never break promises. They then parted ways with Naruto trying to hug Zabuza in which Zabuza trying to cleave him in half.
Naruto then went home to meet Izumo who wanted Naruto to come with him to tanzuki town in fire country.
In fire country
"Neh Izumo why are we going to tanzuki town screams Naruto looking at Izumo who is washing his hair in a waterfall
"Mah mah why such a hurry Naruto kun says an annoyed Izumo who is clearly enjoying the sensation he is feeling. Naruto annoyed that Izumo ignored him that easily hears a voice and is on guard and goes to the voice .
"Tch grunts a white haired man holding a scroll who is seen running up trees apparently running away from someone. Mizuki you wont get away says a voice damn anbu they catched up says Mizuki with an annoyed expression he then jumps down and puts the forbidden scroll safely in a bush and then runs off.
naruto comes out of the same bush who then falls down to the ground because he tripped on a huge scoll. Naruto then notices the scoll and opens it he hears a voices and rips out a portion and throws the scroll in the ground and runs of the same direction as Mizuki. The anbu then come in the clearing seeing the forbidden scoll and rolls it up not knowing it is missing a piece.
Naruto comes back to the waterfall and sits down looking at what he got completely ignoring Izumo's whistling while he is showering.
"Kage Bunshin huh another damn clone technique Naruto was raised by bandits and adopted thier thievery ways gleefully smiled "Lucky" ossan I'm going to train says Naruto who walks off
"ITS SIR DAMN BRAT Naruto who hears that then laughs
Two hours Later
A dirty Naruto is seen going back to the waterfall
Man that was tough learning this technique says Naruto who bumps into a frantic Mizuki.
"Watch where you going brat says an enraged Mizuki who is looking for the scroll that he left in the bush" damn did the anbu find it mutters Mizukis who then hears a voice that says sorry he then looked at where the voice came from and notices Naruto by his whiskers marks and smiles a sinister smile clearly ignoring the situation he is in.
"Well if it isn't the demon brat thought you were dead well I guess not demons don't die but this is good as I will finish what the Yondaime started says a gleeful Mizuki who makes Naruto's eye go wide as his thinks back on what happened.
Die Demon brat
Monster die
Naru chan run
KASAAN!
"What did you say muttered an enraged Naruto who gets out his kunai ready to attack Mizuki.
"I said Demon so what says Mizuki who looks at Naruto's enrage expression and a sinister Idea is formed in his head.
"Do you know why you called that do you what you are says Mizuki who sees Naruto' shocked expression and carries on. You Naruto are a demon a Monster the fox who attacked Konoha the day you were born. The Yondaime defeated it and put the monster inside you are the KYUUBI ahahahah! Says an insane Mizuki.
"What? is that why mutters Naruto who then thinks about all that has happened all the time he asked the sandaime why the village hated him and abused him. He screams in anger and his chakra flares in tremendously.
WHY! Screams naruto in tears
Seeing Naruto open Mizuki throws his favourite demon shuriken intending to cleave him in half
Blood flew as Naruto in the ground looks up and sees a bloody Izumo having a large shuriken sticking inside him.
Tears envelope Naruto's wide eyes remembers what happened to his mother and to his father figure
"Tousan oi tousan says a teary eyed Naruto holding on to his father figure. Izumo opens his bloody eyes and responds stuttering; you alright kiddo listen yeah you are not a monster you are human.
Naruto's eyes go wide as Izumo carries on Naruto live and its not your fault ok
Naruto closes his eyes "look at me Naruto Promise that you will move foward don't look back in your path to become a shinobi and find you true home" coughs Izumo as he carries on, "also Promise me something and makes Naruto come to him closely.
"Nani says a devastated Naruto as he comes close to Izumo and listens closely. These four words that comes from Izumo's mouth changes Naruto's life and the world forever BECOME THE STRONGEST! Says a smiling Izumo who then dies.
Ahahaha what a pathetic man who would take a demon in as a son a demon loving scum deserved what he got. Says Mizuki
"Izumo Mutters Naruto who looks at Mizuki with anger has red chakra leaks out of him IZUMO screams out Naruto who attacks Mizuki intent to kill and Naruto's world went black he faintly hears screaming and hears a loud Voice "Hello Gaki"
5 years later
A party is erupting people hugging and cheering all but a young Man with golden hair its not spiky but calm and smooth (like dante in DMC 4) and cold blue eyes with whiskers marks on his cheeks is standing at front of a gate in intending to leave.
The man's wearing black Shinobi pants with shinpads and has brown boots with black T shirt and has his mothers pendant he is covered with a blue cloak. He also has a short blade with a white sheath on his back torso
WAIT KAZAMA NARUTO the man is naruto who then stops on his tracks and turns around to the voice he hears and sees a woman with Auburn Hair very well figured in all areas that men would die for. The woman's name is Mei Terumi the new Godaime Mizukage. What is it you want Terumi san Naruto smoothly responds.
"Please stay if it wasn't for you we would not have won if it wasn't for your strength and sacrifice please stay. Pleads Mei
"Why says Naruto looking at the party and then looks at Mei
"You should know what's happening everyone knows who you are in the world you saved this Kuni along with wave in that Kuni your a saviour so are you here you don't have to leave stay with your friends.
Friends huh says Naruto who smiles
Yes friends say Mei who blushes at his smile. This is your home Naruto Kun
Mei what did I say when we first met says Naruto
She thinks and responds "you have a promise to fulfill" and then walks towards him.
Naruto while his eyes is closed responds "yes until those two promises are fulfilled I can't ..he gets stopped mid sentence when he feels a something warm and realises Mei has hugged him.
While they are like this she says "go fulfil those promises and make sure to comeback to me ok says Mei who reluctantly lets go.
Naruto looks at her will a true smile "its been fun Mei I am lucky we met even though we meet in the battlefield"
Mei giggles that's right I kicked your ass says Mei and then erupts in laughter someone in his mind decides to add her two cents "Haven't seen a man get his ass kicked so fast Naruto Kun says a red haired woman who is very beautiful and has a figure to puts women to shame and bust that equals to that of Tsunade this woman is Kyuubi." They met after the death of Mizuki and surprisingly got along pretty fast the reason being is that Kyuubi saw Naruto's life since then they have been friends since.
"Oresai damn woman you want to go now shouts an angry Naruto
"Oh naruto you pervert hitting on me in the outside in broad day light no less says a giggling Mei
What do you mean? Tch forget it I have to go but if you want to then lets make an engagement says an oblivious Naruto
Engagement...Marriage with Naruto Kun thought Mei Blushing a storm.
Pressing on the matter even worse the idiotic Naruto grabs both her shoulders which shocked a blushing Mei who looks straight at Naruto while looks at her Emerald meet Azure and says "then it is a date" he smiles
Mei looks at Naruto processing on what he said and fainted right there.
MEI OI MEI!
The man wakes up has his bloody body heals mutters "Kazama Naruto is that my name the Bloody Man then Smiles
What a nice Name...
If you want to Know whats happening I have the overall synopsis to what's going on its at my page Come and see
the next chapter will come soon if you like this you can adopt this...
Peace Iamafan123