Have I ever told you?, a code lyoko fanfic

Disclamer: I do not own code lyoko or any other TV show of any kind and the openions in this story are strictly those of the author

Ok so this is just a sad little poem I wrote late at night when I couldent sleep. It is from Aleita's POV talking to Odd who is in a coma due to Xana's latest atack. She is laminting over how she loves Odd, but feels that she owes Jerimy somthing for his help geting her to earth. this is my first fanfiction of anything at all so I would love a little constructive critisisum.

Have I ever told you that when I look at you you make me laugh?

Have I ever told you that your smile makes my heart leap and want to dance?

Have I ever told you that I worry when you save my life?

And have I ever told you that I wish that I could pay a price

to have you back here, with me?

Have I ever told you that it brakes me to see you lying there

empty and alone, unattached and cold?

Have I ever told you that when you fell that I fell too?

Have I ever told you that if you died I would die with you?

Have I ever told you that I love you?

How I want to tell you,

But if I ever told you my heart would die if you didn't love me too.

Have I ever told you that you are my sun and rain?

Have I ever told you that your touch is worth more than all the money in the world?

Have I ever told you that when I hug you I want hold you in my arms forever?

Have I ever told you that when you hold my hand the whole earth sings in harmony for me?

Have I ever told you that I miss you?

But if I ever told you you might get hurt more than you already are,

sleeping an unrestful slumber,

that may only kill you in the end.

Have I ever told you that your voice makes me want to cry,

because of all you do for me?

Have I ever told you that my debt is all that holds me back,

my gratitude for life on earth holds me from my true desire.

Have I ever told you that I love you?

Have I ever told you?

No, I never told you.

Now I fear I'll never have the chance.