My first fan flick hope you like it

Chapter 1

Lorelei walks in to diner

"Hey Luke coffee now I'm dying need caffeine"

"Coming right up. To go I'm guessing"

"Yep! you know it"

"So Lorelei umm. what r u doing Friday night?"

"I dunno maybe something with Rory why do you ask?"

"Actually I think Rory is hanging with Jess. And cause I wanted to know if wanted to go to dinner or a movie."

"Umm. Ok Luke I guess I'm free I gotta go. The Inn's really busy and it can't run it is self see you l8er."

"Ya bye"

I can't believe I just ask Lorelei out.

"Hey Uncle Luke" Jess walk down stairs rubbing his eyes looking like he just woke up.

"Hey Jess you want coffee or do you want to start working right away it's your choice." As he finishes Rory walks in.

"I'll take a coffee Luke and to go I gotta catch my bus."

"Ok 1 sec. Rory."

"Hey Rory" As jess says her name he smiles just a little.

"Hey Jess Read anything good lately" also smiling as she says his name.

"Ya always"

"Here ya go Rory' "Thanks Luke. See ya Jess."

"Wait Rory let me walk you to your bus stop"

"Jess you don't have to."

"Come on let me"

"Ok let's go"

"So Rory You still with Dean?"

"Yep why do you ask"

"Just asking. Do you want to hang on Friday?"

"Ummm. Ya sure I guess I don't think I have anything planned. What did you have in mind to do?"

"Ummm. I was thinking movie or we could do something else that you would like to do."

"Ya a movie sounds great. Did you have a movie in mind or did you want to pick one together"

"Together is fine with me"

They were now at Rory's bus stop.

"Ok I got to get on the bus see you later."

"Alright Bye"

Standing there at the bus stop thinking yes I did it I asked her out.

Rory sits down on the bus. Oh my god did Jess just ask me out and did I say yes. I thought I was going out wit Dean. Maybe I should be with Jess no wait ya I do like him and I think he may like me but what it he doesn't I wish he would make a move. Maybe I should brake up with dean for Jess I don't know what to do.

Ok this is my first ever fan flick please review (only good please thanks) Jess is so hot!! If you have any suggestion I will gladly take them. Next chapter will be up soon.