This is my first story on fanfic. Please PLEASE review and point out anything I suck at.
Disclaimer drill: I do not own FOZ or Guilty Crown. If I did then they would never exist.
Chapter 1: The summoning (REWRITEN)
Loop 7
It was finally over, Shu Ouma became a martyr and absorbed all of the Apocalypse Virus. Now he is forever trapped in crystal.
But then a green orb appeared around him and took the guilty king somewhere else in the universe.
Tristan Magic Academy
"Now, was that everyone?" Mr. Colbert questioned as he looked around the courtyard.
"Louise the Zero still hasn't gone yet" pointed out Kriche.
"Alright then, Ms. Valliere if you would please."
All the students then formed a circle around Louise wondering if she will even summon a familiar at all or if it will result in an explosion again.
"My servant that existed somewhere in this vast universe" Louise started chanting. "My divine, beautiful, wise, and powerful servant. Heed my call, I wish from very bottom of my heart and add to my guidance and appear!"
BOOM
"Just as expected, another explosion by Louise the Zero!" a student yelled out.
Just as the smoked cleared, it revealed a boy with only a left arm wearing a large black coat, white shirt, black pants, and red scarf with a symbol on his hand. But what's more is that this boy was inside some kind of black tinted crystal substance.
"What did I summoned?" thought Louise.
Kriche then started laughing "I can't believe that you summoned a peasant. Much less a useless and disabled one."
"I just made a mistake!" Louise yelled back, "Mr. Colbert, can I try summoning again?"
"I cannot allow that" declared Colbert, "This is a sacred ritual to mages, trying again is blasphemous to the ritual itself! Whether you like it or not, this boy is your familiar."
"But I've never heard of a peasant for a familiar! He only has one arm and is trapped in crystal" Louise retort back.
"Disabled peasant or not, there will be no exceptions," Colbert firmly said, "Now continue on with the ritual. If you do not, then you will really be expelled this time."
Louise advanced to the crystal. "My name is Louise Francoise Le Blanc de La Valliere. Pentagon that rules the five powers, bless this individual, and make him my familiar." Louise then proceeded to kiss the crystal.
All the sudden the crystal disappeared and the boy fell to the ground. The familiar runes was then burned onto his left hand over his King's Mark.
"That mark and rune, both are unfamiliar to me," thought Colbert as he saw both Shu's King's Mark and the recently familiar rune, "I will have to look them up afterwards." "And that is the end of the summoning ritual!"
Alright first chapter done! Shu still has his Power of the King along with the Gandalf. Wait, does that mean that…gasps, he does not need that scanner thing. What void things should in the FOZ people? Oh the possibilities, give me some ideas.
(Rewritten) Now I feel accomplished. Take that sister of mine.