Author's Note!:
Hello! It's Anak Kage here!
My story here 'The Luck of A Snake' is a re-written version of 'Orochimaru's Second Chance'. You see after I finished the last chapter of it there were so MANY mistakes such as incorrect sentences that didn't make sense, wrong spellings and the plot was just MESSED UP!…. So yeah nearly a year latter I have finally re-written it!
So please enjoy the story and remember to review. But if you don't like the story please save your time and don't send me a whole list of insults because I really don't know why you would bother. But to the people who DO like this story pretty please review! (puppy eyes)
'humm'= What character is thinking in their head.
"Hello"= What character is when character is saying something
CAPITAL IN BOLD= Jutsu
The Luck of A Snake
Chapter 1: Anata, The Watch and The Computer
"Will you remember me when I die?"
"Your asking a stupid question"
"Maybe I' am, maybe I'm not"
"I wont let you die"
"Then what if I disappear?"
"I'll find you"
"Ugh!" I shouted as I sat up in my bed clinging to my head, unsure of what was happening in my mind.
Just a dream I said to myself. Just a dream. But a dream that I had been having for nearly everyday for a month…
Trying steadily to look at the time it was only 4am in the morning. It was way too early for me to be up since I just fell asleep 3 hours ago. So crawling under the sheets I tried to fall asleep once again.
"Sis! Wake up already!"
"Numufbu~" My face groaned into the pillow.
"If you don't wake up I'll eat your breakfast!"
The moment my little sister said that my body shot up from bed and ran to the stairs.
"Elphie don't YOU DARE!"
"Haha morning sis" The smaller girl walked back into the kitchen down stairs with a Cheshire cat smile across her face.
My name is Anata, I'm13 and I have short silver hair with brown eye's. I currently live with my mother and little sister that's a year younger than me ever since my dad died but my older sister is away travelling with her boyfriend.
Yawning I stretched back my arms and ruffled my silver hair. When I finally got down my mum and sister were already eating breakfast.
"Food~"
"Morning hun'. I gotta go now but take care"
"Wa', already?" I said pulling up a chair.
"Yeah, you know how worked up I get when a rich family book in!" My mum said cheerfully while she grabbed her bad and made her way to the door.
"Love you darlings see you later!"
"Bye!~" Elphie and I sang as she closed the door.
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A while later I was finishing off my food and Elphie was cleaning up some of the dishes.
"Flip! Anata mum forgot her phone again!"
"Well I ain't going out I'm still in my pyjamas!"
"Yeah but I have homework!"
"…. fine"
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Just under fifteen minutes later I was dress in my normal jeans and T-shit running towards my mum's restaurant. My mum and dad used to own it but ever since dad died mum manages it and cooks in there too.
I decided to take a short cut while I ran through the quiet street's and down in to a thin ally way.
While I was running a tall figure in a long purple coat was standing in front of me. "Hey~ Interested in this!" I stopped running, but kept my distance from the figure.
"Oh don't worry I don't bite!" The person had a playful feminine voice and made a rhyme as she spoke. (If you read my story 'Mrs Sakura?' can you guess who it is? *wink* *wink*)
The person pulled down their hood to revile a young woman in her later teens with night black hair, onyx black eye's but flawless skin smiling with her rosy cheeks.
"So do you want it?~"
"Who are you?" I asked not sure if I should trusted this person.
"Don't worry it's just a watch my friend doesn't want it anymore but you look like you would fine it useful!"
"Thanks but I don't have any money"
I was about to turn away and continue running but then the girl said "Isn't there something you really want? Doesn't everyone have a wish they want granted?"
"What the hell are you talking about?"
"Come on you don't have to believe me and this baby doesn't cost a thing! I just want it to be taken care of. Please." Her voice sounded playful until the last part.
"Um-" Before I could say anything else she held out a hand showing me an old Victorian classic pocket watch encrusted with gold and carefully made patterns.
"No way, and you want to get rid of it! It could cost a fortune!"
"Hey~ It isn't me who wants to get rid of it! I swear~ Heehee! Here ya GO!"
She lunged the watch towards me and ran straight away in the direction I came from.
'Strange woman…. I didn't even get her name' I thought to my self as I made my way to mum. But something kept in my mind the whole time after I retrieved the watch. 'What did the woman mean by a wish?…'
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"Baby! Thank you so much!" Suddenly mum gave me a bone crushing hug in the middle of the kitchen.
The staff were already used to her child like behaviour and continued working. I hugged her back trying my best to breath.
"Oh! I got to get back cooking now! But do you want a lift home?"
"Yeah sure but don't you have to cook some food?"
"I got 5 minutes spare"
Without any complaints we both walked out of the back door and into mum's new car.
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We arrived home in 3 minutes flat thanks to the speed mum was driving. I love who ever invented seat belts!
"Your home quick sis" Elphie yelled from the kitchen.
"Yeah mum was driving"
"No wonder. I'm gonna hang out with Nicky and everyone see you later"
"Okay then be careful"
"Always am" She closed the door as she grabbed a pair of keys on the table.
That was my queue for the computer!
After about an hour of watching episodes 113-114 of Naruto Shippuden I started to get a little sleepy. Suddenly I felt something fall from my pocket and on to the floor with a 'clink' sound, when I looked down from the side of the chair I saw the golden watch.
"Isn't there something you really want? Doesn't everyone have a wish they want granted?"
The words of the girl from earlier rushed through my head like a bullet. For a moment I thought to my self that she was right. But even if I told anyone what I really wanted to wish for they would think I'm stupid…
'Pull your self together Anata! As if the wish thing was true!' I said to my self in determination that I had been tricked into taking in a cheap and fake nick-nack that no-one wanted. But another side of me was curious and wanted to see of this was true.
Time was still in the early hours of the day but my head still hadn't had much sleep. With the watch still curled up in my hand I decided to take a nap, not bothering to change my clothes.
My eyes were still half opened when my wish slipped out in a small whisper. "If I had a wish… it would be to visit the Naruto World…"
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"aghaghh~" Yawning I sat up in bed again.
"Damn I left the computer on" I slowly started making my way towards the computer, but my legs felt like jelly. However I saw so sure I turned it off.
On the screen it was still playing the last episode I watched 'Eye of the Hawk'. It was the episode when it shows Orochimaru's past and the take over of Sasuke Uchiha. Only a few seconds of it were playing at the start.
'Should remember to clean up for once..' My room was a tip there were clothes and little stuff throw ever where and especially on the floor.
"SHIT!"
I could feel myself in slow motion fall towards the screen as I prepared to fall with a crash on the computer screen so I held my hands in front of my face, prepared for what was about to happen.
When I looked to see if I had crashed yet half of my arms were through the screen.
"HOLY MOLY MY ARMS ARE FRICKING GONE!"
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With Orochimaru at the Grave (No ones point of view)
Orochimaru and Hiruzen Sarutobi were just about leaving from the cemetery until someone from a distance was shouting towards them.
"OIII Sense! Orochimaru wait up!" Jiraiya came running out of the distance towards the other two shinobi waving his hand in the air for a while with a grin on his face.
*BOOF*
Something fell from the sky and landed straight on to Jiraiya. Orochimaru and Hiruzen ran quickly to Jiraiya only to see a tanned silver haired girl on top of Jiraiya, who had his face on the ground. Jiraiya was silent from being knocked out but the girl looked up with her eye's still closed towards Hiruzen and Orochimaru. Just before she blacked out Orochimaru heard her mumble "Stupid w-atch"
SO! What do you think! Please leave a review on what you think but please no seriously bad insults! … pweezzz