Hey. Here's the rewritten chapter 1. Enjoy

Arriving at Camp Rock

Gabriella stepped off the bus and admired the arriving of other kids and the activity going on around her. She squealed with excitement.

She was wearing a white dress with a blue and pink floral design, blue flip flops with a blue flower on top of each, and her "T" necklace hanging casually around her neck that was given to her by her current boyfriend, Troy, who was close behind her getting off the bus.

"I can't believe you talked me into this. I could be sitting at home playing video games instead of carrying loads of luggage that's not even mine." Troy said, dropping the four sacks of Gabriella's and going to get his own.

"Hey! Don't take it out on my bags, ok! There's very fragile stuff in those!" Gabriella exclaimed, annoyed by his carelessness.

"Whatever, Brie. You'll get over it." Troy said while picking all of his and hers luggage.

"Whatever. Where's everyone else? They were right behind us." Gabriella asked looking through the crowd, standing on her tippy toes.

"They're over there, surrounding that limo." Troy nodded his head to the right of her where the limo was.

Gabriella became extremely excited and started squealing again.

"What?" Troy said, smiling at her. He always found her overexcited moods extremely cute.

"I just remembered Shane Grey and his brother's are going to be here this summer, too!" She squealed again.

Troy dropped their bags. "Shane Grey?! As in your ex-boyfriend, Shane Grey?!" Troy asked, his voice a little too loud. It angered him now that Gabriella was squealing over her ex. "You would stand there and squeal over your ex right in front of me?" Troy said a little less loudly.

"Yes I would and I did." Gabriella said, a little irritated by his tone with her. "I'm going to say 'hi'." She walked away and tried to make her way through the crowd. Shane was taking an awfully long time to get out, but then again there was a huge wall of fans blocking the door.

Troy watched her walk away from him and as she went into the crowd he noticed Chad, Zeke, Jason, and Ryan standing among the crowd waiting anxiouslsy for Shane to exit the vehicle. Troy was embarrassed by his friends when he saw them with smiles on their faces. He pulled them away from the crowd and smack all of them on the back of their heads. "What's wrong with you guys? Especially you, Chad!"

"I make no apologies. Shane Grey is the greatest! He's my idol!" Chad said with pride, ignoring his best friend's look of disapproval.

Zeke shrugged. He only pretended to like Shane because of his girlfriend, Sharpay. She liked him and he liked making her happy and she was ecstatic when he lied about liking him, too. "Sharpay likes him." Zeke said.

"Martha likes him, too." Jason said in the same "whatever" tone as Zeke. He had done the same thing except it was more to get to second base.

Troy stared at his four best friends in disbelief. He pointed at Jason and Zeke in an accusing way. "You guys are whipped. And you two," Troy pointed at Ryan and Chad in the same way. "I'd call you two queer if I didn't know you had girlfriends."

Each of his four best friends rolled their eyes.

"I don't like this 'Shane Grey'." Troy stated in distaste. "Gabriella was so excited when she remembered he was coming to camp this summer she started squealing. Right in front of me!"

"So?" Chad said.

"That's her ex-boyfriend!" Troy exclaimed in a obvious tone.

"Yeah. Ex. She left him for you. I didn't know you were the jealous type, Troy. Especially when you shouldn't be jealous in the first place." Chad said.

10 minutes later

The whole group of best friends was walking to their cabins. The girls were walking ahead arm-in-arm talking about nothing and everything and the guys were behind carrying their girlfriends' and their own bags trying hard not to fall over.

"I don't remember him being so cute." Gabriella said trying to jog her memory. It amazed her that a haircut and exercise could do so much for a guy's appearance.

"I guess. I'm not impressed." Taylor said, her closest best friend.

"Me either." Kelsi said. "I have a great boyfriend and I love him. I don't care how cute Nate is!" Kelsi held her head up high.

"Oh yeah?" Martha asked. Kelsi nodded. "Who are you trying to convince, us or you?" Kelsi nudged Martha as a way of saying 'shut up'.

"I still think he's cute." Sharpay said.

"Yes!" Gabriella exclaimed.

"Please don't forget about Troy, OK? He really loves you." Taylor said.

"Troy who?" Gabriella said and began skipping ahead the rest of her friends.

When Gabriella was far enough ahead, her four best friends simultaneously said; "This isn't good," while shaking their heads.

Here it is. Hope you like this one better. The other one was against regulations and didn't look very good to me. Maybe I'll even get more views! Peace! XOXOXO^_^