This idea's been festering in my brain for a while. My friend and the girl he roleplayed with did a storyline like this and I branched a story off of it.
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Sunset cast a dim ochre
color over Konoha's tall towers. The villagers of the sleepy city
were beginning to dissapear for the oncoming night, mothers calling
the cranky children inside and ANBU pacing the dusty streets on one
last patrol. Even as it wound down, energy surged through the streets
that burst with life for one last time before dissapearing for the
night. Along the edge of a shore sat a
small child, his build placing him no more than 7 years old. He was
wholefully immersed in the piles of sand next to him, piling
fistfulls onto each other, stoically building the castle's walls in
an artistic fashion. "That looks cool." He didn't look up to
see who'd spoken. The high pitched, innocent voice could only belong
to one person. Frustrated, the raven haired boy spat into the excess
sand off to his side. He felt comforted by that voice...and it
disturbed him. "Can I help?" His onyx eyes
shot up into the cerulean gaze of a certain blond haired boy. His
smile was unnaturally warm, radiating more welcoming feelings than
he'd ever felt before. Even as his body was marred with bruises and
cuts, a mark he'd forever wear from the village's cruelty, his smile
had made him somehow...beautiful. "Look, I don't care. Help if you want." Naruto
laughed and kneeled on the opposite side of the raven, building up
the castle to where his stood. His fingers were surprisingly
dexterous, and even Sasuke had to take a moment and watch the boy
craft the sand sculpture. The two worked in silence, building
up the castle until darkness had swallowed the sun whole, and both
boys squinted with exhaustion. Sasuke smiled. His
castles were lovely. He'd been building them on the shores for years,
and had nearly perfected every detail to the point of a masterpiece. But Naruto
had...completed it. His hands sculpting the other side along
Sasuke's, and for the first time in years, the boy had completed
something. "Heh...it looks...nice." The blond
fox laughed and watched Sasuke draw closer to the castle, smile
fading as the raven kicked the creation to be swallowed by the
sea. "Sasuke!! What the hell!" Out
of the corner of his eye, Naruto could swore he spotted a smile
peeking out from the black bangs, evoking a smile of his own. Sasuke
grabbed the blond's hand and gave it a reassuring squeeze. "Only
if I can help you every night. I see you making these all
alone."
But time never touched the shores of Konoha beach.
The
orange tinted waves splashed calmly over its golden sand at the same
tempo it always had, appearing the same through each generation no
matter what the situation. It froze itself, and all who journeyed
there for peace of mind.
Pushing back his raven colored bangs, the
pale child carved detail into the sand construction, watching waves
lap dangerously close to his creation before shying away. It amused
him so that the faintest trace of a smile upturned his thin
lips.
He knew that boy anywhere. It
was the Uzumaki kid...the orphan who always yelled about becoming
something.
People like that annoyed the raven. So...confident and
clueless. They'd never know heartbreak if it bit them in the
ass.
Afterwards, they stood side by
side, admiring their creation together.
Or perhaps it would have been, but the raven could never bring
himself to complete the other side. From one angle, the intricacy was
breathtaking, but the further you went, the more sand lost its luster
and shrunk into a formless pile with its brothers.
"What's the
big deal? We'll just make another one tomorrow night."
"It's a
promise."
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The sound of glass breaking awoke Naruto with a start. Rubbing his aching eyelids, the blond shakily stood up and walked toward the sound of the disturbance. Wind whipped through his house, let rampant by the shards of glass that once held a window together. Shivering, Naruto searched through the house, ignoring flakes of snow that fell with increasing intensity onto the floor. He pulled out several boards and got to work shutting the window in for the night.
Eyes aching and skin burning with fever, the blond found it increasingly difficult to stop the cold winter air from licking his face. While at first it was soothing, the tempurature quickly got to the point where it began to burn even his fevered skin. His increasing frustration numbed his fingers all the more, and by the time he was finished, Naruto collapsed to the floor. Shards of glass dug into his exposed legs, but he ignored them. It was a trivial injury after all, Kyuubi had already begun to heal the bleeding pools.
Naruto slumped
against the boarded window, pulling himself up from the floor and
stepping to the couch. Silently he pulled the glass from his legs and
knees, his lips pursed together tightly. He refused to open them, for
fear of a sob he'd been holding back for who knows how long.
"Some
promises you just can't keep...huh Naruto?"
Laughing to
himself, the blond let a single tear run down his cheek. It felt cool
against his heated skin.
It had been a long time since those
innocent days like the one he'd dreamed about. A long time since he'd
visited that beach since then..
Sighing, Naruto stood up and made his way to the door, stepping out into the snow laden pathway. It felt like heaven against his fevered skin, but soon turned hostile. Nevertheless, he kepy dragging himself foward until he came upon a small bench, so deeply buried in the snowstorm that he almost missed it. The blond rushed towards it and dumped the snow enough to situate his small body onto the wooden seat.
For what seemed
like hours he sat and let himself get beaten and whipped by snow,
staring off into nothing. His eyes were dull and his stare empty, but
he watched that nothing with a fufillment of purpose, as if he
expected the ground to spawn something amazing.
That was when a
light clicked in his brain, and Naruto slid out from the seat and
kneeled into the deep pile of
snow.
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He shouldn't have
come. He knew he shouldn't have come. Out of all the foolish
descisions, he had to mark it as the most brash and unpredictable.
But still Sasuke stood outside the wooden Konoha gates, staring at
their massive towering authority.
He had to admit, they were a
sight to marvel.
Scoffing, the raven scaled the tall boundaries and made his way inside, walking amongst the snowy streets. They remained untouched by footprints, and contained that allure that drew him to mar their perfect surface with his tainted footprints.
But that wasn't why he was here. What in hell had drawn him to the village he'd defected from so long ago? Was there nothing of further purpose here?
Sasuke stared off into the
white maze, parting his lips. Particles of snow flew into his mouth,
dampening the dry lips and giving him enough power to whisper so low,
even he could not hear.
"Naruto."
He continued
along the snowy streets, until a slight disturbance hit his
periphreal. Something not among the dark blue and white of the city.
Walking up to the figure silently, the blood rushed from Sasuke's
face, turning him a color not unlike the snow itself.
It was
Naruto. His head was turned toward the snow, but even from the
distance he was at, Sasuke could tell the blond was crying.
His
hands were buried in the snow, crafting something odd. The white
structure spiraled off in intricate directions, and it's beauty
caused him to marvel at it for a moment.
But he refused to
create the other side. Even as the structiure swayed unsteadily,
Naruto's hands refused to touch the pile of snow that was on its
opposite.
For a moment Sasuke stared, perplexed as to why he'd
leave something so crucial go unfinished. Then he realized. The hands
that belonged to that side, that could only craft the matching
pieces, they were his alone.
That was why the castle remained
untouched.
Silently, he came closer to the other side of the snow sculpture. His hands moved silently with Naruto's to create and finish the castle, not daring to lift his head and look into the eyes that sobbed so quietly. With each tear droplet that melted the snow, Sasuke felt as if someone had been stabbing his heart with his own chidori.
Once finished, Naruto leaned back and stared, his
eyes widening in shock at the sight of his old comrade. A victim to
numerous hallucinations, Naruto moved a trembling hand foward to
touch the raven's cheek. It was cold, and freezing against his own
skin. Sasuke flinched at the touch and pulled away, his own eyes
meeting with Naruto's.
He paled at the sight of the blond. Naruto
was bone thin, his eyes only dimly sparked, and his face and hands
burned from the fever. Despite all his suffering however, Naruto
could only pull his lips back and smile.
"It's...it's you Sasuke...it's you. You came back...for the castle. You promised..."
Sasuke silenced his blond friend by pulling
him against his chest. Ignoring the feeling of Naruto's feverish skin
burning against his own, the raven hugged him tightly, letting the
tears escape from the blond and drip down his bare skin.
It was a
small price to pay to comfort the one he had so badly wounded.
Quietly he petted Naruto's blond locks, wincing at each painful
sob that tore through the blond's body. He was so stupid. So cruelly
stupid.
Naruto was everything to him. And he had the gall to
leave such a precious treasure all alone to die.
He had brought
him back, and in return Sasuke had tossed him out like a doll.
"Do you love the castle Sasuke?"
Confused, Sasuke stared at the blond, watching the vivid sparkle slowly come to life in his eyes again. Something that no one had ever been able to do. Their stunning beauty took him aback for a moment, watching Naruto with his own painful gaze.
"No Naruto.."
Sasuke took
Naruto's hands in his own and pressed his lips against them, placing
tiny kisses all over the heated skin.
"I love these hands...I
love these hands that crafted the castle. These hands that kept
building no matter how bruised or bloody, that was always there to
give a fist or a kind grasp. I love these arms that extended
themselves wide open for me, even after I'd ripped them
apart.."
Trailing kisses up Naruto's arms, Sasuke brought
himself to the blond's shoulder and gently nibbled at the skin. In
response, the blond let out a small whimper, his knees buckling under
his weight.
"I love this gorgeous face that smiled so
warmly, even years ago when I was overcome with bitterness and pain.
I love the legs that carried you for years, even if they were broken.
I love the heart that beats, the lungs that breathe, the eyes that
see and the ears that hear."
Gently, he lifted Naruto into his arms, letting the blond rest his tired head upon Sasuke's chest. He silently carried the blond back toward his home, earning a terrified gasp from Naruto.
"S-sasuke no! You can't take
me back there!!"
"Why?"
"You'll leave
me...I love you Sasuke! I love you..you can't...you can't.."
Sobbing
harder then ever before, Naruto stared into the raven's eyes with
pure desperate fear. He couldn't fight Sasuke..not now. Even if he
tried, his heart could never take it.
"Naruto....I can't
stay."
"I'll run away with you!! Even if you try and
lose me I'll follow you!"
Sighing, the raven lowered
Naruto onto his feet. He placed a gentle kiss on the blond's lips,
stroking back the soft blond locks that whipped around his face.
"Naruto...if I come back...you will never see me again. I am
a traitor. If you leave, you'll be one too. And your dream will never
come true. So I want you to do this: Become a strong Hokage. Be the
best there ever was, and welcome me back with open arms. When I see
your beautiful face atop that stone mountain, I will return for you."
"Do...do you promise?"
Sasuke scooped Naruto
back into his arms and looked down one final time at those blue
eyes.
"I came back for the castle...I will come back for
you."
Naruto wasn't sure at what point he'd drifted to sleep after that.
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When he
awoke, sunlight peeked in through the wooden boards covering his
window. His body still shivered from fever, and his heart sank as if
the entire feat had been a dream. Sitting up, something dropped from
his forehead that induced a yelp, and peering down at it, Naruto saw
that it'd been a damp, cool cloth that sitting on top of him. He
stared at it curiously for another moment before something else
caught his eye. In the corner of his bed sat a single black rose, a
card attached to its fragile stem. Only one word was written on the
card, in the most elegant and refined kanji he could ever see.
A
broad smile came across his face at the sight of the card and its
simple word.
'Remember.'
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Outside, villagers gathered around the bench, pointing with awe and admiration at the fragile snow statue, shimmering like glass with the sun's rays behind it. But perhaps the most amazing thing about the castle was in the center, a heart shaped hole sat, sturdy enough to keep the rest of the structure up, and defined enough so that from far away, it would leave an imprint at the quickest glance.
It stood
proudly long after winter had ended and even then it melted slowly.
As the last few bits of it faded into puddles one solemn night,
Naruto stood and watched it fall and pool around his feet. He smiled
softly and closed his eyes in content.
For that time...he had a
hand beside him to hold.
The End.
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