I give you this as a piece of something to hang onto until I can get my mind out of its stupor

I give you this as a piece of something to hang onto until I can get my mind out of its stupor. I warn you, I am not a good poet. But these were just hanging around in my doodle book, so I decided to put them up for check. Reviews and concrit are still welcome!

XX

My Beloved

His breath on my neck

His voice in my ear

Whatever he says,

the feeling is clear

With one word you could crush me

And at long last, you do

For now, my heart is broken

Until you mend me anew

The deep and ardent affection we feel

Makes my smile as bright as day

And I know I'm in love with you

For I was too enamored with these emotions not to

Not Right

Tell me I'm wrong

when I say it's not right

Tell me I'm wrong

when it makes no difference at night

Tell me something

Just not what I fear

For my moments with you

We all hold so dear

So tell me you don't care how perfect I am

Tell me you love me

You love me just how I am

Fall Apart

Tomorrow I will call on him

Just to show I'm thinking of him

But tomorrow comes

and tomorrow goes

And the distance between us

grows and grows

So we fall apart

but are still friends

And deep inside

we know it then

The world thinks we're together now

But then they whisper

"Do you know how?"

And so I ask the same thing to you

and if you know the simple truth

That I love you more than anyone else

But if you can not be yourself

Then let it be, my heart will swell

Unlike me, please treat her well

XX

Nothing deep, I know. I'll probably get into that later. But, for now, please just tell me what you thought.

-Alien