Ok this is my new story, yes it's a short chapter but I want some feedback before I get too invested in it. So please review this story. Give me some ideas that you want me to put in. ;)
I cannot believe where I am, my mouth hangs open in an O shape. This all could have been avoided. If I hadn't of taken this stupid case. I wouldn't be tied up, with my best friend lying in front of me out cold. With... them. It started a couple weeks ago.
*******Sometime in January*******
Huffing I walked into the McDonald's. I turned into the women's bathroom, from there I entered the last stall. I pressed the tiles on the wall beside me, I can't tell you the pattern for security reasons obviously. It opened and I was walking through a long plain white corridor as I dragged my hand behind me along the wall. It went down and very low underground with lost of twists and sharp turns. Finally I was at a finger print scanner. I put my finger up to it, it scanned and dinged. The door slid open and I walked into an all metal room, the door slid and closed behind me. It did a full body scan on me, it dinged again but the door didn't open yet. Rolling my eyes I remembered I had to cut a thick line down my middle finger, I reached out to the machine in front of me closed my eyes, sighed and it was over again.
"Hello Maximum, nice to see you." Said a nonchalant voice through a speaker.
They finally let me through as the room started feeling small, I speed walked through, grabbed a tissue from the table beside me, put it on my bleeding finger and stared bitterly at my boss. "Is that really neccessary? Can't we meet anywhere else but this stuffy-very highly secured building."
My boss gave a phony smile, "Why Ms. Ride I like the security of this building I feel most safe here, I wouldn't meet any of my agents anywhere else."
I snorted, 'Ms Ride'. Can't he just call me Max? Or Maximum? I rolled my eyes internally, whatever. "Ok well the sooner we get this going the sooner I can do my job." I hate him. He is so annoying. He hates me because I'm 16 and better at this job then him.
"Yes, yes let's hurry this. So you know you're one of my youngest agents," He paused I think for enthuisiasm, I crossed my arms and blew my brown hair out of my eyes waiting for him to continue. "and one of my best agents, so you get the top most important case."
He handed me a brown folder,
NICK BERKEN
SEX: MALE AGE: 16 HEIGHT: 6'2
PHYSICAL APPEARANCE
HAIR: BLACK EYES: BROWN MARKINGS: SEVERAL SCARS ON STOMACH
HE HAS MURDERED SEVERAL INNOCENT PEOPLE, HE HAS HIS PARENTS CAPTIVE SOMEWHERE, HE LIVES BY HIMSELF AND PRETENDS THEY ARE ON A BUSINESS TRIP AROUND THE WORLD, WHEN HE SAYS THEY'LL BE BACK IS UNKOWN. IT VARIES WITH THE TEACHERS QUESTIONS. YOUR MISSION IS CLASSIFIED MAXIMUM.
MR. BATCHELDER DOESN'T EVEN KNOW.
YOU MUST ENROLL IN HIS SCHOOL. GET CLOSE TO NICK, BECOME HIS FRIEND BUT DON'T BE FOOLED BY WHAT HE SAYS, HE IS A SERIAL KILLER. AFTER BECOMING CLOSE YOU MUST FIND OUT WHERE HIS PARENTS ARE. THEY ARE VERY IMPORTANT TO US. THEN YOU MUST KILL HIM.
NOW GO.
What is so important about his parents? Whatever it's supposed to be a clean retrieval mission and kill. I am the best here, I can do this. I breathed in hunching my shoulders up then breathing out and relaxing them. I looked up at Jeb and he was attempting to read it. I closed the folder violently. He looked up at me blinking a few times.
"Ok now you may go do your mission." He said in a kind of irritated voice, probably because he didn't know what was in my folder. Ha! Sucks to be him.
"Yes, Jebby I know that." I smirked at him. Gave a little salute and made my way back out. Shoving the chair to the side just for the fun of it on the way out. This will be interesting.
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-LanieBaLanie