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A.U.R.O.N
"Don't turn away..." A woman in shadows stepped forward to the back of a man standing in front of her. He turned around madly as she spoke. "Don't give into the pain..." The man stepped back, hurling a wicker chair in the lady's path. His breath seemed non-existent.
"... Stay with me... No... stay away.." He said, not above a whisper. His voice was torn.
"Don't try to hide, although they're screaming your name..." The woman leaned down, emerging from the shadows she was hiding in. She had a roman-esque toga on, and her hair was long and green, and slightly wavy. She had earrings on that were blood red and arrow shaped. She slid the chair away from her path, and touched the man's face gently. He flinched from her touch, his peppered hair waving in wind coming from nowhere. His eyes shut tight. He stammered out his warning again.
"Go... go away..."
"Don't close your eyes... God knows what lies behind them.." The room went dark. "Don't turn out the light... Never sleep, Never die..."
~*~
Auron snapped open his eyes, and sat up in his bed at the Inn the group was at tonight. He started to scratch his elbow, and glanced at Tidus. He had complained to Wakka that the beds were 'itchy' when they all went to sleep. He then glanced to Wakka, who was still gripping his blitzball while he slept. Idiot. He let out an audible chuckle to that thought. Throwing off his covers and taking a walk seemed like a good idea to him, so, he did so. He stepped out onto Luca's streets.
Wakka and Tidus were here for a quick Blitzball tournament for a weapon Wakka just had to have, something called the World Champion. He also needed a prize from the tourney for a Jupiter crest, or sigil, to activate the weapon and remove an ability, and so Rikku could customize it. Yuna was also excited, because it would allow one of her aeons to break a damage limit to fiends. Well, as long as it helped, Auron went with it.
He started out toward the docks, in the pouring rain. The only thing besides the rain that could be heard was his footsteps, and an echo of someone else's in the stadium nearby. He igrored it and kept walking. He slipped in a puddle of water. A wicker chair was laying in the street. He ignored this too, and picked himself up and kept walking. More footsteps were behind him. He, not surprisingly, ignored this too.
"Wait!" A familiar voice squeaked. There were three extra footsteps while they were close, and one was a large staff hitting ground. "Why are you out in the rain, Auron??" He turned around, studying the two with his good eye. It was Yuna and Rikku.
"What are you two doing in the rain?" He said, returning the question. He didn't know why he was in the rain.
"Well, Sir Auron.. you woke us up when you left."
"Yunie's right." Rikku nodded.
"Well, I was just taking a walk, so.." Auron was ready to say anything to get them to leave.
"Well, we'll walk with you!" Rikku smiled. They walked for a few minutes in silence.
"What time is it?" Auron looked down to Rikku. He knew she had a watch.
"It's about 3AM." The footsteps, and loud echoes were heard from the stadium again. "What was that?"
"It's in the stadium. Should we go check?" Yuna turned to Rikku, then to Auron. "Someone might be hurt."
"Yes." Auron said, then headed down a maintenance tunnel. Yuna and Rikku followed.
~*~
"You'll never... never curse anyone again..." A middle aged man held a knife high above his head, ready to bring it down on a small body, laying on the ground. "I've chased you this far..."
"Chased... C.H.A.S.E.D.."
"Stop... stop that!!"
"Cursed. C.U.R.S.E.D." The small girl looked at the man with cheerless eyes. "Sorry. S.O.R.R.Y."
"You're not sorry." His gray eyes were expressionless. "You've never been sorry." The child's eyes glowed dangerously.
"S.O.R.R.Y." She said, as heartrending as she could possibly sound. The man then brought down the knife, she swatted his hand away, knocking the knife to the ground.
"Death... For you..." The man snarled, going to plan two. Smother her.
"Stop. S.T.O.P," She choked out. A magic circle in a clock shape appeared on the man, and stop was cast on him, and he was flung away, by a strange force. The child's eyes closed heavily. Auron, Yuna, and Rikku stepped into the bottom of the stadium. Yuna and Rikku instantly ran to the young girl.
"She looks hurt, Yunie. Can you heal her?" Rikku looked at Yuna with a pained face.
"Maybe. I... hate to say it...but she may be to far..." Yuna had the same pained look.
"No. She's not." Auron walked past them, and to the man. "He's been stopped."
"Yeah." Rikku looked curiously at the man. "How do we fix him?" Auron walked past him, and picked up the girl.
"We don't."
Afternotes: I'm sorry if this really did go to fast, and I know it's really short, but, I like to put a little something up before I start writing long chapters... people tend not to review for me. *stands in corner, sobbing* Why?! Am I not likable???!! *composes self* Okay. I'm fine. I would like you to go find the review in the sub-menu and click go, right now. *waves* G'bye.