Captured Sequel- Rewritten
I try to keep from writing at the top of the story so I will keep this short. I am rewriting this story because I didn't like how it was coming out the last time. I hope this comes out a lot better!
Also, as it says, THIS IS A SEQUEL of my story Captured. So if you want to make sure you know what is going on, then please make sure you read Captured.
Chapter one- A normal day at school
Yasha awoke abruptly this morning to his mother separating the curtains which allowed in the relentless sunshine. "Mom five more minutes." Yasha whined turning his face into his pillow. He was a mirror image of his father.
"Nope you gotta get up. Starting of another day of school." Kagome said cheerfully.
"I don't want to go. I never feel like I belong there." Yasha said.
"Nonsense, you have friends there and you have to learn." Kagome went into the closet to grab some clothing for him.
"but…" Yasha shut up, he never told his mom something about school, the one thing that made him hate school more than anything.
"But what hun?" Kagome asked turning around.
"Nothing." Yasha turned away. He was given a special name…dog boy, that's what he was called.
"Besides you have Kyubi and Azami!" Kagome reminded him. "Don't you want to see them at school? They seem like nice people."
"Yeah those two are nice." Yasha said while sighing.
"Now let's go, I made breakfast today." Kagome said while throwing her child's clothes at him. "Meet me down there in a few minutes." She said before walking out of the room.
He sighed as he put on his uniform. "They may be friends but the rest of the children…" he mumbled before he heard his mom call his name. "Coming." 'I still feel like I shouldn't be here. Something doesn't feel right. I should be doing something different with my life. Here, I am different than the rest. I feel almost like this place wasn't meant for me.' He thought as he made his way downstairs.
Yasha ate his meal while Kagome cleaned up around the kitchen. "Your grandmother and great grandfather are still asleep so I am going to drive you to school today." She said while washing the dishes.
"Alright." Yasha said through a mouthful of food.
Kagome drove Yasha to the school with no talking between the two. Yasha just stared out the window at the cars and buildings that were passing by. "We're here." Kagome said stopping the car.
"Alright. See you when I get home." Yasha said getting out of the car.
"Cheer up hun." Kagome said. "I have a gift for you when you get home today."
"Alright mom." Yasha said slamming the door.
Once inside he heard a voice behind him, "Hey Yash, How was your weekend?" Yash…that was a nickname given to him by his only two friends.
Yasha turned around to see a young girl come running up to him. "Hey Azami. It was alright. How about yours?" Azami…she was the only girl that would come near him, she always wore long sleeves no matter how hot it was. She reminded him a lot of his mother.
"It was alright. I saved up enough money to buy a new video game!" Azami said smiling.
"Cool. Where is Kyubi?" Yasha asked.
"I don't know." Azami said while shrugging her shoulders.
The bell rang for everyone to get to class. "I will see you later."
"Later." Azami yelled before running off.
Yasha went down the hall walking to get to his class. This was the part he hated more than anything. Around this time he would hear tons of voices and he knew he couldn't do anything about it. "Look at dog boy." "Is he is still around?" "I thought he left when he didn't come on Friday." "Rumor has it that he is part werewolf." "That would explain why he is so smart."
Yasha couldn't take it anymore. He ran down the hall to get to his class with tears starting to come down. Sure enough he may be around seven but he was actually so smart he was forced to skip a few grades. Alright so it was more than a few grades… now he was in junior high. This was his first year there and so far he got picked on more than anything. He couldn't tell if it was his age or his looks that made him get picked on but they would never do it to his face, it was always behind his back….or so they thought. No one knew that he had the heightened senses.
He walked into his first class with a forced smile that turned directly to a frown when he saw a sign at his desk…it read "dog boy" and had a crudely drawn dog on it. Yasha sighed as he ripped the sign off and sat down. Everyone laughed, they loved his pain. This was a normal day for him. Two friends and five hundred enemies…this was life but he couldn't help but think one day this will all change.
After three classes the lunch bell rang and Yasha quickly packed his stuff to get downstairs and meet his two best and only friends in junior high. Azami had just punched Kyubi making him fall into a wall. There was no doubt that Azami was strong for a girl. Azami just put Kyubi in a headlock, Yasha just shook his head, "Hey Azami, hey Kyubi."
"Hey Yash." They said in unison.
"You ready to go?" Kyubi asked as he pretend to punch Yasha.
"Sure am." Yasha said as he started to playfully jab back at Kyubi.
"Boys will be boys." Azami said as she walked to the lunch line.
As they stood in the line the height difference between everyone and Yasha was evident. "Do you ever hate being so small Yash?" Kyubi asked Yasha putting his hands above his head and then above Yasha's to get a better thought of the height difference.
"What?"
"You know you are so small compared to everyone else here. I mean you skipped like three or four grades or something like that. That is a big feat for your age." Kyubi said.
Azami punched Kyubi.
"Well I do feel short and I do get tired of the dog jokes." Yasha said.
"You want us to beat them up?" Azami asked playfully.
"Please do." Yasha said laughing while closing his eyes.
"Alright, it may take us a while to beat them all down; I mean there is three of us and many of them. But we can talk it over while playing a new game at my house." Azami said.
"Sure." Kyubi said.
"I will have to check with my mom." Yasha told her.
"Momma's boy." Kyubi said playfully.
Azami hit him on the back of the head, "He has too, look how young he is."
Once they got through the lunch line they sat down. "I forgot the ketchup and napkins. Be right back." Azami said.
Once she was off Kyubi looked over to Yasha. "Oh man if you were older you would so have her." He whispered.
"What are you talking about?" Yasha asked.
"Yash you can't see it? She looks at you, she stands up for you…she likes you."
"No." Yasha said blushing. "She only stands up for me because of how small and young I am."
"No way man. You have smarts, you are going to look good and you are going to be tall…well when you are older. Plus you have long hair chicks dig long hair. She sees this. She wants you."
Yasha laughed at his friend's remark. "I am too young. I mean she is thirteen or fourteen and I am about to turn seven. That's like a six or seven year difference."
"Yeah I guess so. But wait till you get older. If I was a chick I would go out with you."
"I am glad your not. You would be an ugly Chick." Yasha said laughing.
"Who would be an ugly chick?" Azami asked coming behind Yasha.
"Kyubi said he would date me if he was a chick and I told him he would be too ugly." Yasha said laughing.
Azami laughed. "So what type of girl are you into?" she asked Yasha.
Yasha thought about it for a short bit of time. "Well I never thought about it." He said.
"Oh." Azami said. They all ate lunch quietly until Kyubi spoke up.
"I know what my perfect girl will be."
"What?"
"Well she will be popular, have big boobs, a nice butt and she won't be afraid to show it off."
"Isn't that every male's perfect girl?" Azami asked.
"No. it is just mine." Kyubi said crossing his arms.
"You are so weird." Yasha started to get up and as he put his chair in the bell rang for them to go back to class.
"Yash, how can you always tell when the bell will ring?" Azami asked.
Yasha looked around for a reason. "I just know in my head." He said. He didn't want to explain the heightened sense of hearing.
They all went back to class. At the end of the day Yasha borrowed Kyubi's cell phone and called his mother, "Hello?" Kagome answered.
"Hey mom, I was wondering if I can go over to Azami's house for a bit."
"No not today, maybe tomorrow." Kagome said, she knew about Azami's living conditions and tried to keep Yasha from going over there as much as possible.
"Alright, I will talk to you in a bit." Yasha shut the phone off and gave it back to Kyubi saying, "I can come tomorrow."
"Alright." They said back as Yasha started to walk home.
"You like him." Kyubi said childishly to Azami.
"No I don't." Azami whined back.
"Don't lie."
Azami hit him before they both walked to her house.
And there you have it, my first chapter rewritten. Like I said I didn't like how It was coming out so I decided to redo it and make it go into a whole new direction. I think this will give me a lot more chapters and be able to do much more with it.
As I had said with the last one, I don't like sequels that much so don't expect me to write to many sequels for many of my stories, this was a special occasion due to me killing Inuyasha off.
I don't know what to name it yet so it is still open as to what the name will be.
Please review and let me know what you think of this so far!
