What's up it's your main man DW611 again, there with the first chapter of The Chronicles of SonAmy. This is the edited version of The Chronicles of Sonic and Amy, my first Sonamy story.
I liked The Chronicles of Sonic and Amy, but there where something's that I don't like about it. I saw hell of a lot of mistakes or I didn't follow what I planned at some parts of the story.
To anyone who read The Chronicles of Sonic and Amy and who: left a good review on it, followed it, or favorite it? Well this story is for you guys because I've gave up on that story a long time ago.
When I started The Chronicles of Sonic and Amy I didn't leave an author note. I should've let in the first chapter of that story telling the readers to not leave a bad review because of the plot. I've should've say that that chapter was going to tell you guys the plot, and don't leave a review telling me that it some kind of sexiest story or you don't like the plot.
I'm not doing that mistake ever again, this chapter is going to tell you guys the plot.
If you don't like the plot of the original version of this story? I would advise you to not read this story, or tell me that you hate this story because the plot has been done with a lot times in other Sonamy stories.
If you haven't read the original version of this story well let me tell you what the plot is. Sonic tells Amy he wishes she would die, she heartbroken with that and decides to fake her death and run away and start a whole new life, Sonic is heartbroken because he thinks that he is the cause of her death.
Yes the plot is one of those a man hurts the perfect woman. She leaves him and he's left hurting and wishing that he didn't hurt her. I'm not making trying to make it all men are assholes and women are better. ONCE AGAIN I'M NOT MAKING IT MALES ARE ASSHOLES, THESE ARE MY REASONS.
First I'm a male and I'm pound to be the gender I am. Second I'm also someone who doesn't think of a gender being better than the other.
To me I believe that we're all equal. Man, woman, or children we're all humans beings. So don't come tell me that I'm making a sexist story or the plot has been done many times.
I have nothing against Sally or Sonally. I like Sonally when Sonic and Sally are friends and there is no fighting between Amy and Sally. This story may look like I hate Sally or Sonally. But don't judge the book by the it's cover. I've got a plan for that you just have to wait and read what I'm planning to do. But please don't review and say that, "I'm tried of these Sonamy fans bashing Sally or us Sonally fans."
I'm trying not to bash anything but please give the story a chance to be what it could be. You've been worried about the plot and Sally.
The ages of the characters: Sonic: 21 Amy: 18 Sally: 21
A pink hedgehog was running though the streets of Station Square, trying to go to her house, which was about two or three miles out in the forest. While she was running home she was crying her eyes out. The heartbroken hedgehog's name is Amy Rose.
To her friends Amy was known for her known for her being optimistic, quick temper, and always being captured by the evil Doctor Eggman and being resumed by the hero of Mobius. Also she was known for her not dying love for her hero, Sonic the Hedgehog.
Sonic was the hero of Mobius but he's stolen her heart years ago. When would you ask will the answer is the day he first saved her and ever since then she loved him with all of her heart.
She would always follow her hero every chances she got, because she was got trying to show him that she's the right girl for him and not Sally, his girl friend. She wouldn't catch him most of the time, because her love was The Fast Thing Alive. But the times she would catch him she would give him one of her famous death hugs.
Did she mean to hug him that tightly? She didn't mean to give him hugs that tight. There was something about him that just sparks happiness and excitement thought out her body. He could spark that spark even thought the darkest times.
She would also try to tell him that Sally is a cheater, but every time she did he would just call her a liar and run away.
After a few minutes of running, she finally stops to catch her breath. Trying to catch her breath she was huffing and puffing. This went on for about a good minute or two before she looked up at the sky with a tear falling down her muzzle.
Looking up at the sky remind her to much of Sonic. All the times he would leave her to save the world, she would always look up at the sky. Hoping he was looking at the sky and thinking of her.
Without any warning she was once again found herself crying like a baby, because she didn't want to remember those times. She snaps out of her thoughts and continue running back home. While running she was wishing that she never meet Sonic the Hedgehog.
For ten years she had hope that one day she would be his, so he can love her and likewise she would love him. He would take care of her and she would care of him too, or he would protect her and she would also protect him too.
For those ten years she always thought he was shy, but when he started dating Sally. She thought it was just her age and that he wasn't shy it was just that she was three years younger than he was. After today she has lost all hope in that ever happening.
'Why would he say all those mean things to me?! I guess everyone is right, Sonic and me will never be! I wish that I never met that selfish, cocky, heartless so called hero,' she thought while she ran home.
After a few more minutes she finally makes it to her house. Slamming the door behind her and she ran to her room, and once again slamming the door behind her. Slaying down her door she was crying and sobbing.
She kept crying and sobbing as the memory of what happened today rush back to head.
Flashback
Amy was out shopping to buy her best friend, Cream the Rabbit, a birthday present. While she was looking though all the stores in the mall she saw a very rare sight.
She saw Sonic in a flower store in the mall. That spark once again sparked when she saw this sight.
"SSOOONNNNIIIICCCC!" yelled Amy while she ran towards the blue hedgehog. He turns around to see the pink hedgehog running towards him.
Normally he would take off running for his life, but for some reason he didn't run this time. This shocked Amy but she didn't care all she cared about right now was to be with Sonic.
As she got closer to him she notices that he a look that said, "I'm not in the mood for this shit." That look he gave her made her want to know what's bugging him. Stopping in front of her love and she would asks him.
"Sonic what's wrong!?" With worried all over her face she was looked deep inside his emerald green eyes of her hero. Trying to find out what was bugging him so much.
That's when he pushed her on the cold, hard floor. Hitting that floor hurt her so she wanted to ask him why he did that, but she was interrupted by him yelling at her.
"YOU WANT TO KNOW WHAT'S WRONG WITH ME AMY?! YOU'RE WHAT'S WRONG WITH ME WITH ALL THAT: WELL YOU DATE ME; MARRY ME OR THAT SALLY CHEATER AND YOU'RE THE BEST FOR ME! DAMN IT AMY WHEN WILL YOU WAKE UP FROM YOUR FANTASIES OF US BEING A CAPULE!? I'LL NEVER AND I MEAN NEVER WOULD GO OUT WITH YOU SO…"
He was interrupted by Amy with tears coming down her eyes.
"S-sonic that how you feel about me! I'm sorry that…" before she could finish he interrupted her again.
"AMY DON'T EVER INTERRUPT ME WHEN I'M TALKING TO YOU! DON'T EVEN TRY THAT CRYING SHIT ON ME THIS TIME, BECAUSE IT'S WON'T WORK! YOU'RE ONLY AN ANNOYING FAN GIRL WHO IS OVER HER HEAD, SO TAKE MY ADVICE GIVE UP ON YOUR USELESS DREAM! YOU'RE JUST AS USELESS AS YOU'RE DREAM! I ALSO SICK AND TRIED OF YOU FOLLOWING ME AROUND! TAKE MY ADVICE AND FINDING SOMETHING ELSE TO DO RATHER THEN FOLLOW ME AROUND! NO WHY DON'T YOU DO US ALL A FAVOR AND JUST GO DIE!"
After that was said and done he took off leaving her alone with nothing but her tears. A lot of people in the store came to her side, to comfort her but she tuned all of them out, because she wants to be alone. So with that she gets up and runs out of that store, out of the mall, and towards her home in tears.
End of flashback
Trying to get back up she was breathing heavily while she was crying like a baby. Her legs were like jelly when she tried to stand up, so when she tried to get on her two feet. She fell back down the hard floor making a loud thud.
She just lied and cried for a few minutes, before she made another attempted to stand up. She kept trying and trying to make it on back on her feet, but every time she would fall back on the unforgiving floor with a sicken thud.
After about a dozen attempts later, she finally stood on her feet with tears in her jade green eyes. Slowly but surely she made her way to her bathroom.
She opens her bathroom door, walks in the bathroom, closes the door behind her, and heads towards the sink.
Washing her stained tears away from all the crying she been doing today. After that she looked in the mirror on the wall above the sink. Seeing the pain and misery in her eyes just looking at sight more tears fell.
Just then an idea came to her and she thought to herself.
'If he wants me die than fin I'm going to grant his wish! I'm going to fake my death and run away and start a whole new life! The best part of it's that I'll never have to face that: heartless, no good, hateful, selfish, so called hero Sonic the Hedgehog!'
With that Amy went out of her bathroom and when she looks at her bedroom wall. It was covered with pictures and posters of Sonic. Her bed was covered with Sonic push dolls. That's when a rage came out of her from all the years she bottle her sadness and anger from all the times that Sonic didn't love her.
She started to destroy everything that reminds her of the so-called love of her life. After minutes of destroying her stuff she grabbed her big pink camping backpack. Knowing that she going to need some things for her unknown journey some supplies like: food and water, first-aid kit, clothes, and etc.
First thing that she packed was: her first-aid kit that was in her kitchen, than some food and water, that went to her room to get some clothes, and last but not least every penny she had. The total amount of her money came out as $100 and with that she walks out of her house and into any unknown future.
To whoever read this story, I would like to ask if you would please review. Also that if anyone interested in being my editor for this story that private message me or review and tell me that you're interested in being this story's editor.
If you don't have a fanfiction accounts please email me at dw611 . dman611 at gmail . com? This would save me from doing too much and updating to early like the original version of these story.
I would also very much appreciate it if you would help me a bit. Also before I forget not leave a bad review saying that Sonic was a bit out of character. To find out what made him that mad just keep reading.
Peace out from your man DW611 :P