Well at last no more jokes no more warnings or heads up. It's just i was soo excited to post SOMETHING! yesterday but I have got to respect my loving sister's wishes that I would post the actual story today. so I put up the dumb little heads up deal but my stats tells me not many of you guys bothered looking at. In any case heres the first chapter of the multi-chaptered alternate ending to the four book Breaking Dawn. Now If you read that silly little bit I posted called Things Cooler then Breaking Dawn, you know full well my stance on the last book, but I must tell although I disliked the last book and am extremely happy with the ending My sister and I have concocted, I truly believe this ending is something everyone can be happy with. but you'll have to read it all the way through to understand what I'm talking about.

so please read and I hope you enjoy it to some extent and I'd Really apreciate a review, because as proud and happy and excited about the story I can ever be it would never measure up to your on opinion.

DISCLAIMER: I own nothing, If I had an Edward that'd be pretty cool, but sadly he belongs to Bella and they are forever locked away in the mind of Stephanie Meyer.

Part One: Life

Bella

Battle

Aro looked at beautiful Nahuel and the unsure Huilin after they finished their story and made an almost imperceptible nod. Less than one second later it felt like there were a thousand stabs at my shield and the clearing exploded into action. The Volturi charged at a speed I knew was super human, yet they seemed to be running extraordinarily slowly. Edward leaped in front of me, a feral growl exiting his throat. "No!" I screamed and ran forward. I felt my shield waver, but I didn't care and at that moment I heard a real animal growl and a child cry "Momma!" Theirs pleas stopped me in their tracks and I remembered why it was I needed to stand still.

I saw Felix go right through my shield as if it were water. I saw Caius grinning triumphantly and Aro looking with longing at Renesmee and Edward stare at him in wide eyed terror. I realized that this was not about her being a threat anymore, she and Nahuel were simply to interesting for Aro not to have. I looked at Jacob, without so much as a single word, and saw him bound away into the forest with my daughter clinging to his back,

This was nothing like the battle against the newborns. Half the time Edward and Victoria were moving so fast my weak human eyes barely discerned any of their movements. Now I could see every single horrible detail with crystal clear perfection. As I turned my head to the northeast I saw Emmett smash into Felix. The collision sounded like a thousand bolts of lightning hitting the ground at the same time and felt like an earthquake would ensue the way the earth shook beneath our feet. Then it occurred to me this wasn't the sound of just two vampires fighting, even ones as monstrously huge as Felix and Emmett, this was the sound of vampires at war.

There was another loud crack, this time it was Tanya fighting Jane, or rather it was Kate and Tanya taking turns being tortured while one of them pulled Jane apart piece by piece. Alec was also being occupied likewise except this time it was between Eleazar and Garrett. I extended and retracted my shield as best I could to protect their minds. Nomads and wanders were fleeing left and right. Many of the wolves were engaged with Aro and Caius and Marcus. Sam was playing a terrible game of cat and mouse with Renata, trying to break her shield so they could go in for the kill. With their leaders under attack many of the Volturri guard seemed to be losing faith and were running, only to be taken down by one of the wolves or vampires on the perimeter.

It was then that I saw Edward and Demetri fighting. Edward had the distinct advantage of being able to hear his thoughts but Demetri was moving so fast it didn't seem to matter. Then I heard the horrible sound of shrieking metal and Edward fell forward. Demetri had torn his right arm off and now was going for his left leg. He had the most concentrated look on his face as if he was doing no more then turning a facet rather than mutilating my husband. I waited for my blood to surge, to hear it pound in my ears as I felt the fury flood my face. It never happened, as I expected, but then I did something I never thought I would ever do as a vampire; I tripped. One minute I was running toward Edward, the next I was flat on my face. I looked frantically around to find what I had tripped on then saw that I had not actually fallen over anything.

Leah stood in front of me and was growling at me. I could only imagine that she ran into me to stop me from moving because it was then I realized that my shield was down. I didn't care, if I couldn't save Edward from Demitri I had to die trying. If he didn't survive this, I knew I wouldn't. There was no other alternative so I sped forward and, without so much as a single thought, crashed into Demitri. It didn't occur to me that I didn't know how to fight nor did it bother me how much the whole group really needed my shield, all I could see was Edward, my whole entire existence was wrapped up into this moment. Despite the lack of blood surging in my veins, the bloodlust had completely taken over. Everything I saw was tainted red as I reached for Demetri trying to grab something to pull, to tear, to destroy. However, just as he was within my grasp, he moved with lightning speed, taking Edward with him. He soared into the air, landing lightly on a tree branch. Before I could follow him, he leaned down toward Edward, almost as if to whisper a secret in his ear, and tore his head from his body, as if he had done nothing more than exactly that.

I stopped charging, dead in my tracks, all the bloodlust gone from my mind, all the red gone from my vision. I couldn't comprehend what just happened, but I knew in those few seconds that my world had been utterly destroyed. I stood there, feeling as if I were choking, even though I could not cry, breath or scream. I was beyond emotion or logic or comfort. I only knew one thing; that my life was nothing now, that I was nothing, I had nothing, exempt for two things. In the back of my mind was my daughter smiling and laughing and most of all living. She was me and Edward, perfectly made from our love. I could not allow her to die; I would not allow the last remaining evidence of the love me and Edward shared to be destroyed. I looked at Demetri, holding what remained of my world and charged.

There was only one other thing I had left to myself, I had my life. I had already given it once for Renesmee. I was only so fortunate that I had another one to give for her again. And most of all, I could give it to Edward, the only person in all of time and space that I ever wanted to have it. I jumped into that tree and the force I slammed into with shattered the branch and sent us crashing toward the ground. Demetri looked like a fallen angel as he hit the ground with me on top of him. My world turned red again as I turned every ounce of newborn strength against Demetri. I tore and hacked at his body until he lost an arm and then a foot. He was so full of life as he writhed under me. I never felt much like a predator until this moment as I dug into him with my teeth, my hands anything that would reach him. Then I felt something crash into me from the right. It was Demetri's other arm, it felt like someone had hit me with a sledge hammer. That's when I also saw that Demetri had no eyes. I gouged them out with my icy fingertips but he was still coming toward me. Then I felt him put his arms around me before I could make another move. I saw his mouth snake toward my ear. The last thing I remembered was an enormous sand colored wolf rearing toward us and we both hurdled off into oblivion.

So there you have it the first chapter! I believe I will be able to update sometime next week, but depending on my sister's e-mailing abilities and my final edit cuts it might be sooner or later. hopefully you're intrigued and you'll review or at least keep reading!