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Chapter 1 : Chains

The girl sat solemnly on the peer of the hill, with the moon up in the sky. Chained up against a rock securely and with seals attached to the 6 cuffs to prevent her getting away. Masaru Akane was stuck here for one reason, the leader of the village knew one critical thing, her weakness. She would always freeze up at the very sight of snakes.


I wondered how much longer I would have to stay here, would someone come for me? But I knew no one. I stared at the village children who were staying a safe distance away from me. I've been here for about 7 years so that would make me about 14.

I sighed, being as powerful as I was, I had to kill the enemies of this weak village. My eye element justsu was quite handy since it allowed me to use all 5 of the elements with only a couple hand signs and a good focused look on my target, I could also transform into my target but I had no effect since these seals prevented anything to happen nor did they work on snakes for a reason I don't know.

"AHH! HOW MUCH DAMN LONGER MUST I BE CHAINED UP HERE!" I yelled in anger, the 3 boys watched and me retreated a few steps back in shock and there eyes widened. Was I that scary?

I have barely any memory, this rock, the hill and the weak little village below me seemed to be my past, present and future. I wonder if I had more of a life before I came here, I can't even remember how I winded up here.

Something smelt like it was burning, I didn't have much room in my neck collar chain to move my head, I was able to move a little just barely so I could see that weak little village burning below my hill. I smiled at the very sight. I wonder why they were being attacked. They were no threat and could be captured and controlled if needed, there was nothing special about the village so what were they looking for? Was it not something, but someone?

The 3 boys were running back already to the village, I couldn't understand why they didn't get away from there.

"Haha, they deserved that for keeping me chained up here, but this might turn bad. What if they all die and then no one knows who or where I'm, I'd be stuck here until I starved." I said out loud. I sighed again and closed my eye's to listen.

The flames slowly went down and I could hear mothers screaming for the young and fathers trying to save their families from what ever the threat was.