Hiya I'm rayman21 welcome to all this is my first/trial story so I don't want any slams on my work. However, I do want honest reviews so I can know how I do and any suggestions you might have if you want of course. This is not a crossover but I will use some powers from other shows and this story will be in Japanglish you know Japanese mixed with English mostly with techniques because I don't have a Bata and I'm only first year Japanese .

"Human speech" "human speech flashback"

'Human thought' 'human thought flashback'

'Naruto mind link' 'Naruto mind link flashback'

'Kyuubi mind link' 'Kyuubi mind link flashback'

"Demon speech" "Demon speech flashback"

'Demon thought' 'Demon thought flashback'

Disclaimer:

I don't own nothing except the name Akai that I use for Kyuubi

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Naruto walked in the woods and looked around to make sure no one was around seeing no one he decided it was safe. Naruto is a small boy five years old with long sunshine blond hair pulled back into a ponytail at the bottom that went to his mid back with two stands of hair in front that fell just below his eye brows right above his eyes which were sapphire blue, on his face were six whisker marks three for each cheek. Naruto wore a light red t-shirt with an orange swirl on the back and dark red pants last he wore a blood red choker with the kanji for fox in front and the kanji for nine tails in he back both were black. He only wore the choker when he was out side the village in which he live for the villagers hated him not all but most saw him as a demon.

Five years ago the village he lives in was attacked by the demon known as the Kyuubi no Kitsune: The Nine Tailed Fox and he caused mass destruction and hundreds casualties through-out the Village of the Hidden Leaf when the Yondaime Hokage the village leader showed up on his summoning Gama Bunta the boss toad. The Yondaime was a young man who looked to be in his early to mid twenties if that, he had long sunshine blond hair that spike up and sapphire blue eyes, he was a tall man who wore a white open rob with the kanji for Yellow Flash on the back it also had yellow flames on it that seemed to dance around the bottom, under that he had blue shinnobi armor and sandals. Gama Bunta was a giant toad with a scare on his left eye, he wore a blue jacket that had the kanji for oil on the back, a knife strapped on his right side, and had a pipe in his mouth.

The Kyuubi was a giant fox twice the size of the toad, it had red fur and nine tails swaying wildly behind him, it also had deep blood red eyes with slitted black pupils. After the giant beast fought the fox proved to be too strong reluctantly the Hokage made the necessary hand signs and summoned the Shinigami, the God of Death sacrificing his life to seal the demon inside the body of a new born baby later to be known as Naruto. Even thought the Yondaime or the Fourth request for the boy to be seen as a hero was made public by the Third or the Sandaime Hokage who took office again after the death of his successor the village still took their anger out toward the young demon container.

Said child was now approaching a small water fall with a shallow semicircle base of water that broke off into a stream and stopped. Naruto took in the sight of the water simmering in the moon light the spry from the water were the falls hit the stones were silvery and had a cool refreshing fell as it gently landed on his face with help from a light breeze that flowed through the area. He removed his shirt showing he had no baby fat and a light build of muscles, he then gathered his chakra to revile a seal on his stomach. At first the seal was black and looked like a tattoo, then it glowed blue as the boy's chakra was admitted to it, after that it turned from blue to red that made the boy feel warm as the red chakra left him slowly until it was the size of a basketball.

Water floated up and wrapped around the ball then started to take form once the water stopped color was added and were once stood water was a man. The man had long red hair that was pulled back into a ponytail just like Naruto but stopped at his mid thigh, his eyes were a deep blood red with slitted black pupils, he had the same clothes Naruto had on but also had what resembled samurai chest armor and leg guards on over them, he also had nine tails wrapped into one wrapped around his waist and claws on his hands.

"Hello otosan," said Naruto to red haired man as he hugged him light so not to dispel the jutsu and send his 'father' back inside him.

"Hello my musuko," said the man to Naruto returning the hug, "Happy Birthday."

In the distance they could hear cheering and laughter of the villagers as they celebrated the Kyuubi Festival in memory of those who fell this day five years ago on October Tenth, Nineteen Ninety-Five (I'm aligning the story with our years so when he's twelve it will 2007). The light from the calibration could be seen for miles around.

"Hum they cheer for my death and morn their loss I don't know why they must attack you to make themselves feel better kit," said the man to Naruto.

"Hai, But Akai-otosan didn't you do the same," said Naruto to the man now known as Akai more as a statement then a question, "You attacked the village when that man that smelled of snakes killed your children and his sent led you to the village."

"Indeed I did kit know you suffer because of me," said Akai with sadness in his voice, "But even if I can't protect you I will never let you suffer the same fate as my children and mate for remember you are my child now."

"I will never forget that I am your child," replied Naruto, "I remember how I became your musuko too."

/Flashback/

October 10, 1997

Two year-old Naruto lay in his bed in the orphanage he had just taken their to live by the Hokage who he considered his ojiisan ,his grandfather, who had just left the sleeping boy to attend the Kyuubi Festival that night. After he was gone Naruto was thrown out of bed by the woman running the orphanage and hit the floor hard.

"Oww!"

" Filthy demon slime you'll not be sleeping on these bed," she said in a snarling voice as she grabbed him by the arm and dragged him into a closet, it was small but just big enough to fit a bed and it reeked of cleaning solution. The closet had a hole were a window should be but no glass making it the temperature of outside in this case it was freezing, "This is your room demon I hope you die in it." She through him in and locked the door. Naruto laid on the bed it was stiff and had a nasty smell. He started to cry him self to sleep even though it was freezing and he had no pillow or blanket that was the first of many bad things to come.

After a year Naruto had gone through everything from being teased and beat up to being sliced and stabbed from kids and adults alike day was his birthday so he though he was safe his ojiisan would be here today and no one harmed him with ojiisan around. And so he was correct no one did until that is the Hokage left the orphanage lady sent Naruto out of the orphanage saying he was not to return until she let him.

Naruto walked down the streets of Konaha he came across a large group of villagers who immediately chased him in a drunken rage forgetting or ignoring the law of the third, that whom ever spoke of the Kyuubi to any of the younger generation or Naruto would be executed and so will anyone whom attempted to murder him, they proceeded to stab and beat him. They broke his bones in his arms, legs, and even his rib cage. A couple of ninja that were amongst the group use jutsu to burn him and douse him over and over until ANBU showed up.

Inside Naruto the Kyuubi was awakened his chakra was being forced out of him at an abnormal rate so to spare him shelf of pain he pumped his chakra out into Naruto to heal him. Naruto was still conscious even after everything that happened when the third showed up and picked Naruto up transporting them to the hospital. As the third put Naruto down the boy closed his eyes and fell unconscious then he began to glow red and his body healed almost instantly.

Naruto woke in a strange place it looked like a sewer, the walls were a dingy brown and pipes ran across the ceiling. He stood up water stood knee-high as Naruto walked he found a room with a giant cage. Naruto walked up to the cage and touched the bars they were smooth and warm then he looked up to see the giant fox looking down at him.

"So have you finally come to sacrifice yourself to me the great Kyuubi no Kitsune Lord of Demons human," said the fox in a malicious voice.

"Excuse me big doggy do you know were I am I want to find ojiisan," Naruto said in a scared voice but not because of the fox but that he couldn't find his grandpa, "Please before the mean people get back."

"I AM NOT A DOG YOU MANGY HUMAN!" yelled the fox.

In a sad tone Naruto replied, "I'm not human I'm a monster that's what those mean people said," Naruto broke down crying. The fox saw the boy crying and couldn't help but feel bad the human was a mere child after all he reminded him of his own kit which brought up some bad memories that he tried to forget.

"Now, Now child calm down," the fox's voice went from powerful and threatening to a calm and caring voice as he wrapped one of his soft red tails gently around the boy.

Naruto slowly calmed down his cries turned to light sobbing the warm tail and the feeling of being cared for was something Naruto did not know of course his ojiisan was kind to him but he was too busy and always got pulled away when he needed him most. "You feel soft," said Naruto as he finally settled down and was now feeling sleepy.

"Kit you do not have any parents do you," Naruto just shook his head negatively in responds, "Then I will be your otosan and you will be my musuko is that alright with you?"

"But you're a fox and I'm not," said Naruto.

"That's not a problem," replied the fox as he turned into a human with his tail still around Naruto, "I can be human for you my name is Akai Kitsune."

Naruto swelled with happiness he had a father but there was still a problem he was behind a cage he needed to find him way out. "My name is Naruto Kitsune," At that Akai couldn't help but laugh. "Ok it Uzamaki but now I'm Kitsune."

/Flashback Ends/

"I spent months working so I could bring you to me otosan,"

"That you did kit, oh before I forget I have a gift for you,"

"You do what it is?" said Naruto as he let go of his otosan.

"Give me your clothes kit," Naruto did what he was told and handed over his clothes when he did they glowed red and were handed back.

"What'd you do to them?" asked Naruto

"I made them flexible they will grow with your body and they will regenerate and clean themselves now you wont have to buy anymore clothes unless you want to,"

"Thank you otosan," Naruto's body started to burn a little, "Sorry otosan it's time to go back I promise next time will be longer then longer I keep getting stronger so I can free you." Naruto started to cry.

"Don't cry kit all good things in time,"

"Why don't you let me remove the seal on your cage?" Naruto said/cried

"Because it would kill you if you did I don't want you to die one day kit I'll be free with you alive as my musuko okay." those were his last words as the chakra seeped back into the seal and Akai turned back into water. Naruto put his shirt on and headed back to the village.

Ten Minutes Later…

Things were going go for Naruto he got two presents today one from otosan and one from ojiisan, he got out and in the village without being seen and the orphanage was in view if he could make it in two minutes he could sleep in bed and the door was just a few feet away.

Pow

Naruto ran into something hard he looked up to see a girl with purple hair but what was strange she smelled of snakes. "Watch were your going kid now move you're in my way."

"But you…"

"I said move no one makes Anko late for anything," with that said the girl know as Anko pushed Naruto aside and sped off.

Naruto got up and rushed to the orphanage only for the door to be shut in his face and hear the sickening voice of the orphanage woman call out from behind it, "So sorry demon brat but you're too late…ahahahahah!"

Naruto had no choice but to hide it wasn't safe for him tonight. 'Maybe I can go back to otosan's waterfall and stay there for the night or even on top the Hokage Monument' Naruto kept thinking of places he would be safe until he accidentally walked into a drunk man. The man looked at Naruto for several minutes then recognized him and yell out, "Everyone the demon spawn is loose he's trying to attack me help!" Many villagers and shinobi gathered that were close by and gave chase running after the boy with the intent to kill him. Naruto was faster then the villagers and as strong as a low-level Chuunin but there were some Jounin after him as well and he would be killed if they caught him. Naruto turned a corner to find a dead-end ally now he was screwed big time. He turned and got into fighting stance but was over powered by the Chuunin and Jounin that pummeled him with great force, then used high-level jutsu on him causing him to scream out in pain, and then it was the villagers turn to have at the boy and they were merciless.

They stabbed and slashed the boy tearing chunks of meat and skin form the boys body making his blood spray everywhere. They stopped to admire there work the boy was in shreds, kunai logged in his bones, glass shards in his ripped skin and torn flesh.

Inside Naruto…

Akai was in his demon form, which he hasn't taken since he met Naruto, and was ramming himself into the gate that sealed him while he sent massive amounts of chakra trying to heal his son.

"DAMM THIS SEAL LET ME OUT HE'S GOING TO DIE," yelled the fox.

"And what of it do you care or are you just trying to save yourself," a voice rang through the room one the Kyuubi knew immediately.

"YOU BASTERED I KNOW WHO YOU ARE YOU'RE THE ONE WHO SEALED ME," Akai yelled at the voice.

"Yes and no, Kyuubi I am your seal my voice and being were made to be a replica of that man but I am not him," the seal paper on the cage glowed yellow and a man that was an exact copy of the Yondaime came into existence outside the cage, "Kyuubi you can never be separated from your prison but I can offer freedom from this cage if you pass my test in due time the first shall be now."

Akai didn't have time for this his son needed him, "Listen you I have to save the boy release me for now and put me back afterwards for all I care but just do it!" he yelled his in a dark voice that meant trouble.

"Okay but answer my earlier question first," said the seal, "Do you care about the boy or are you just trying to save yourself from death?"

"Of course I care about the kit he is my musuko," Akai turned human, his chakra already half depleted, not being able to sustain his demon form.

"That was the first test," the seal paper glowed yellow then the seal that was usually found on Naruto's stomach appeared in front of the man he touched it and the symbols in the very middle changed, "You pass, You will be able to leave the seal in a pure chakra for and be a shield and guardian to the boy for the duration of twelve hour then it takes six until you may leave again so spend your time wisely," the man and seal start to disappear, "Oh and one more thing seven years from now you will have your next test be prepared."

Akai wasted no time he jumped through gate turning into a pure red chakra fox, he was as big as a horse with nine tails each at least two-thirds his body length each, and rushed out the exit.

Back in reality…

"Let's finish the job before we get caught," said a random man in the crowd.

"Death to the demon!" yelled another.

As the villagers got close red chakra bursts forth from Naruto, his body started to heal wounds closing all the glass and weapons fall from his body, even his clothes reform the choker on Naruto's neck in plane sight worried the villagers but what they saw next to put it bluntly scared the holy crap out of them, as the seal on Naruto's stomach glowed yellow the middle changing, then the glow changed to orange then blood red as The Kyuubi busted forwarded made of pure chakra. Akai looked at his prey smiling maliciously he was going to kill them and he was going to like it. He stepped forward, the villagers to scared to move, and was about to pounce when he heard Naruto speak to him in his mind.

'Don't hurt them otosan please'

'And why not after what they did to you musuko I should skin each and everyone of them'

'Don't you see they have families too what about them they aren't bad people otosan they are just driven by revenge and the idea of your death through me'

'You have a point kit so what do I do then'

'Ojiisan is on his way just don't hurt them'

'Wait I got an idea'

"Foolish humans," Akai started, "You can't do anything right you waited too long to deliver the final blow now the boy is healing good thing you drew me out now I'll kill him and be free he is the only thing keeping me at bay now watch as I kill your last barrier to your safety." Akai turns around to 'kill' Naruto but some of the shinobi step in the way.

This is the seen Sarutobi the Sandaime Hokage walk up to it shocked not only at the aperients of the Kyuubi but at the fact that the villagers were protecting Naruto.

"Look it's the Hokage!" shouted a villager.

Sarutobi jumped down in front of the Kyuubi and the villagers moved away. "Get back in your seal Kyuubi now!" shouted Sarutobi he stood tall, his Hokage robes and hat adorn his body they were white with red the hat having the kanji for Hokage on it, and getting ready for battle stance.

"Let me kill the child then I'll be free to fight you," said Akai with a wink that Sarutobi caught.

Sarutobi flared his chakra yelling, "RETURN."Akai took that as a signal and retreated back into Naruto. Sarutobi picked up Naruto and took off.

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Yatta! I got my first chapter done (Chibi figure holds up the Peace Sign). Okay in the next chapter Naruto dies story over the end Not had you there didn't I ha.

Thanks for reading goodbye.

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